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1、cet46作文真题2011年6月英语四级真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3. 我的建议Doing Shopping Online With the development of the In

2、ternet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing. Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done. You dont even have to step out of the room. It seems all easy and quick.However, peoples opinions vary on this trend. Some believe that on line shopping is time and money sa

3、ving. With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient. Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts. In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line s

4、hopping is beyond all doubts. In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so wed better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying. In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information. 文章点评： 这是一篇“中等偏上”的

5、学生作文。 本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。 下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处： 1. 文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。 但是，以“With the development of the Internet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。 2. 微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options 简化成With plentiful

6、selections 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多； 高分版 With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities. Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people wh

7、o dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who dont have much circulating funds. They dont have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. How

8、ever, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain. It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. Its of great ur

9、gency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated. 点评： 本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是

10、考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。 按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题； 第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二

11、段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。 整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他是难题。 外教版 Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companieslooking to expand their markets. Also, its convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face s

12、hopping experience. Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrati

13、ng. For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing. 点评：作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。 第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。 第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都

14、做了描述。 综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪光词汇，但是，内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。2011年12月英语四级真题Directions:Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledNothing Succeeds Without a Strong Willby commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the

15、 world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Outlines:1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命3.学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who

16、 wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to ones success.Although “All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of

17、fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize lifes goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establi

18、shment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.四级写作体裁有三种：论说文、应用文及图表作文。论说文有三种：问题解决

19、型、观点对比型和现象描述型。本次四级考试的作文题目为 Succeeds Without a Strong Will属于论说文。本文的整体内容可以分为三段，中心应该围绕“where there is a will, there is a way”，首段可以通过“戒烟很简单，但是不坚持，也是不能成功的”得出“万事都需要坚持”，从而确定整篇文章的中心论点。第二段主要应聚焦于论证“意志坚定的人才能够完成伟大的使命”，可以通过以下几个句子，如Life is not all roses;Adversity is a good discipline.等句子来论证：坚定的意志是成功的必要阶段。此段为文章的主体

20、段落，需要在保证文章通顺、逻辑清晰的基础上，注重语言的精彩，可以通过复合句的使用和排比的修辞方法来达到。第三段论证“学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才”，此段可以将文章的中心议题和大学生的生活贴近，联系学生自己的日常生活，从而更具现实性和普遍性，学生也可以从中得出“学习并非坦途，需要坚持不懈的努力”。2011年6月英语六级真题英语六级作文题目Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsf

21、ollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow: 1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2.其目的各不相同3.在我看来Thejobmarkettodayisincreasinglysophisticated,requiringworkerstohavespecializedknowledgeintheirfields.Asaresult,becomingcertifiedisatrendamongtodaysjobseekingyouth.Moreandmorepeople,studentsespecially,lookatobtainingcertificationasameansto

22、gettingabetterjoband,therefore,enjoyingbrighterfuture.Thereareasmanycertificatesastherearefieldsofstudy.LawyerswilltaketheLSAT,businessmajorswilltaketheGMATtofurthertheirstudyintheUS,andthosewhostudyaforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,mighttaketheTOEFL,TOEIC,oranynumberofEnglishcertificationexams.Isthisnec

23、essary?Or,isthe“certificationcraze”justatrendthatwilleventuallypass?Imyselfhaveobtainedtwodifferentcertifications:oneinJapanese(N2)andanotherinteachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage(TEFL).Bothofthesecertificationshavebeenbeneficialingettinggoodjobs.Therefore,itismyopinionthat,trendornot,theresultsofbecom

24、ingcertifiedarerealandcanbeinvaluableinopeningupfutureopportunities.作文点评：1.逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)”“分析问题(背后的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。2.本文的亮点非常多，用语非常地道，用英语思维催动出来的英语文章，才是真正的极品。相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章，这篇文章是很美味的，强烈建议大家背诵下来。大家记得天龙八部吗?鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。总之，我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句，其实表意明确，用语地道的文章，就肯定可以拿到高分2011

25、年12月英语六级真题Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend, the first four sharpening the axe. You should write at lea

26、st 150 words but no more than 200 words. The Way to Success【标准版】 The Way to Success Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has beautiful life, like pretty house, cool cars and great power. It

27、s indeed one way to define success. But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing. To achieve this kind of success, one has to bear in mind three essential prerequisites, namely knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and hav

28、ing the diligence to realize your dream. In other words, they are what why and how of success. Its really luckily good for one, especially for the younger generation of today to find their dreams, follow them and in the end, make them come true and become successful. Although its never easy to succe

29、ed, progressing with the strong will and diligence towards the right direction, youll be the one! 【作文解析】 这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题what is success?,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨，而是直接引出了自己的观点：success is doing something one really feels like doing. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看，行文流畅，用语规范地道。 本篇亮点： 1. 排比词组或句子的运用：

30、Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for. namely, knowing where your interest really lies in, possessing the strong will to pursue your interest and having the diligence to realize your dream.2. bear in mind 3. lie in 4. strong will to pursue your interest 本文有待提高之处： 1. 文中人称有些混

31、乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者，有些又以第三人称指代，建议统一。 2. 结构上，一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的三段式，即，提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者基本上遵循了这个原则，但第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想，并没有起到很好的总结作用。如果第三段，作者可以与第一段的成功定义相呼应，例如：即使没有这些身外之物，但心灵上的满足，梦想的实现，才是我心中成功的本质。 整体看，文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散，有待提高。 【高分版】 The Way to Success First essaystream of thought type The Way to Success Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. And here comes our question, what is the way to success? A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of succ