中考英语作文热点素材范文12 梦想.docx

1、中考英语作文热点素材范文12 梦想热点12 梦想 中国梦无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的思想带来了极大的影响。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：梦想。【预测题目】（一）某杂志正在征集文章, 主题为中国梦, 我的梦。每个平凡中国人的梦想汇聚成中国梦, 中国梦的实现在于我们努力实现各自的梦想。你的梦想是什么?你打算怎样实现?你的梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献, 能使祖国发生怎样的变化?请你以中国梦, 我的梦为题, 写写自己的梦想、计划以及将来祖国的变化（如环境、教育、科技、生活等方面）。要求：1. 词数80词左右, 至少使用两处比较级；2. 不得出现真实的姓名或校名。Chinas

2、 Dream, My Dream_【参考范文】Chinas Dream, My DreamEveryone has his dream. My dream is to be a teacher. I will try my best to study hard .I want to let every student study happily. Now our rivers are cleaner than before. We have our own cars in almost every family and our lives are better than before. It

3、is convenient for us to go out every day. Now we also learn in more ways, we can learn knowledge on the Internet, videos and so on. For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. I think life in our country is getting better and better.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献

4、，能使祖国发生怎样的变化?等，注意要有比较级的运用，对于比较级的相关用法要熟悉。2.例文点评：例文通过对梦想是什么?打算怎样实现?梦想能为祖国的未来做出怎样的贡献，能使祖国发生怎样的变化等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3.高分亮点：词组：try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；句型：I will try my best to study hard. /Our rivers are cleaner than before./It is convenient for us to go ou

5、t every day ./For us, the better our country is, the better our life will be. /I think life in our country is getting better and better.【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如try my best；want to let；study happily；go out；in our country等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、

6、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（二）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你给他 回复电子邮件，主要内容包括：1. 你的梦想是什么；2. 你为这个梦想做过什么；3. 为实现梦想你还需要怎样努力。要求：1. 内容要全面，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2. 词数不少于 80 词。Dear Tim,Hows it going? _Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Tim,Ho

7、ws it going? As we all know, its important for us to have dreams. My dream is to be a doctor because a doctor can cure people and even save peoples life.I still remembered what happened when I was a middle school student. I often went to the local hospital to see what doctors were doing on weekends.

8、 Sometimes I even played games about being doctors and patients. Not only was it interesting but also was educative. However, I will try my best to be admitted by my ideal medical university. In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor. Only in this way can I realize my dream better.Look f

9、orward to hearing from you.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，你的美国朋友 Tim 给你发来电子邮件，询问你有何梦想。请你以李华身份给他回复电子邮件，首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：save peoples life.；a middle school student；the local hospital；on weekends

10、.；try ones best to do sth.。句型：In that case, It will be easier for me to be a doctor.；Only in this way can I realize my dream better. ；Look forward to hearing from you.（一）现在许多人在讨论“中国梦”（the Chinese dream），我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真，这需要我们每个中国人的努力，因为我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。请以My Dream为题，谈谈你的梦想。提示：1、你的梦想是什么？2、你为什么有这样的梦想？ 3、

11、你打算怎样实现你的梦想？_【参考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we

12、 learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比

13、较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第一人称。写作亮点：这篇文章主要是以梦想为主题。文中使用了do their best、at the same time、thanks to 、from now on等较高级的短语和词汇，而且还使用了They spend most time on their students. it is not easy to make my dream come true等句型为文章增色不少。（二）梦想有多大，舞台就有多大。人人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是

14、什么？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1）你的梦想是什么；2）你为什么有这样的梦想；3）你打算如何实现自己的梦想。2.要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数100左右。_【参考范文】My dreamEveryone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher. Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their

15、 best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learnknowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when Igrow up because I admire teachers. I know it is easier

16、to said than done. But I have made adecisiontostudy harder. I am sure my dream willcome trueone day.【解析】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇命题作文。贴近学生生活，有较大的发挥空间，可以根据自己的不同的梦想做具体阐述，写作时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，写作时要包含题目中列出的几个要点，也可以做适当的发挥。2. 例文点评：这篇短文主要分三段描述。第一段指出自己的梦想是什么，第二段说明为什么会有这样的梦想，第三段为自己的梦想要付出的一些努力。整个文章内容完整，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章

17、的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。3. 高分亮点：短语：want to do；hope to do；not only but also；疑问词+to do；thanks to；grow up；spend on；make a decision to。句型：when引导的时间状语从句；I am sure+宾语从句；how引导的宾语从句。（三）中国梦是目前较热的话题，你们班级对梦想这个话题也进行了一次讨论。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇短文。要点如下：1、人人都有梦想，梦想可大可小。其实，大梦想就是由许多小的梦想构成的。2、作为中学生，我们有各种各样的梦想。这些梦想就

18、是我们的中国梦。3、我们应该努力实现梦想，遇到困难时也不放弃梦想。4、我的梦想是注意：1）文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2）第4要点需用2到3句话做适当发挥。3）词数80左右。(给出的内容不计入总词数)My dreamEveryone has his dreams. _【参考范文】My dreamEveryone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle

19、school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we wont give up our dreams. （I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my

20、dream. ）【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: in fact实际上；be made up of由组成；all kinds of各种；try ones best do sth尽力做某事；give up放弃等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。（四）人类因梦想而伟大，梦想因奋斗而精彩。你的梦想是什么？打算怎样实现？将要去哪里工作？何时开始？为什么会有这个梦想？请以My Dream Job为题目，写一篇短文。要求：1.字迹工整，条理清楚，无语法错误。2.词数70左右。My Dream Job _