高考英语书面表达及参考范文A卷.docx

1、高考英语书面表达及参考范文A卷2016高考英语书面表达及参考范文A卷第一部分 A【甘肃省天水市第一中学2016届高三上学期期末】某中外合资企业在一家英文报上登了一则广告（advertisement），招聘一名秘书，基本条件如下：1、年龄不超过25岁，未婚；2、身体健康。身高要求：男性1.70米以上，女性1.60米以上；3、高中以上文化程度；4、有较好的英语基础，英语口语能力强者优先录用；5、擅长写作，具有从事文秘(secretary)工作的能力。假如你叫王强，看了广告后想求此职。请用英语写一封求职信，针对招聘条件介绍自己的情况。Dear Sir,_Sincerely yours,Wang Qi

2、ang【答案】Dear Sir,After reading your advertisement for a secretary in todays English paper, I want to offer myself to the position.Im 19 years old, male, unmarried. Im 1.75 meters tall, strong and healthy. Ive just graduated from a senior middle school of Beijing. Last year, I got the first place in t

3、he English composition contest in West District, Beijing. I type quite well and can use computers skillfully.Id like to be your secretary very much. If these meet your requirements, Ill be very thankful for your kindness .Of course Ill work hard and well if I can hold the position.【名师点睛】本篇范文结构合理，行文流

4、畅。包含所有的要点，有效地完成了要求的任务。但句式不够丰富，第一人称开头的句子太多，高级句式中状语从句较多，定语从句和名词性从句运用太少。另外文章中的串联词运用一般，显得文章不够流畅。提纲类作文的命题特点和应试策略 ：1认真审题和分析所给的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。 2每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。 3提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句，然后围绕主题句进行扩展。 4搜集材料支持主题句。材料可以是例证、亲身经历

5、、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，即要“扣题”，同时要具有典型性，能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。考点：考查提纲列作文 B【吉林省松原市油田高中2016届高三上学期第三次模拟】假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境，请你根据以下信息回信。 1多跟同学交流沟通； 2积极参加学校活动； 3向老师寻求帮助。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris， I am sorry to hear that you ar

6、e having trouble fitting in at your new school_ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Chris,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates a

7、s much as possible. In this way , you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lately, faced with some

8、 tough problems, you might consider asking our teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本文属于应用文中的书信，同时也属于提纲类短文。要求以李华的身份给笔友Chris写信，回答他关于如何

9、融入新环境的问题。所以要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.知悉对方转学以后难以融入新环境。2多跟同学交流沟通；3积极参加学校活动；4向老师寻求帮助。考生可以适当添加一些书信转换常见的串联句，如在文章最后可以加上I am looking forward to hearing from you.等句子。建议文章分成三段，第一段叙述知悉对方的转学以后不适应新学校的情况。第二段阐述具体的建议。第三段表示希望自己的建议有效，并期待收到对方的回信。【名师点睛】本篇范文是难得一篇优秀的提纲来作文。本文从题材来说属于应用文，要点都给出来了。文章的结构也不存在较大的难题，所以范文在遣词造句方面下足了

10、功夫。最突出的就是文章中的高级句式，如非限制性定语从句. in more activities, which usually involve teamwork.；分词做状语用法Lately, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking our teachers；同时范文中串联词的使用也是一个亮点，第二段中提出了三个建议，作者使用了first、second连接了这些要点。考点：考查提纲类作文第二部分 A2015训练题：书面表达 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。What can you do when

11、 you are unhappy? If you want to let out your anger or pressure by breaking things, you just do. Now a school in Nanjing has built a “stress wall” to help students who feel unhappy due to heavy schoolwork or for other reasons.The leader of the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footp

12、rints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.“These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they dont get along well with other students. When under stress, the body gets ready to either run or fight and becomes very

13、 nervous. Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress,” he said.“Tests and homework make me sad,” said a junior girl, “I cant wait to hit the wall. It will help me a lot with my problems.” However, another girl student who wouldnt give her name said,” The wall wont help because it

14、cant talk,” and she added,” I need to talk to someone when Im sad.”【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括这段短文内容；2. 以约120个词就“Should the stress wall be built”主题发表你的看法，包括以下要点：（1）学生的压力来源；（2）是否该建此墙并说明理由；（3）提供一些其他有效的减压方法。【写作要求】1. 可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子；2. 作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】书面表达：The passage convey

15、s to us that to help students with stress, a school built a “stress wall” for students to relax, towards which students hold different opinions.Nowadays, students are under great pressure, mainly coming from their school work as well as peer relationship.As far as I am concerned, building a stress w

16、all is not appropriate. For one thing, even if students punch the wall heavily, the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out. For another, this may lead to the results of solving a problem with violence of fixing a bad temper, which has bad effects on their health growth.In order

17、 to decrease our stress, here are my suggestions. To begin with, we can design more outdoor activities for students to get rid of the stress. Whats more, it is strongly suggested that we can take part in some sports events, which can surely help students out of stress and improve their health at the

18、 same time. All in all, only when we let out the stress properly can we live a happy school life. B书面表达训练为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为

19、你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. _【参考范文】Hi worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment.The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to

20、worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoo

21、rs and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rig of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards lift can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.第三部分 A【福建省福州市2014高考

22、英语3月质检试题】书面表达(满分25分) “百善孝为先是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。提示：1你认为“孝”是什么? 2以你自己或身边人的事例说明。注意：1文章开头已给出，不计人总词2文中不得透露个人和学校信息；3词数1 20左右；4参考词汇：孝顺filial pietyIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China 一、评分原则1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分；2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分

23、；3词数少于100和多于150的，从总分中减去2分；4评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性；5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；6如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、内容要点1. “孝”是什么；2. 举例说明；3. 总结。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑

24、。完全达到了预期的写作目的。2125分第四档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。1620分第三档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。1115分第二档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一

25、些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。610分第一档未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。15分0分0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【参考范文】One possible versionIt is universally accept

26、ed that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly. Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my

27、grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave

28、 my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again. My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need. B书面表达训练某英文报正就“智能手机的利与弊”这一话题进行讨论。请你根据提示用英语写一篇短文给该报投稿，并就合理使用智能手机提出自己的建议。好处了解更多信息，缓解压力坏处缺少面对面交流，影响工作，学习，休息你的建议？注意：开头已经给出，不计

29、入总词数;字数100左右;适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Smart phones have become part of our daily life. _.【参考范文】Smart phones have become part of our daily life. No matter where we are, we can see people busy playing with their smart phones.Smart phones benefit us. They not only help us get information around the world more quic

30、kly and easily, but also escape the pressures of life.However, every coin has two sides. When we spend too much time on smart phones, we dont have time to communicate face to face with our friends or family, and our life, studies and work will be badly affected.In my opinion, we should avoid using smart phones too much except for the purpose of learning. Meanwhile, its necessary for us to take part in more outdoor activities.