1、3.骑自行车的一些好处;4.骑自行车需注意的问题。注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。dearschoolmates,Recently,adebateconcerningwhetherweshouldcycletoschoolornothasappearedinourschool._TheStudentsUnionJuly13,20XX【思路点拨】1.从写作内容上来说,一般倡议书中应该包括倡议原因、目的、具体内容和要求等。该写作内容包括(1)观点:骑车上学回家。(toandfromschool)(2)原因:骑车大众化;
2、好处。(common,easyandconvenient)(3)注意问题:安全。(keepa/anspeed;lock)(4)建议。(donthesitate;Letsride)2.从写作手法上来说,倡议书的措辞要贴切,情感要真挚,语言要富于号召性,可多用should,oughtto,may,can等表示建议的情态动词;倡议书的篇幅不宜过长,开头要简单明了,吸引同学们的注意,结尾最好加上简洁有力的呼吁。3.从谋篇布局来说,倡议书写格式和一般书信大致相同,一般由称呼、正文、结尾、落款四部分组成,有些倡议书还根据需要加是了适当的标题。(1)称呼。写称呼的目的是为了明确倡议的对象,一般要依据倡议的对
3、象而选用适当的称呼,如:“dearfriends”,“dearschoolmates”,“deareditor”,“dearstudents”等。(2)正文。倡议意在引起他人的响应,这就要求作者须清楚说明倡议背景、原因,申明倡议目的,做到让人信服,人们才能响应并自觉行动。倡议的内容也要具体,要写明有什么作用。一般倡议的内容可为几点来写的,这样倡议的对象更容易看清,更容易明白,效果也更好。(3)结尾。结尾可表明倡议者的决心和希望或者提出某种建议,但是一般不在结尾用些表示敬意或祝愿的话。(4)落款。在右下方署名发出倡议的集体或倡议者的姓名,然后另起一行,署上发出倡议时间。【范文展示】Recentl
4、y,adebateconcerningwhetherweshouldcycletoschoolornothasappearedinourschool.asfarasiamconcerned,weshouldridetoandfromschool.Firstly,ridingabicycletoandfromschoolisverycommonamongthestudents,forbuyingorrepairingabicycledoesntcostalot.next,sparkingabicycleiseasyandconvenientinourschool,nomatterhowbusyt
5、hetrafficcouldbe.actually,bicycle-ridingisalsoapracticalwaytodoexerciseandprotecttheenvironment.whatyoushoulddocarefullyisjusttokeepanappropriatespeedwhileridingandlockitafteryouareoffit.inthisway,youllfeelitsimpleandrelaxingtorideabicyclewhileyouarehere.donthesitate,everybody.Letsridetoschool.June1
6、3,20XX【习作点评】短文较全面地反应了作者的语言组织能力、书面表达能力,以及思维能力。文中注意了上下文的连贯性,能有效地使用语句间的连接成份,使全文结构紧凑;同时文中也运用了较高级的词汇及语言结构,增强了文章的可读性。Firstly;next;actuallyalso;inthisway让文章浑然一体。asfarasiamconcerned就我个人而言;forbuyingorrepairingabicycledoesntcostalot中for用做并列连词表示“原因”;nomatterhowbusythetrafficcouldbe中nomatterhow引导让步状语从句;whatyous
7、houlddocarefully中what引导主语从句,以上从句的灵活运用,表现作者的语言功底。省略句whileriding以及it做做形式定语,进一步丰富了文章的语言结构。同时,文中也正确地运用了一些好词汇及短语,如:convenient,practical,appropriate,hesitate等。【实战演练】为了有一个美好的校园环境,请你代表学生会向全校发出倡议。要求内容包括以下要点并阐述你的理由。1.别乱扔垃圾,爱护花草树木;2.不得高声喧哗;3.循环使用资料;4.保持教室整洁。1.词数120左右;2.注意文章连贯性。【参考范文】dearfriends,doyouwanttostud
8、yinabeautifulcampus?Soitisourdutytomakeourschoolcomfortabletostudyin.Tocompletethistask,weshouldkeepthefollowingrulesinmind.Firstofall,dontlitteraboutinourschool.itssmellyandattractsflies,youknow.andweshouldprotectourschoolsenvironmentbylookingafterflowersandtreesaround.ofcourse,dontyellorshoutoutso
9、thatwecanstudyinaquietenvironment.itsalsosuggestedthatweshouldreuseeverythingrecyclable,whichismoney-savingandenvironmentallyfriendly.Finally,pleasekeepclassroomsclean,usetheblackboardresponsiblyandrememberthereisnodrinkingoreatingintheclassrooms.Letsalltakeactionnowandcontributetobuildingaharmoniou
10、senvironment.Thankyou!July1,20XX【经典例句】1.Pleasedontsmoke,spitorlitterinpublicplaces.2.Letsmakeagoodnetworkenvironment.Letsbecivilizednetizen.3.Hopefullyyouwilljoinintheactionandextendwarmhelptothoseneedypersons.4.weallwanttogrowuphappilyandhealthily,andforthisgoalwemustdoseveralthings.5.whatiwanttost
11、ressisthateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers.6.westudentsshouldlistenmoretoourclassmates,thuswewillhelpandlearnfromeachother,andafriendshipislikelytobeformed.7.itisagoodideaforussenior3studentstohavedailyexercise,fortakingexercisehelpsusbuildupourbodyandkeepaclearmind.8.TheministryofEducationcallsonst
12、udentstoexerciseforanhoureveryday,inthehopethattheywillhavegoodhealthtoworkfiftyyearsandenjoythewholelife.【妙思巧练】根据汉语提示完成句子1.weshould_(保持平衡饮食).Fordinner,wedbetternoteattoomuch.2.asastudent,iam_(强烈支持)theactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.3.Letsall_(采取行动)nowandcontributetotheprosperityofourmot
13、hertheearth.4.it'sapleasuretothankyouandletyouknow,too,yourkindness_(长久被铭记).5.Todoalotforourenvironment,weshouldtrytousebothsidesofpaper_(一有可能).6.weshoulddevelop_(良好生活态度),forlifeconsistsofnotonlysunshinebutalsohardtimes.7.itisobligatorythatbooksborrowedfromthelibraryshouldbereturned_(两周内).8.inor
14、derto_(充分利用)learningmaterials,theStudentsUnionofourschoolisorganizinganinstructiveactivity.【答案】1.keepabalanceddiet2.stronglyfor3.takeaction4.willbelongremembered5.whenever(itis)possible6.agoodattitudetolife7.withintwoweeks8.makethebestuseof篇二:英语倡议书1假如你叫李华,是某一中学的学生,请你根据以下倡议书的内容写一封英文倡议书,谈谈作为中学生如何履行网络文明公约。(满分25分)1.词数:100左右;2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;3.参考词汇:网络环境networkenvironment文明网民civilizednetizen倡议书各位同学:为了创造良好的网络环境,我提倡大家文明上网,做文明网民。1.汲取有益信息,拒绝不良网站;2.合理安排时
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