专题06 书面表达第03期届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项汇编解析版.docx

1、专题06 书面表达第03期届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项汇编解析版2020届高三百所名校好题速递分项汇编（3）之书面表达【广东省湛江市2019-2020学年高三上学期9月调研】假定你是李华，你校英文报现正在招聘编辑，负责撰写中国传统文化板块的文章。请你写封信，申请该职位。内容包括：1 .写信目的；2.优势、特长。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear sir/madam,I am Li Hua, a student in our schooL I am excited to know that your English newspaper willnee

2、d a new editor in charge of articles based on traditional Chinese culture. I am writing to apply for the position.I think I am equal to the job. Firstly, I am good at English, which I believe is a basic requirement for this job. In my spare time, I prefer to read English newspapers, which contribute

3、s to my progress in writing. Secondly, I am crazy about everything to do with Chinese culture. I often talk with my foreign friends and introduce Chinese culture to them.I would be very grateful if you could let me try it. Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封申请信。第1步：根据提示可知，本

4、文要求写一封申请信：假定你是李华，你校英文报现正在招聘编辑，负责撰写中国传统文化板块的文章。请你写封信，申请该职位。内容包括：1 .写信目的；2.优势、特长。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；editor（编辑），traditional Chinese culture（中国传统文化），position（职位），basic requirement（基本要求），apply（申请）及progress（进步）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整

5、洁美观。范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有in charge of（负责），bebased on（基于），apply for(申请)，be equal to（胜任）以及contribute to（有助于、促使），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Firstly, I am good at English, which I believe is a basic requirement for this job.”及“In my spare time, I prefer to read English newspapers, which contribu

6、tes to my progress in writing.”，宾语从句“I am excited to know that your English newspaper willneed a new editor in charge of articles based on traditional Chinese culture.”及“I think I am equal to the job.”，状语从句“I would be very grateful if you could let me try it.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。【四川省宜宾市2018-2020学年高三

7、上学期第一次诊断】假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Lucy来信说，她发现中国人很喜欢红色，但是不确定中国人在什么场合下会使用红色。请你用英语给她写一封回信，告诉她中国人对于红色的理解和使用情况。要点如下:1.红色的象征意义；2.使用红色的场合；3.使用红色的一些禁忌。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter._Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Lucy,I am glad to receive your letter. You mentioned we Chine

8、se prefer red but you were at a loss about when to use it. Here, I will tell you something about it.We do like red, because red stands for happiness and good fortune in our culture. Therefore, People wear red clothes and hang red lanterns in the Spring Festival. And senior citizens even give their g

9、randchildren some lucky money in red envelopes. Besides, young couples also dress red on their traditional weddings.However, be sure to avoid wearing red clothes during some sad events, such as attending funerals or visiting patients.I hope my explanations will be of use for you.Best wishes!Yours,Li

10、hua【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。第1步：根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Lucy来信说，她发现中国人很喜欢红色，但是不确定中国人在什么场合下会使用红色。请你用英语给她写一封回信，告诉她中国人对于红色的理解和使用情况。要点如下:1.红色的象征意义；2.使用红色的场合；3.使用红色的一些禁忌。第2步：根据写作要求,确定关键词（组）,如：mention（提到）；prefer（更喜欢）；be at a loss（茫然）；stand for（代表）；red lanterns（红灯笼）；senior citizens（年长的人）；be of use（有用的）等。第3步：根据提

11、示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如You mentioned we Chinese prefer red but you were at a loss about when to use it.运用了宾语从句；We do like red, because red stands for happiness and good fortune in our culture.运用了原因状

12、语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。【四川省南充市2019-2020学年高三上学期统考】假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Tom要来南充参观，想让你给他推荐一家酒店。请你给他写封邮件:，内容要点如下:1.酒店的位置:2.推荐的理由；注意: 1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom.Im more than pleased to hear_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom,Im more than pleased to hear

13、 that youre coming to pay a visit to my city, Nanchong. Now let me recommend an affordable and comfortable hotel to you: Tianlai International Hotel.Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarters drive from Nanchong Airport. As a result, its convenient for you to get a

14、round.On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, youll feel free and at home. You are free to use WiFi and hot water is available all around the clock.Wish

15、you a happy stay here.Yours,Li Hua【解析】这是一封推荐信，是一篇提纲式作文，时态是一般现在时。第一步：审题：考生应认真审题，把握文章中心，明确写作要点和所使用时态。这是一封推荐信，写作要点：1.酒店位置；2.推荐理由。写作过程中注意一些句式和短语的使用，写作过程中注意一些连接词和过渡句使用，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。第二步：关键词组：1. be located on坐落于.2.a five-star standard hotel五星级标准酒店3. feel free and at home让某人感到宾至如归等。第三步：连词成句：1.Tianlai Int

16、ernational Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarters drive from Nanchong Airport.2. On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.3. Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, youll feel f

17、ree and at home.等。第四步：衔接自然：使用过渡词（组）As a result；On the other hand；Most importantly等。此外还要注意字数，逻辑关系。这篇文章作者运用了较多高级句式，使人眼前一亮，让文章自然润色，如：使用宾语从句Im more than pleased to hear that youre coming to pay a visit to my city, Nanchong.；使用祈使句Now let me recommend an affordable and comfortable hotel to you: Tianlai In

18、ternational Hotel.；使用过去分词作定语Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarters drive from Nanchong Airport.；使用It作形式主语As a result, its convenient for you to get around.；使用非谓语Accommodated there, youll feel free and at home.等。句句逻辑紧凑，过渡自然，显示了作者高超的英语能力。【黑龙江省哈尔滨市第三中学校2020届高三上学期第

19、一次验收】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将来中国旅游。他对中文名字非常感兴趣，并且很想拥有一个中文名字，他向你求助。现请你给他写一封信，包括以下内容:1.介绍中文名字的特点；2.给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现真实姓名。Dear Jim,Im very glad to hear that you will come to visit China._Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im very glad to hear that you will come to visit C

20、hina. There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country.A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. Unlike an English name, the family name is usually put first. And then a gi

21、ven name follows. As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you. The family name is one of those shared by the largest number of Chinese. The given name means the sun in China.I hope you will like your new name and have a really good time in China.Yours sincerely,Li

22、Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.介绍中文名字的特点；2.给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，很高兴听说Jim要来中国，介绍拥有中国名字的重要性。第二段，1.介绍中文名字的特点；2.给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。第三段，表达希望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: culture，share, mean energetic, characters，significance，

23、expectations，kind, smart energetic, fit in with, consists of ,the family name, given name ,besuitable for。第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的同位语从句There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country. which引导的非限制性定语从句A Chinese name usually consists of two or three chara

24、cters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. As引导的原因状语从句As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:however，besides，then。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的同位语从句There is no doubt tha

25、t a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country. which引导的非限制性定语从句A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. As引导的原因状语从句As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for

26、 you。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【山西省祁县中学2019-2020届高三8月月考】某英文杂志正在举办Whether should high school students stay up late to study?为主题的征文活动。假如你是紅星中学李华，就“高中学生该不该熬夜学习“在学校作了一次调查，結果发现60%的同学认为应该熬夜学习，认为晚上学习安静，效率高，而还有40%的同学认为晚上不该熬夜学习，熬夜不利于身体，对学习没有多大帮助。况且白天又容易打瞌睡，得不偿失。现在请你给报社写一封信，反映此现并发表自己的观点。注意：词数100左右.參考词汇：gains cannot make up for losses得不偿失Dear Editor._