原创学年高一上学期英语开学测试题分类之五 书面表达汇编.docx

1、原创学年高一上学期英语开学测试题分类之五 书面表达汇编高一英语开学测汇编 书面表达（一）假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2条）； 2. 你的希望。 注意： 1. 注意文章的整体连贯； 2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 80词左右。Dear friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should _ _ Thank you! Wang Dong【答案】One possible version

2、：Dear friends, In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and

3、 less. So its quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, wed better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car. In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner! Tha

4、nk you. Wang Dong【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，写一篇环保的倡议书。结合做给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词之纹章前后连贯，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当的补充一些保护环境的措施。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了倡议书的目的是保护环境，接下来介绍保护环境的措施：种树、不要乱扔垃圾、节约用水，骑自行车或步行外出，最后阐述自己的观点，要尽力保护环境。此处remember not to do sth,

5、 as we all know, turn off, had better, try ones best to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。【难度】一般（二）你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. 注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词

6、数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。【答案】Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more inf

7、ormation. If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more

8、about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it. For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!

9、【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，需要我们来介绍学校即将开设的一些特色课程，如足球、英语戏团、模型制作等，还需要我们建议一门课程。题目中给出了这些课程的一些活动的内容及特色，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，第四项课程需要我们发挥想象力，自己来说明课程的活动内容和目的。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态，第二人称you来叙述。写作时，要注意表达合乎英语的规范，注意语句之间的连接，尽量使用一些好的词汇、句型和短语，增强文章的表现力，使文章意思更加连贯，表达更加流畅。写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥

10、想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making、It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.、Besides, you can learn more abou

11、t teamwork、For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。【难度】一般(三)假设你是李杰，正通过 e-mail 和美国友好姐妹校的朋友 Tom 交流校纪班规，请你用英语向他介绍下面的“班级公约”。要求：1、内容完整，书写清楚， 表达通顺，书写规范；2、请勿逐字翻译，词数90左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数。参考词汇：school uniform;be active in thinkingDear To

12、m,Id like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should Its our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.Yours, Li Jie 【答案】Dear Tom.,Id like to introduce my class rules made by us all. First, we should come to school on time in school uniforms. Its polit

13、e to greet our teachers when we meet them. Second, we must listen carefully in class and be active in thinking. Also, we ought to do our homework carefully and hand it in on time. Third, we need clean the classroom often and always keep it clean. And were required to turn off lights and close window

14、s and doors before we leave. Fourth, being friendly is important. Were supposed to get along well and help each other to make progress together. Its our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.Yours, Li Jie 【解析】试题分析：本题是一个提纲作文。提纲作文，要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。提纲是文章的

15、总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文话题是写班规，说明本文写作的是现在的情况，用一般现在时态，第一人称。多用陈述句作描述，不要用祈使句直述规则。写作亮点：本范文按提纲要求，详细介绍了班规。叙述清楚，重点突出。有两大亮点：一是用first, second, third,fourth等，使得短文层次非常清楚，一目了然；二是本文使用的语言非常准确，像：we should.Its polite.we ough to.we are required to. We are suppos

16、ed to等等，用上这些结构说出来的班规让人很容易接受。而且使得本文显得非常生动。【难度】一般（四）根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature3018HotelThings to doFoodIn my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday. 【答案】In my opinion, City A is the better

17、 place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scener

18、y and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时长、气温、旅馆情况，食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。熟悉英语的表达方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简

19、单句。另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市A的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“asas”等。在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。【难度】一般（五）某中学

20、生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。1与他人交流；2参加体育运动；3参加娱乐活动；4其它减压方式。参考词汇：stressed adj. 有压力的注意：1词数80左右；2文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. _ Yours,Li Hua【答案】Possible version: Dear editor,There are many ways

21、for us high school students to relax ourselves. As for me, when I feel stressed, I usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers. Sometimes I will do sports with our classmates, such as riding bikes, going swimming and so on. I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time, t

22、oo. Whats more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe, if we are more relaxed, well live happier, be healthier and learn better.Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，要求将讨论出的减压方式表述出来，并发表自己的看法。写作过程中，适当运用连词使语意连贯。写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: As for；such as；and so on；Whats

23、more等等，还运用了一些主从复合句等等。我们在学习中多注意总结，学会将所学转为自己所用，为自己的写作增光添彩。【难度】一般（六）根据中文和英文提示，写出一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。假如你叫李平，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论有关阅读的话题，他想了解你读书的情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件（书名可用拼音）。提示词语： called， at first， finally， brave， difficulty， share【答案】One possible version:I li

24、ke reading very much and Ive read many books. My favorite book is the Secret Garden.I like the girl called Mary best. She is an unlucky and lonely girl at first， but she finds enjoyments in the secret garden finally. And she even helps her cousin get happiness in the garden.From Mary， I know that we

25、 should be brave enough to face the difficulties we meet and try to overcome them. Besides， be kind to others and share happiness together.What about your favorite book? Would you like to share something with me?【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达根据中文和英文提示，写出一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。在写作时，学生应该介绍自己最喜欢的书籍以及喜欢的原因。要介绍在此书中最喜欢的

26、人物，以及你要向他或她学什么。在表达时，可以运用各种从句和短语。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言运用娴熟。文章里使用了and、but并列句和含宾语从句的复合句，还恰当使用大量的词组如at first， help sb do sth， enough to do，try to do sth等，为文章增色不少。【难度】一般（七） 假如你是某中学初三（1）班班长李华， 请你为校报“英语园地”写一篇短文；记述前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。内容要点：1.部分学生认为上学应该接送，省时又安全。2.部分学生

27、认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身。3.你的看法和建议。注意： 1.词数：80-100； 2.可是当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不要出现真实校名和人名。To Be Sent To School Or Not 【答案】We had a discusion about whether we should be sent to school or not. We have two main ideas.Some students think that it can save the students time if parents send them to school. And pare

28、nts want to make sure the students are safe, especially when the weather is terrible. However, our city is more and more crowded and polluted, so other students think going to school on foot or by bike is the best way . First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and its good for

29、our health. Whats more, if we walk,or ride a bike, There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help make our city cleaner. The streets wont be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot or by bike.【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照讨论的结果描述并发表自己的看法，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含父母开车送学生上学的优缺点、走路（骑车）去上学的优点、并表达出你自己的观点等，语言要诚恳、有