雅思写作流程图.docx

1、雅思写作流程图流程图1.首段惯用句子The following diagram shows the structure ofThe picture illustratesThe whole procedure can be divided intostages.It mainly consists ofIt works as follows.It always involves following steps.2.描述流程/过程惯用过渡性词语最后再总结一下流程图特点： 特点一：当前时 特点二：定语从句 特点三：被动语态 特点四：顺序词 特点五：恰当添加 特点六：无总结题目 1：玻璃回收流程【单

2、图】范文 1：This diagram illustrates the recycling process of glass bottles. The whole process is a cycle which can be divided into three main stages.In the first stage，used bottles are collected at a recycling point ready to be transported by a truck. The second stage starts in a cleaning plant，where th

3、ese recycled bottles are sorted by color into green，brown and clear ones and washed by high-pressurized water. When the cleaning is done，the bottles are conveyed to a glass factory where they are cut into glass pieces which are then poured into a furnace. After being heated in the furnace，the broken

4、 glasses are melted into liquid，which flows into a glass mold. Here glass liquid from other sources is added and the molding process takes place. In the final stage，new，empty bottles are filled with liquid，then packed and dispatched to the supermarket ready to be picked by consumers. At this point，a

5、 cycle has been completed and a new cycle will begin.题目 2：蚕生活史及丝绸服饰生产流程【组图】直线型与循环型1）moth在哪里产eggs？产卵用什么动词？moth一次产卵一种还是各种？eggs大概有多大？moth产卵之后如何？2）eggs变为larva动作用什么动词？一种egg变为几种larva？larva复数形式是什么？图中表白larva以Mulberry leaf为food，用哪个动作表白进食动作？3）larva“吐丝”是从哪里“吐”出来，用什么动作表达这种动作？larva吐丝制作cocoon顺序是如何，是由内向外还是由外向内？lar

6、va在吐丝结茧过程中与否还进食？4）cocoon完毕后larva在哪里，处在什么状态？cocoon大概是什么颜色，质地如何？以上问题，问比较细致，甚至有些刁钻，其中本分细节未必须要在真实写作中写出来。但是如果本来就懂这个流程，对于看懂这个流程无疑是有巨大益处，或者反过来讲，如果看不懂这个流程，很有也许发生产生误解，在实际写作中要么不敢用描述每个环节功能，不敢于描述各环节之间关联，要么就直接出错。1）Select究竟在选什么，选取原则是什么？2）Boil目是什么？3）Unwind一步中，300-900米是指每根silk thread有这样长吗？4）Twist作用是什么？5）图中twist和wea

7、ve都指向dye，是要dye两次吗？6）图中select、boil、unwind、twist、weave过去分词都是加ed吗？ 【总述】The diagram illustrates the main stages in the life cycle of silkworm and the procedure of silk cloth making.【两图关系】From this diagram it can be seen that the cocoons are necessary raw materials used for silk cloth production.【分述流程 1】

8、In the first stage，eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks，the adult moths event

9、ually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.【分述流程 2】When it comes to the production of silk cloth，once the cocoons are selected，they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long，which means they can be

10、 twisted together，dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.【小结】 Overall，the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the informaiton by selectin

11、g and reporting the main features.这个流程图简介了巧克力制作过程，种植可可树，收获，发酵，晒，装袋，托运，送去工厂，烘焙，研磨去壳，最后挤压产生液体巧克力。重点词汇在图下方均有显示。The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.【所有小作文第一句话都要用普通当前时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程，stage：阶段，step：环节】Chocolate comes from the cacao tree，which is grown in parts of South A

12、merica，Africa and Indonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接简介cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一：简介过程要使用普通当前时】【流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将关于联两句话连接。】【流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans. Firstly,【流程图特点之四：使用某些表达顺序连接词】when the pods are ripe,they are harvested，the beans are r

13、emoved and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.【三个句子并列：“句子A，句子B and 句子C”。】During the fermenting process，the beans turn brown.【流程图特点之五：要恰本地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来某些内容，否则也许达不到字数规定。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己主观观点，否则会扣分】Next，the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They are then put in l

14、arge sacks and transported by train or lorry.After this，the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.After being roasted，the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. This part is not needed for making choc

15、olate.Finally，the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.时间阶段： after a period of .months/days/minutes，during顺序连词： first，first of all，in the first stage，initially，to begin withSecond，then，next，alsoAfter that，at the same time，in the meantime，meanwhilePrior to，untilthe first

16、 stage involves / in the second stage / in the third stage /in the last stage/The next step in the stage is that.目连词： in order to / in order that；so as to / so thatThe diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process，and how cement is used to produce concrete for buildi

17、ng purposes.(剑8 test3 task1)一、题目类型：流程图-2个二、题目简要内容：图1-水泥生产;图2-混凝土生产过程三、素材积累：连接词：then，afterwards，at the end of，as mentioned above，however代词：the first，the，this，which，where，the latter，the final，the last动词：introduce 放入obtain 获得pass through 穿过go into 进入work with 采用come out 出来begin with 从开始名词：material 材料co

18、mbination 组合element 成分四、论据积累：雅思流程图写作要依照流程图中箭头批示方向而进行写作，描写顺序千万不能弄错。五、构造分析：本图由两幅流程图构成。通过度析可知，考生除了要分别描述制作水泥和混凝土过程之外，还要对这两种办法进行对比比较。写作思路：写作时可以分为四段：第一段改写题目简介重要内容;第二段和第三段分别描写水泥和混凝土制作过程;第四段总结这两种制作办法差别。 The diagrams show the processes and the equipments used to make cement，and how these are used to produce

19、concrete for building purpose. The first step in the cement productions is to introduce limestone clay. These materials pass through a crusher that produces a powder. Then this powder goes into a mixer. After this，the product passes to a rotating heater which works with heat. Afterwards，the mixture

20、goes into a grinder where the cement comes out. At the end of the process，the cement is packed in bags. Referring to the concrete production，the process begins with a combination of 15% cement，10% water，25% sand and 50% gravel. These four elements are introduced into a concrete mixer. As mentioned a

21、bove，the concrete production takes fewer steps than the cement production，however，it is necessary to use more materials than the latter process in order to obtain the final product.The last difference between both processes is that the concrete mixer does not work with heat.改写开头+总结概况（几步）The diagram

22、below shows the process by which bricks aremanufacturedfor the building industry.- The picture displays how bricks are produced through seven consecutive stages. Before/after+doing sth.,.；Before/after+SVO,.1)The pieces/lumps of clay need to be placed on a metal grid so as to turn the big chunks of c

23、lay into smaller ones before falling on a roller. 2)After the big chunks of clay are turned into smaller ones with the use of a metal grid，the smaller pieces of clays fall on a roller. Once/When,.-Once sand and water are added into the small chunks of clay，soft and wet clay can be formed. -Once the

24、bricks are shaped，they are dried to remove excess moisture in an oven for 24-48 hours that might otherwise cause cracking during the ensuing firing process. Having done sth.,. Having been dried in the oven，bricks are fired to moderate temperatures between 200 and 980 degrees centigrade in a compacte

25、d furnace called kiln and then turned to a kiln where temperature rises to the maximum of 1300 degrees centigrade. As the result of doing sth.，.As the result of being cooled in a chamber for 2-3 days，bricks are eventually formed. so thatthe bricks being fired need to be moved to a chamber where temp

26、erature becomes lower for 2-3 days so that they can be cooled and eventually formed. Not UntilNot until the blend of ingredients is conveyed and placed into a mould can bricks be shaped with an identical size. By/through sth./ doing sth.,.-Through being cut by a stiff wire，bricks are initially formed with desired length. The process starts from Subsequently,.，which then. Afterwards,.At that point,.，which，in turn,.It is worth noticing that. Before.Next,. In the following stage，. Also，. Eventually，.