中考英语考前冲刺书面表达 高热满分作文赏析.docx

1、中考英语考前冲刺书面表达 高热满分作文赏析2019中考英语考前冲刺书面表达 高热满分作文赏析书面表达是中考英语一大难点和失分点。对许多考生来说,书面表达有很大的提升空间。如果能够运用有效的方法和技巧,提高写作水平,考生的总成绩将会有很大的提高。 档次(分值)评分标准第一档(1315分)能清楚地表达自己的观点和想法;语言准确、丰富、流畅,富有个性和说服力;基本无语法错误第二档(912分)能清楚地表达自己的观点和想法;行文比较自然,但语言表达较平淡,个性化和说服力一般,且存在少量语法错误第三档(58分)观点表述不够鲜明,比较缺乏说服力;同时各种语言用法错误较多第四档(14分)内容比较空洞或不切题,

2、词汇和句式用法错误多一 中考书面表达评分标准 二审题五步走做好书面表达,审题是关键的一步。具体来说,准确审题需要做到五步:1.审主题要写出一篇优秀的作文,最重要的是抓住要点,紧扣主题。切忌脱离主题写一些题外话。2.审体裁根据所给情景确定文章的体裁是记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文等。3.审类型就题型而言,中考书面表达可分为:提纲类、图画类、图表类和开放类。每一类题型都有不同的特点,在做题时应采用相应的方法。4.审人称审题时,要弄清应采用第一人称、第二人称、还是第三人称。在记叙自己的事情时,一般用第一人称,这样可以增强文章的真实感;如果以讲故事的形式来写,则一般采用第三人称;另外要注意提示中给出的

3、假定身份,从而确定文章用第几人称。5.审时态一般来说,一篇特定的文章通常有特定时态,如通知常用将来时;日记、故事常用过去时。另外每个句子都涉及时态问题,如表示经常性的情况用一般现在时;表示过去发生的动作用一般过去时,总之要根据内容,斟酌每个句子的时态。三、注意事项1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点主题。 全局观。给文章划分层次,如:总分,总分总2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。注意段落的划分要清晰合理。 3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4. 通常采用一般现在时。 5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。6.完善

4、细节终成文加上过渡语,过渡更自然。正确使用连接词能使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。常用连接词:and, then, after, however, because, finally, whats more, also, in short, in a word等 四提升档次三注意1.熟悉句型特点熟悉英语句子的结构特点很有必要,如五种简单句的基本结构,陈述句、疑问句、感叹句的结构特点等,在平时应多记多练。2.背诵范文收集历年中考英语书面表达题的范文或报刊上的优秀文章,每天花一些时间大声朗读,力争背下来以扩展思路、培养语感。3.有的放矢勤训练针对中考体裁和题材,坚持常规训练,由词到词组,再到句子,连句成段

5、,连段成篇。 五高分指南1审人称、时态、写作要点；罗列写作框架，而后根据框架内容进行写作；教学梳理写作段落结构，如三段式结构进行写作。2围绕课标要求24个话题，复习相关的短语、句子；同时给学生提供一些写作素材如万能句子，过渡连词，谚语等以帮助学生积累写作素材；进一步加强语法专项复习，帮助学生系统、全面的复习语法点；指导学生进行错题纠正，避免过多的语法点错误。 热点writing1.第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按上面的要求给组委会写一封应聘信。 要求：1.热情、有礼； 2.熟悉中国传统文化； 3.英语口语流利。生

6、词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛the Belt and Road Forum for international Cooperation注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。佳作赏析 Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, Id like very much to be a volunteer.All our citizens are loo

7、king forward to this special event. First of all, I promise I will, with great passion, try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture, which enables me to spread our splendid cult

8、ure. Whats more, Im good at English and Chinese, which will play an important role in communication during the forum.To sum up, I believe I can be a excellent volunteer. I will try my best if Im accepted.写作亮点一带一路”是“丝绸之路经济带”和“21世纪海上丝绸之路”的简称。这篇佳作旨在传承中国传统文化。本篇书面表达是一封应聘信 ，这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合

9、逻辑。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，采用三段式的写作模式，总分总。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，这为文章增色不少使文意连接紧密，在学习中注意积累还要注意使用丰富的语句如Thank you for，； look forward to； try my best todo ；Whats more； play an important role in； sum up，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 热点 Writing2目前很多学生整天都忙于学习,成绩却不理想。请根据表格内容,结合自身实际,写一篇关于怎样提高学习效率的短文。学习方法

10、 1.listentotheteacher2.takenotes3.reviewintime4.correctmistakes体育锻炼1.exercise其他方面1.makegooduseoftime2.asksb.forhelp 要求:1.短文应条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,90 词左右。(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数)2.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。3.短文应包括全部信息,可围绕主题适当发挥。 How to improve our study effectively A great number of students cant finish their tasks, wh

11、ich leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions. First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing the lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time, reviewin

12、g in time, doing homework on time and correcting mistakes at any time. Then, its helpful for us to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour (in) exercising our body every day. Besides, wed better make good use of time. Dont put off what we can do today till tomorrow.We should ask the te

13、acher or classmates for help if we have some questions. If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful. 写作亮点】这篇短文关于怎样提高学习效率的短。时态运用非常准确。完全符合题目要求，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。可看出学生的写作功底非常深厚。 热点writing3中考即将来临,许多学生都感到学习紧张，压力很大,他们很苦恼,为此,你们学校以课后放松方式进行了调查，请你以How to relax yourself? 为题写

14、一篇80词左右的短文，向校刊投稿。要点提示：1.学生压力大及其表现；2.学会放松很重要；3.常见的放松方式；4.最适合你的放松方式；5.你的建议。参考词汇：压力 pressure 压力大的：stressed outHow to relax yourself?高分佳作赏析】How to relax yourself ?Now many students often feel much pressure. They always feel tired because they have a lot of homework to do every day. Its important for the

15、 students to relax. It keeps your mind clear and make you not be nervous. There are many kinds of relaxing ways. For example, you can try to have enough sleep, you can listen to your favorite music. You can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.While you ar

16、e studying, dont forget to relax yourself. You will study better after a good reading写作亮点】这篇习作 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点主题How to relax yourself 。 全局观。给文章划分层次,总分总. 层次分明，过渡自然。注意段落的划分,清晰合理。 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 通常采用一般现在时。语言简洁有力内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语如Its important for the students to relax，hang out

17、热点writing四中学校园里的小胖子随处可见，肥胖影响了他们的生活，甚至带来许多健康问题。请你给这些人提提建议，让他们远离肥胖、快乐生活。内容要求：1、必须包括饮食、锻炼和生活习惯三个方面的建议，可适当发挥。 2、字数80左右。 参考词汇：junk food, vegetable and fruit, living habits, exercise.More and more students are getting fat nowadays, 高分佳作赏析；More and more students are getting fat nowadays. it brings trouble

18、to their lives. Some of them even have health problems. If they dont want to be fat any more, they should do something. First, they should stop eating junk food. They can eat more fruit and vegetables. Milk and eggs are good for them, too. Second, it is necessary to do some exercise. Exercise makes

19、people keep fit and strong. Third, they should have good living habits. Go to bed early and get up early. Dont stay up too late. I hope fat students will live a healthy and happy life.写作亮点】More and more students are getting fat nowadays存在的现象提出 have health problems，接着提出应该怎么做围绕包括饮食、锻炼和生活习惯三个方面的建议。采用三段

20、式结构进行写作。观点鲜提出中心论点主题How tokeep healthy 。 全。给文章划分层次,总分总. 层次分明，过渡自然 采用一些词，first，second，third。注意段落的划分,清晰合理 最后一段一总结全文，达到主题升华。 突出中心思想。 通采用一般现在时。语言简洁有力内容饱满，表达流畅。Writing五现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购。但是网购有利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息用英语以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。优点：1可以在任何时间购物。2只需要一台电脑和鼠标。3方便比较同类产品

21、的价格，可以省钱。4无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。缺点：1网上付款有时不安全。2看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。注意： 1不得在作文中出现你真实的学校名称和自己的姓名。 2语句连贯，表达准确，词数80-100。 3短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Onli

22、ne shopping has several advantages, First you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and a mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also

23、has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isnt always safe. You cant see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because youll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet. 热点writing六当前，全市各学校正开展

24、“好书伴我成长”活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给信息，以“Growing up with good books” 为题，用英语写一篇100-120词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的益处获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐。存在的现象听音乐，看电视，上网，占用了大部分业余时间。发出倡议多读书，读经典好书。向世界传播中国传统文化。让读书成为我们生活的一部分Growing up with good booksMy dear friends,Reading is very important. My dear friends,Reading is very important. We can get

25、 knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us clever and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watch

26、ing TV or going on line to play games. It takes much of their spare time。So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world. Lets start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!写作亮点】本文围

27、绕读书的益处，存在的现象，发出倡议些一篇的倡议书结构紧凑，采用三段式的写作模式总-分-总进行。层次分明，语言简练。not onl but also The more， The more spend，in 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。中国传统文化佳作赏析 Writing一.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack想学习汉语，你推荐他去孔子学院，请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐理由； 2.相关课程，如中国历史，传统文化等。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔子学院Confucius InstituteDear Jack,Im pleased to kno

28、w that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.In recent years, there are more and more Confucius Institutes being built all around the world, which shows that our Chinese culture become much more popular

29、 than ever. As one of the four ancient civilizations, China has long history and creates many splendid cultures. The ancient culture once had great influence on the world, such as Japan, South Korea and other Asian and European countries。Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You

30、 will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing. Also, you have more chances to talk with classmates in Chinese. Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Day and Mid-Autumn Day. Some relevant activiti

31、es will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.I hope you will find my recommendation helpful and attractive.Yours,Li HuaWriting二 .中秋节是流行于中华名族与汉字文化圈诸国的传统文化节日。.请以“中秋节”为题，写一篇介绍中秋节的短文，内容包括： 1.农历八月十五日是中秋节,在中国它是最重要的传统节日之一.2.中秋节家人团聚，吃月饼。月饼种类繁多，美味可口，形状是圆的，像月亮。3.中秋之夜，人们常常在户外边吃月饼边赏月边谈论。注意：词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：家庭聚会 a family reunionThe Mid-Autumn FestivalAugu