天津新东方英语冲刺笔记.docx

1、天津新东方英语冲刺笔记（罗勇）1、包装书写、习惯格式（如书信右上角的时间）、结构（两头小、中间大、字数分配50-80-50）长句 选词造句短句交错使用（15句，1/3写长句，30字左右，长句后接一两句短句过渡）难句：强调句（最好使）2、货真价实情景文字不要跑题（跑题则一半分数以下），审题（三维）提纲图或表上的信息内容衔接（思维跨度不要太大）总述和概述注意句子完整方法多样性一、大作文（一）描绘：描述性语言、可加议论性观点（二）议述：作者意图、个人评价（三）总结（好的：预期一下未来；坏的：采取措施防治）/ 例证具体讲：（一） 描绘：总体背景介绍+细节刻画图或表上的信息1、背景介绍例一：人类克隆（试

2、管婴儿 / 一个老婆四个一模一样的老公，“谁才是真的？”）The problem of the use of genetic technologies on human being has caused/aroused public concern/loomed up/cropped up as a burning/challenging topic.例二：中国青少年犯罪比率上升（表）In the recent years, China experienced/witnessed/was plagued with an alarming increase in juvenile delinqu

3、ency.例三：人和社会的发展与环境的协调（寓意图、对比图）Currently, the topic/phenomenon of environment versus development has been in the limelight. Nowhere is the clash more evident/visible than in China, where the largest population confronts deforestation, pollution and acid rain on a range scale.2、细节描绘例：04年作文题The (a set

4、of) cartoon depicts a vivid scene in which an athlete dripping sweat is rushing to the end. Unquestionably/Undoubtedly/Beyond doubt, he wins the game but it is not the key message conveyed/implied/delivered by the picture. Apparently/Basically, the striking feature is that there is a line marked as

5、both “the start” and “the end”, which means after the player came to the finishing-line, a new race is waiting to him.另：对于图表描述不光要用上升下降等词，还要使用比较句型结构。compare with/toas much as thatmore than, less thanby 2000, the number reach the peak/bottom/the largest number appeared.（二） 议述引言句+分论点、事实信息罗列如：As a matte

6、r of fact, the purpose of the drawer/drawing is to make us pay high/more attention to/rethink/have a fresh look at.例一：兼职part-time jobbrainstormingI. Advantages:pocket money make money follow interest tuition feeson ones own lifemake friends experience custom, culture worklay a solid foundation for f

7、uture career be familiar with new fieldsII. Disadvantages:money: be so young that they are bound to be cheated/be induced to doexperiencescience and technology accelerate/speed up invalid hurt/injury/do harm to/endangerIII. what should we do?a second languagecomputer operation and application后果degra

8、de ones academic performance完整表述：Acquiring knowledge at school without practical work experience is like working on one leg. Occasionally, although a student could attain some experience, nevertheless/yet such experience too frequently is valid or even harmful/a bane rather than a boon. That is to s

9、ay, its demerits outweigh merits. Why? This is natural and necessary. Not only may the acceleration of science and technology bring about new tools/skills with each passing day, but also our work circumstances will change as the society develops. The fact that college students must get a good comman

10、d of a second language as well as master the operation and application of computer requires them not to do part-time job. If they take part-time job, their energy and time will not be enough and their academic will degrade.例二：出国留学brainstorming dream of (doing)原因（好处） the mere way to achieve success c

11、urricula arrangement, teaching method why?/how?/which channel?good learning condition what? up-to-date teaching equipment first-class research facilities world famous professors坏处：money tuition fees 而在国内dont worry about living expense communication: language and cultural barrier 而在国内parents care and

12、 support facilitate例三：盗版问题（最新光盘，四元一张；港台歌曲，十元三盒；流行书刊，一律二折）（乾坤大挪移）Nowadays, the problem of piracy has been in the limelight. According to the cartoon we could find that books, VCDs, tapes and other high-tech products have been copied. When a new product enters into the market, we are bound to discover

13、 that its pirated counterpart will soon swarm/flood into the same market. Never in the nations history has the problem of piracy been more severe than now.There is no denying that pirated commodities has not only resulted in a great loss to producer /manufacturers, inventors and writers, but also di

14、sturb/have a confusion in the market. Why? In that the pirated goods often cost less than the original ones, they enjoy a pretty good selling in spite of their shoddy quality. The genuine ones, however/by contrast, sell poorly. A current investigation/study/ report/survey/poll indicates/manifests/re

15、veals that consumers spend approximately ￥20 billion on the pirated counterparts instead of the genuine ones annually. In addition, such pirated product, especially books, will do harm to/endanger the producers reputation due to too many misprinting.（三） 结论另：养宠物话题With the quickening pace of modern li

16、fe and fierce competition in the society, many people feel a sense of loneliness, not only because of the lack of normal communication in the family but also since absence of intercourse among the neighborhood. Cats and dogs or other pets will fill your void.1、 总结性发言例：养宠物Taking into account all the

17、factors/which has been discussed above, we can safely come to a conclusion that keep-pets has both positive and negative influences. What we must do is to make sure that not only are its benefits encouraged and developed/retained but also we have to strive to/attempt to/endeavor to eliminate its unf

18、avorable impacts.2、 号召与后果例：腐败现象It is time that our government/authority should speak out against corruption and take firm/strong/stern action to punish him whoever takes bribes and embezzles funds. For the official corruption if permitted to continue/If let this situation go as it is will tarnish th

19、e governments popularity/image and may lead to ultimate/terminate downfall.3、 具体的建议例：学生吸烟比率上升In any case, we ought to do more than talk about the rise in student smoking. Our high schools and colleges must bring in some cancer experts/specialists/researchers who run films/slides for students, showin

20、g the dreadful consequence caused by cigarette smoking. We can also arrange/schedule visits to hospital wards for lung cancer patients. In short, we should take student smoking seriously.二、应用文书信语气 / 措辞客气公务信件格式：开头（写明目的）、结尾（期待回音） 词汇 / 语法（言简意赅，长句最多25个字）另：无论是大作文还是小作文，都不用些标题，如果想写则须注意以下问题：实词大写；字母长度大于等于4个的

21、虚词大写；第一个单词的位置，不论实词还是虚词都要大写；动词短语不做标题补充：1、投诉信（换宿舍）Dec.29th, 2004Dear Sir or Madam/To whom it may concern/Dear Mr. Dean Zhang,Im writing to inform you that I wish to moving to a new room next term. I prefer a single room, as I rind the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the r

22、eason for dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends constantly visit him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he too often borrows my private things without my permission. Consequently, I find it difficult for me to concentrate on my s

23、tudies. Im sure that you will agree that I must move into a room of my own, where I would be far from such distraction. I would be grateful if you would take my requirement into consideration, as well as provide me with a room, preferably not in the same building but as near to college campus as pos

24、sible.Yours faithfullyXXX2、感谢信（感谢车祸中及时救助你的人） Im writing to express my heartful gratitude. Im referring to the unfortunate crash, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. But for your timely taking first aid and sending me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequence might have been much more s

25、erious. The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and cuts and bruises will soon be completely better, whats more, the taxi company agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone holds that it is your quick-witted action in the emergency that has led to satisfactory outcome. Although many peopl

26、e talk about the need to be unselfish and to ready to help others, we see few people practicing what they preach. You showed by your selfless action that you are an exception. If there are more people like you, the world would be a much nicer one.3、求购 / 预定信（为朋友庆祝生日） Im preparing a birthday party for

27、 a friend, and writing o inquire if you restaurant could offer private rooms with catering service. If so, I want to reserve one room for next Friday (oct.16th) from 5 p.m. to 9 p.m. The room should be big enough to accommodate more than 50 people comfortably. And the party will be hold in a cocktai

28、l style; therefore a majority of us will be standing up for most of the time. So ten chairs are needed in the room. If there isnt a bar, a drinks table should be set up. For entertainment, Karaoke of Disk jockey may be acceptable. Will you please contact me in two days? You can reach at 13820XXXXXX

29、in the daytime and at 2737XXXX in the night. Thanks for you consideration once more.一、真题回顾预测热点：1、战争与和平，反恐 2、资源、能源、环境保护 3、信息及网络技术 4、纳米技术 5、生命科学二、难度分析05年难度要比04年难一些三、词汇1、生词构词法例：95年（72）validate（valid有效的）；（75）underprivileged（privilege特权） 97年（72）entitlement（entitle使有权利）；（73）astrophysicists（astro-天体，宇宙，ast

30、rology占星术） 00年（71）centralized（central主要的，中心的）；（74）industrialized（industrial工业的）结合上下文（对称位置的单词、词组可做同义推理）例：94年（71）not so much A as B（另through，because of） 95年（74）qualities品质（可数） 98年（73）balloon-borne球载 99年（75）view as视作（同义see as，regard as）跳过不译2、一词多译结合上下文判断例：94年第一句school学派98年（72）clouds宇宙云99年（73）transfer改变，

31、转变00年（75）migration人口迁徙，人口流动（不能译作移民，移民是带政治色彩的）结合搭配对象例：95年（75）gross明显的（如果知道“总的”是不正确的，而又不知道应该是什么意思，可跳过不译） 96年（72）establishment机构（74）elegant完美的，对应（75）elegance 97年（73）extend给予，提供从逻辑性上判断例：94年（74）heaven天空，太空 99年（71）recreated重现词性例：to better（v. 改善）the condition of the workerswe have no time to deliberate（v.思考，考虑）on the issue3、代词注意代词的形容词用法与指示代词的区别例：this（指示性形容词，这个）bag This（指示代词，这）is mine 97年（75）that人们对动物的同情心（注意：当多个代词指定同一内容时，只需译一个） 01年（71）当指代混乱时，要指明所指代内容（注意：如果指代的内容在上下文中不好找，则直接译为这，那，它，它们等）4、单复数问题例：98（71）scientists科学家们四、句子1、时态将来时，“将”安