浙江中考英语专项突破训练专题五 书面表达.docx

1、浙江中考英语专项突破训练专题五 书面表达见学生用书P43课标要求关于写作，英语考试大纲要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：1清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；2有效运用所学语言知识。义务教育英语课程标准(2017版)对九年级学生所应达到的写作五级要求是：1能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材。2能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的指导下进行修改。3能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。4能简单描述人物或事件。5能根据图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。好作文的特征三化高考阅卷中，一类文(第五档)标准如下：覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结

2、构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。以上是高考书面表达阅卷的指导标准，同样，这也是中考书面表达需要追求的境界。我们也可以将中考好作文的标准简单地概括为“三化”：内容的完整化无论就提纲性写作、图表式写作还是图画式写作而言，考生的作文必须覆盖所有内容要点。表达的条理化一方面，文章必须体现完整的结构(开头、主体、结尾)；另一方面，表达必须层次分明、条理清楚；同时，句与句之间、段与段之间必须有流畅自然的衔接。句式的多样化这主要指长短句的交错，各种复杂从句及特殊句式的使用。当然，句子的多样化离不开词汇的多样化。在英语学习的过

3、程中，输入决定输出，量变带来质变。只有通过大量的阅读，我们才能培养起语感并慢慢形成用英文思维的习惯。杜甫所说的“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”以及那句经典“熟读唐诗三百首，不会写诗也会吟”说的就是这个道理。阅读是输入，写作则是输出。我们不仅仅要多读精彩的写作范文，还应该多读一些课外的文章，可以来自报纸杂志，也可以来自英文网站。只是多读还不够，还要养成搜集背诵好句子的习惯。将那些好句子、好句型背诵熟记并脱口而出，真正变成属于自己的东西。这样在写作实战中才能信手拈来，锦上添花。另外，只是背诵也是不够的，还要模仿和改造。背会一个句型，往往可以造出无限个句子，达到举一反三、变幻无穷的效果。例如：I have

4、 formed the habit of doing sth.造句：I have formed the habit of reading English every morning.I have formed the habit of solving problems on my own.I have formed the habit of keeping a diary in English every day.I have formed the habit of reciting an English sentence every day.I have formed the habit o

5、f brushing my teeth before I go to bed every night.It is widely believed that 造句：It is widely believed that English is becoming more and more important.It is widely believed that the Internet has greatly changed the world.It is widely believed that robots will take the place of humans in the future.

6、It is widely believed that Chinese is the most difficult language in the world.除了多进行书面表达的训练，还应该尝试写英文日记、写英文书信以及用英语在社交媒体上跟他人交流。有一位伟人说过：“实践也是一种学习”。英语里有一句谚语In doing we learn.(我们在做的过程中学习)，说的也是这个道理。其实，就英语学习而言，“使用”是最好的学习。因此，我们可以说In using(English)we learn.必须指出：我们的实践和使用，都是建立在前面多读、多背、多模仿的基础之上，否则，我们写出的将是中式英语。也

7、就是说，我们不但要多写，还要多写正确的英文。因此，从某种意义上来说，Its not practice that makes perfect.Its perfect practice that makes perfect.NO.1体裁：应用文难度：假设你是李华。你校将于近期举办初三毕业典礼，请你代表校学生会给你校外教Paul写一封邮件，邀请他在毕业典礼上讲话。内容包括：说明写信目的；告知毕业典礼相关事项。时间：2019年5月30日上午9点地点：学校操场参加人员：所有初三学生、任课老师以及学校领导演讲主题：给初三毕业生就未来人生提出指导性建议注意：1.短文必须包括所有提供要点，适当发挥；2词数：8

8、0100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Dear Paul，Im glad to tell you that a graduation ceremony will be held in our school.Dear Paul，Im glad to tell you that a graduation ceremony will be held in our school. Im writing to invite you to make a speech at the ceremony.The graduation ceremony will take place at 9：

9、00 am on the playground on May 30，2019.All the Grade 3 students，teachers，and school leaders will attend it.You are expected to offer us some practical advice on how to deal with our future life.I sincerely hope you will accept our invitation and thank you in advance.We are looking forward to your wo

10、nderful speech.Best wishes!Li HuaNO.2体裁：议论文难度：某英文报纸就“是否应该允许父母看我们的微信朋友圈”展开讨论，请你写一篇英语短文参与讨论。内容包括：表明你的观点；说明你的理由。注意：1.短文必须围绕所提供要点展开，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Nowadays Moments of WeChat are becoming more and more popular.Nowadays Moments of WeChat are becoming more and more popular. In my opi

11、nion，we should allow our parents to look at our Moments of WeChat.I regard my parents as good teachers and helpful friends in my life.Whenever I have something to say，Ill turn to my parents.Whenever I come across some troubles，my parents will be there to help me out.Whats more，keeping our parents ou

12、t of our Moments may make the generation gap bigger and bigger.However，inviting them to our world would help them understand us better，and this will lead to a better relationship between us.NO.3体裁：议论文难度：某英文网站发起一场讨论，话题为：机器人将会代替人类吗？(Will Robots Replace Humans in the Future？)请你写一篇英语短文参与讨论。内容包括：讨论发生的背景：

13、人工智能(AI)快速发展，人们产生恐惧；你是否认为机器人将会代替人类；说明你的理由。注意：1.短文必须包括所有提供要点，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Its true that AI is developing very quickly and more and more robots will be used in our lives.Its true that AI is developing very quickly and more and more robots will be used in our lives. Some people

14、 are worried that robots will replace humans in the future.In my opinion，robots will never replace humans.For one thing，robots can only do some simple and repeated jobs for us humans.They wont be able to do some creative jobs well enough，such as writing and designing.For another，robots are invented

15、and controlled by humans.In fact，robots will serve and help us humans and make our lives easier and more pleasant.In a word，robots should be，and will be，our slaves instead of our masters.NO.4体裁：议论文难度：下图是美国某中学校园的一幅标语，请根据下列要求写一篇英语短文。要求：1.你是否认同这句话；2谈谈你对这句话的理解。注意：1.短文必须围绕所提供要点展开，并适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择

16、使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：In the above picture，there is a very famous saying: Do what you love.Love what you do.In the above picture，there is a very famous saying: Do what you love.Love what you do. I completely agree with the idea.I think there is much truth in it.As the saying goes，interest is the best teach

17、er.If we choose to do what we love，we are more likely to achieve success.And when we have chosen something to do，we must try our best to do it as well as possible.If a thing is worth doing，its worth doing well，isnt it?In a word，if we do what we love and love what we do，well win success sooner or lat

18、er.NO.5体裁：议论文难度：China Daily最近报道了广东盲人中学生王子安的故事：他天生失明，但通过自己多年坚持不懈的努力，最终战胜众多竞争对手，被英国皇家伯明翰音乐学院录取。请你在该报道的评论区用英文留言，发表自己的看法。内容包括：1你读完文章的感受是什么？2王子安的故事给你带来什么人生启示？注意：1.短文必须围绕要点展开，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Wang Zians story can be described as a miracle.Wang Zians story can be described as a miracle

19、. To be honest，after reading his story，I feel deeply moved and greatly inspired.His amazing experience makes me think a lot.The most important lesson I learn from him iskeep doing what you like.Its true that everyone has a dream，but that is not enough.More importantly，we must work hard and take acti

20、on day after day.We should never give up no matter what difficulties we meet.As a saying goes，Rome wasnt built in a day.NO.6体裁：说明文难度：下面图表(chart)是方便面在中国近几年的销售数据。请结合此图表写一篇英语短文，向某英文报纸的Have Your Say栏目投稿。内容包括：简要描述该图表所反映的问题：方便面销量下滑；分析人们减少吃方便面的原因是什么。注意：1.短文必须包括所有提供要点，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：I

21、n the past，instant noodles are very popular in China.In the past，instant noodles are very popular in China. However，as can be seen from the above chart，sales of instant noodles in China have been falling these years.As I see it，people eat less instant noodles for two reasons.For one thing，nowadays p

22、eople pay more attention to health.Because instant noodles are regarded as junk food，its reasonable for people to give them up.For another，the quick development of online food delivery industry provides people with more choices.Many people choose to order meals online，which they think are better tha

23、n instant noodles.NO.7体裁：应用文难度：假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Jack很想了解中国人的饮食情况，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1简要介绍中国人的饮食习惯；2询问西方人的饮食情况。注意：1.短文必须包括所有提供要点，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Dear Jack，Im glad to learn that youre interested in the Chinese peoples eating habits.Dear Jack，Im glad to learn that youre interested in the

24、Chinese peoples eating habits. Now let me tell you something about them.Generally speaking，people in the north like noodles，while people in the south like rice.Unlike the Western people，we Chinese use chopsticks to eat food.Interesting enough，more and more Chinese people begin to fall in love with h

25、ot food.That is probably why you can see Sichuan restaurants wherever you go in China.We usually eat a simple breakfast in the morning and a formal dinner in the evening.Would you please tell me some interesting facts about Westerners eating habits？Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua

26、NO.8体裁：议论文难度：如今，通过微信发红包越来越流行。请你就此话题写一篇英语短文，向你校英文校报的Hot Topics栏目投稿。内容包括：1说明你对微信红包这一现象的看法；2说明你喜欢或不喜欢的理由。注意：1.短文必须围绕所提供要点展开，并适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：Nowadays sending or receiving red packets through WeChat has become increasingly popular.Nowadays sending or receiving red packets through W

27、eChat has become increasingly popular. In my opinion，I like this service and it can do much good for people.Exchanging red packets improves peoples relationship.Sometimes，we dont need to say much.A small red packet can send our greetings and thanks.Whats more，exchanging red packets makes our life co

28、lourful.A small red packet can give us a pleasant surprise.In fact，our life is about giving and receiving.No giving，no receiving.And it is always better to give than to receive.NO.9体裁：议论文难度：下图反映了人们对外卖食品(takeout food)的需求状况。请结合此图表，写一篇英语短文，向你校英文校报的Hot Topics栏目投稿。内容包括：1.简要描述图表所反映的内容；2说明你对外卖食品的态度及理由。注意：1

29、.短文必须包括所有提供要点，适当发挥；2词数：80100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：As can be seen from the above chart，many people order takeout food online.As can be seen from the above chart，many people order takeout food online. 32 percent of them order it 1 to 2 times a week，and surprisingly，34 percent of them order it 3 to 5

30、 times every week!Personally，I dont like takeout food very much.In the first place，takeout food is not clean and healthy enough.It is reported that some takeout food is cooked with terrible materials in private workshops.Whats more，choosing takeout food means doing great harm to the environment. Because each time we order a takeout，well use some plastic products.Just imagine how many people order takeouts every day and what a heavy burden we place on the earth!