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1、A级考试历年真题作文解读2013年12月（求职信）说明：假设你是David Wang,给BBC公司写一封应聘函，应聘该公司销售经理（Sales Manager）岗位。内容：1. 告诉对方你获得求职信息的来源；2. 简要陈述你的学历、工作经历、特长等；3. 希望得到面试机会；4. 告诉对方你已随函附上个人简历；5. 告诉对方你的联系电话和电邮地址，期待对方回复。注意信函格式!My name is David Wang and I will graduate from University in the year of 2010. My major is secretary in English

2、s my great pleasure to have this opportunity to improve our mutual understanding. During the three year college study，I tried my best to learn all kinds of knowledge，and weigh the hard work of my teachers and myself; I have mastered English listening，speaking，writing and reading ， I have a good comm

3、and of Business English and the basic theory， public relationship of secretary. Meanwhile, in order to enlarge my knowledge, I always read some newspapers and magazines about business and trade， and I used to do some representative of business in my spare time. At the same time, I learnt computer sk

4、ills during my summer vacation，and now Im familiar with Office 2000. It is my three year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Also my three-year college life that makes me rich in knowledge，and its also my three-year college life that makes me form my life attitude. Honesty, Trust, Dili

5、gence is principleof how to be a a college graduate，I believe “where there is a will, there is a way”, and I will try my best to do a good Sales Manager in my business. So I sincerely hope that I can make a position in your company so that I can serve for the company in the future.Yours faithfully,D

6、avid Wang2013年6月作文Mr. Peter, Hello, Im Lucy, on the morning of June 23, 2013 I received from Mr. Browm 10:00 James SPK phone, said he has sent to us their new product, want to learn more about our use case, also hope you can put forward the suggestions and opinions. They recently will visit our comp

7、any, hope we can arrange a meeting and reception, James Mr. Browm next week, not in the company, after you see the call him 139 810 90789.2012年12月（申请信）假如我是陈红，按以下内容写封申请信，从网上了解到H P K 公司召招聘管理员，认为自己有资格，2自己具有作为管理员经验，3期待有面谈机会，4偌需要填申请表，请告知，5表示感谢Hello ,my name is have Learned from the Internet that thecompa

8、nyPHKCRecruitment administrator think I have the candidates eligible for the have work experience as an , I repeatedly get the scholarship, and published several papers. I also served as a leader, group secretary, has a strong organization and coordination. Strong sense of professionalism and respon

9、sibility to enable me to any difficulties and challenges face the look forward to the opportunity to interview with I need to fill out the application form,Please tell me right is very grateful of you.2012年6月June -17 -2012Dear Thank you for your letter of June 7, TouSuBen particular company employee

10、 services, the company to the situation has been investigating, and shall order the relevant employees, bring to you many inconvenience please understand that we can be your loss compensation, and hope you will accept my most sincere apology, our company will also ensure that will never happen later

11、 in this kind of matter, I hope you and the general consumer customer supervision. Thank you for your support. 2010年 12 月(辞职信) 说明：假设你是某公司的员工Susan Waters，根据下列内容给公司人事部经理MsBush写一封辞职信。写信日期：2010年12月19日 内容： 1表示要辞职 ， 2解释辞职的原因(自拟)； 3告知离职的时间(一个月后)；4对于在工作期间所得到的指导和帮助表示感谢。注意信函格式!Words for reference: 辞职 resign v

12、. / resignation n.Part V Writing December, 19th, 2010Dear Ms. Bush,I am writing to inform you of my intention of resigning from my current position in the company, effectiveJan. 19, 2011. The past several years at the company have been rewarding as I worked my way up. I will always remember my years

13、 here with affection. My parents and I will move to another city where we will set up our own business and begin our new life. Sorry for my leaving. Thank you for your guidance and help during my association with the company. Yours sincerely Susan Waters难点分析辞职信要求语言正式。本篇作文的关键是把每一个要点都交代清楚，语言不能模棱两可。开头明

14、确表示辞职的意愿，并且交代了确切的离职时间。第二段对自己在这个公司的经历做一个简单的总结，最重要的是交代清楚辞职原因。本文要求考生自己拟一个辞职原因，要注意：辞职原因最好是双方都比较容易接受的客观原因，尽量不要流露出对公司的不满。第三段对公司的培养和帮助表示感谢，要不卑不亢，自然收尾，显示个人的礼貌和修养。 2010年6月（商务信函）一、商务信函说明：假设你是一个医疗设备公司的经理。你收到一家代理公司的经理Peter Smith先生的信。他想了解你公司的情况，你写信向他介绍并表示希望他能作为你公司的代理。公司简介： 公司名称：广安医疗设备有限公司 成立年份：1980年 公司总部地址：中国神州市

15、 主要产品：医疗测试设备 雇员人数：1000名，其中120人从事研究与开发 销售市场：大部分产品销往东南亚和南美 Words for reference： medical testing equipment 医疗测试设备 headquarters总部 engage in 从事 Southeast Asia东南亚 agent代理Dear Mr. Smith, Thanks a lot for your letter, and its my pleasure to give you some information about our company. Guang An Medical Equip

16、ment Company Limited was set up in 1980, with the headquarters in Shenzhou City, China. We have 1,000 employees, and 120 of them are engaging in R & D work. We manufacture medical testing equipment, and most of our products are sold to Southeast Asia and South America. We are planning to enter the E

17、uropean market, and since you are interested in our products, would you please consider being our European agent? If you have any ideas; please dont hesitate to let us know. Hope to receive your reply soon. Sincerely yours, Wendy Manager of Guang An Medical Equipment Company Limited难点分析商务书信要求语言得体、正确

18、，内容全面、完整。写作本作文时，应紧扣题目要求，把题目所述的各个要点表达完整。书售开头处先交待必要的背景内容。第二段顺便介绍公司情况，注意不可遗漏题目中各要点。第三段落实到对对方的期望上，表明希望对方做代理的愿望。最后是寒喧语。套话总是免不了的，关键是要用得得体恰当。 2009年 12月（询问信） 说明： 根据下面中文信息写一封询问信。 发信人：Mark Zhang 收信人：MrSmith 发信日期：2009年12月22日 内容： 1Mark在最近的广交会上认识了Smith先生； 2Mark对Smith先生所在公司展出的新款手机很感兴趣； 3询问产品的详细信息，包括产品的规格、颜色、价格和功能

19、等； 4说明该款手机市场销售前景看好； 5希望和对方建立长远的商务关系。words for references: 广交会 Guangzhou Trade Fair 规格 specificationsPart V Writing （参考范文）December 22, 2009Dear Mr. Smith,Its so nice to have known you at the Guangzhou Trade Fair last month!I am really impressed by the new type of mobile phone you displayed in the fai

20、r. I wonder if you can tell me the details of this product, such as its specifications, colors, price and functions.Im quite sure that this type of mobile phone will sell well in our market, so I am really interested in establishing a long-term business relationship with you.Your early reply will be

21、_highly appreciated.Sincerely yours,Mark Zhang 难点分析 应用文写作要特别注意写作发生的具体情境(写给谁?写信的目的是什么?)，设身处地，详加考虑，就可以做到“简洁、牢L貌、完整”(concise, courteous, complete )。 写好A级作文，最重要的是格式正确，内容不遗漏，语言没有错误，不必有许多自由发挥。用简明的英语句子把提纲要求的内容表达清楚，予以合理组织，就可以了。 这封信可以分三段来写： 第1条是第1段，属于“套近乎”联络感情的内容； 第2、3条是第2段，是询问信的主体； 第4、5条可以在第3段合起来写，说明自己的希望。

22、至于信件本身的格式，套用即可。 2009年 6月（询问信） 说明：假设你是某公司人事部职员王林，为安排一次职工的假期旅行，向某旅行社写信询问有关事宜。 内容： 1询问旅游信息(如：线路、价格、折扣等)； 2告诉对方参加旅游的人数和时间安排； 3索要相关的资料，特别是行程安排； 4告之联系方式。Words for reference: Travel Agency 旅行社注意信函格式！Part V Writing （参考范文） June 21st, 2009Dear Sir or Madam, We are arranging a tourist trip for all our staff me

23、mbers next month, and I am writing to inquire about the tourist packages you can offer. We have 30 people and can have a S-day trip starting from 15th. We hope to go to some famous scenic spots, hopefully in Yunnan. Will you please tell me what tourist routes you have? And what is the price for each

24、 person? Can you give us a discount? It is highly appreciated if you can send us brochures about the tour arrangement you offer. Please contact me Sincerely yours, Wang Lin Human Resources Department of ABC Company难点分析 本题要求写一封商务信函。因为这是向旅行社询问有关旅游资讯，可以看作是两个企业之间的初次联系，所以文体比较正式。 本题难点在于按题目要求把有关咨询的内容表达充分、完

25、整，而且还要连贯自然。语言上比较正式，但不必过于老套，可以简洁一点。注意掌握常用的索要产品目录时需要的表达方式，如：It is highly appreciated if you can send us.; I wound appreciate it ff you could send.等。2008年 12月（投诉信） 说明：请以王华的名义向商店经理写一封投诉信。内容如下： 投诉人：王华 投诉对象：第一百货公司 投诉商品：SQ200手机 投诉原因：不能拍照，不能收发短信，等等 投诉要求：退货或更换 提出希望：及早回复 写信日期：2008年12月21日注意信函格式!Part V Writing

26、（参考范文） December 21st, 2008Dear Manager of the First Department Store, Last month, I bought a SQ200 mobile phone in your department store. After I used it for several days, I found there is something wrong with this mobile phone. It could not be used to take photos or send messages. Now, its function

27、 is limited to receiving calls, which does not worth the price I paid for. The problem of this mobile phone has greatly affected my normal life. Would you please let me know whether your store can replace another one for me or take it back? An early reply would be appreciated and I hope that my prob

28、lem will get your prompt consideration. Yours faithfully,Wang Hua难点分析 本文要求写一封投诉信。投诉信的格式要求不高，一般只包含了最基本的日期、收信人称谓和写信人署名等。难点在于文中信息的表达和处理，行文中需要作者对信息有所安排，分清主次(先提出问题，然后提出要求和希望)并且要包含所有表达要点(如手机的型号)。 除了格式之外，还需要注意一些常用的表达方式，如要求对方尽早回复可以使用句型An early reply would be appreciated等。此外，还需要注意在编写投诉信时的原则，即conciseness(简洁)，

29、completeness(完整)，concreteness (具体)，clarity(清晰)和consideration(体谅)。当然还需要注意表达的恰当、委婉和正式，忌使用非常口语化的词。2008年 6月（商务信函） 说明：假定你是新蒂服装公司(Cindy Garment Co)销售经理丁志文，根据下列内容给客户(MrJohn Smith)写一封信函。 写信日期：2008年6月22日 内容： 1告知因原材料(raw material)价格上涨，产品价格上调； 2原定货物仍维持原价；3希望今后继续向本公司订货； 4随函寄去调整后的价目单(price list)5表示歉意，敬请谅解。 注意书信格

30、式。Part V Writing （参考范文） June 22nd, 2008Dear Mr. John Smith, There is an increase of the price of the products because the price of the raw material has risen, recently. However, the price of those goods that you have ordered keeps the same. I sincerely hope that you will continue to put in orders in

31、 our company in the future. I would llke to say sorry to you and your company for the increase. And enclosed please find the revised price list. Sincerely yours, Ding Zhiwen Sales Manager of Cindy Garment Co.难点分析 本文要求给客户写一封信函。商务便函的格式要求不高，一般只包含了最基本的日期、收信人称谓和写信人署名等。难点在于文中信息的表达和处理，行文中需要作者对信息有所安排，分清主次并且要包含所有表达要点。另外当署名需要包含职位时，一般附于署名之后。 除了格式之外，还需要注意商务信函中常用的一些表达方式，如“随函寄去”通常翻译为enclosed please find,“订货”通常使用order或put in orders等。就本篇作文而言，还需要注意时态的使用，需要理清哪些事情发生在前, 哪些事情发生在后。2007年 12 月假定你是李明，给北京市奥组委写一份申请函，申请做一名奥运会的志愿者。写信日期：2007年12月23申请函需要包括： 1个人信息(年龄、性别、特长、外语能力、社会活动经历等) 2