高考英语读后续写微场景描写3解析版.docx

1、高考英语读后续写微场景描写3解析版专题07 读后续写：微场景描写（3）（解析版）场景一：情节转折之惊讶Neverinherwildestdreamhadsheimagined(that.)/thiswould happen.在她最疯狂的梦中，她从来没有想过（那个）/这将会发生。NoSoonerhadhe.than.So.washethathe.Itwashethat.场景二：比赛场景Standingstillontheedgeofthe pool,with numerous audiences cheering and yelling around, hegulped, clutchedhis

2、fistand tooka deepbreath,feelinga quiverofnerves.他一动不动地站在泳池边，许多观众都欢呼着，大喊大叫，他咽了一口气，握着拳头，深吸了一口气，感到神经在颤抖。Astherefereeblewthewhistle,allthecompetitorsbegantorunlikeanarrow.当裁判吹响口哨时，所有的选手都开始像箭一样奔跑。Lapafterlap,fansclapped.一圈又一圈，球迷们鼓掌。Thefinishlinewaswithinsight,soIstarted my final sprint.(游泳、跑步)终点线就在眼前，所以

3、我开始了最后的冲刺。acceleratehisspeed加速场景三：吃东西Thesmalltable,however,wascoveredwithanelaboratelyprepared tablecloth,onwhichsome deliciouscuisine andtwo cupsof coffee (cappuccino卡布基诺)wereplaced,inviting fragrancewafting around the parking garage. Armedwith forkandknife,Itriedthecakecoated with sugar anddottedw

4、ith chocolatefirst.Howyummyitwas! Iuttered. Then havingasipandenjoyingthe aromaofcoffee,weshared the recent condition.然而，小桌子上铺着一块精心准备的桌布，桌上放着一些美味的美食和两杯咖啡(cappuccino卡布基诺)，让香味在停车场飘来。我拿着叉子和刀，先尝试了一块涂上糖和巧克力的蛋糕。”这是多么美味啊！”我说。然后喝了一口，享受着咖啡的香味，我们分享了最近的情况。场景四：水中救人ThencameHarrywithalongoakbranch. Floppingtohiss

5、tomach,he pushed thebranchbeforehimandwriggledtowardsme.Whena slendertop branch wasnearlywithin myreach,heshouted, Grab it. Exhausted asIwas,Istill exertedallmystrengthto stretchout my arms and seizeittightly.Thenextfew minuteswitnessedhis draggingme inch byinchoutofwater.Slumpingdownon the ground,

6、hetooka deep sighofreliefandwipedthesweatsoffhisface.然后，哈利拿着一根长长的橡木树枝来了。他扑到肚子里，推着树枝，向我扭来扭去。当一根细长的树枝快到我时，他喊道：“抓住吧。”尽管我已经筋疲力尽，我仍然伸出我的力量，紧紧地抓住它。在接下来的几分钟里，他一寸一寸地把我拖出了水面。他瘫倒在地上，如释重负地深深地叹了一口气，擦去了脸上的汗水。场景五：追小偷Justforaninstant,thegirlsprangtoherfeetanddashedout.Seeing this,Harryexplodedwithangerandzoomedfor

7、ward,attemptingto chase thegirl.Theterminalwassocrowdedthatthegirlzigzaggedto avoid bumpingintoothers.Harry,however,wasdiscouragedby the people passingbyinalldirections.Drainedofenergy,hewasabout to give upwhenfortunatelytwopolicemenappeared.Soontheycaught the girl, pinnedhertothegroundandhandcuffed

8、her.就一会儿，女孩跳起来冲了出去。看到这一点，哈利怒气冲冲，试图追赶那个女孩。航站楼非常拥挤，那个女孩蜿蜒曲折，以免撞到其他人。然而，从四面八方经过的人使哈利气馁。他精力充沛，正要放弃，幸运的是有两名警察出现了。不久，他们抓住了那个女孩，把她压在地，戴上了手铐。场景六：火灾Fortherewasahighwind,thefirespreadwithfearfulspeed.因为有一阵大风，大火以可怕的速度蔓延开。Itwasnotimeforwords,butforinstantandvigorousaction.现在不是说话的时候，而是瞬间而有力的行动。Nosoonerhadaladder

9、beenplacedagainstthehousethanhe mountedit,dashedthroughthewindowandfoundthepoorchildlyingnearlysuffocatedwithsmoke他刚在房子上放上梯子，就爬上梯子，冲进窗户，发现那个可怜的孩子躺在那里，被烟雾几乎窒息而死。场景七：受重伤去医院AfterdoingaCTscanonmyneck,thedoctorsandnursesclustered aroundmybed,performinganoperationonme.在我的脖子上做了CT扫描后，医生和护士聚集在我的床周围，给我做了手术。场景

10、八：敲门Ipluckedupallmycouragetoknockonthedoor,andout came a/an.man.Aftertakingadeepbreath,hetappedatthedoorsoftly.Thenthe doorswungopenandtherestood.,beamingawarmsmileathim.我鼓起勇气去敲门，走了一个男人。他深吸了一口气，轻轻地敲了敲门。然后门开了，站在那里他对他露出温暖的微笑。场景九：动物动作集锦Thebearcrawledthrough/along.那只熊爬了过去。Withgreatrage,thebearroaredwild

11、ly.熊愤怒地狂哮着。Thehorsegallopedacrossthefield.马疾驰穿过田野。Soirritatedwasthebearthathedashedfuriouslytothefence,seizedittightlyandshookitfiercely.(猛兽袭击)那只熊愤怒地冲到篱笆前，紧紧地抓住它，狠狠地摇着它。Arobin/birdwasperchingonthefence.(鸟类)一只知更鸟栖息在篱笆上。Themouseranaway,squeakingwithfear.老鼠跑开了，害怕地吱吱叫着。Thedogsprangout,leaptonhimandbathe

12、dhiminwetkisses. 狗跳了出来，扑到他身上，湿吻了他。场景十：人物外貌描写男：Hewasatallandbulkyman,withascarrunningdownhisleftcheek.他是个又高又笨重的男人，左脸颊上有一道伤疤。女：She.,withhergrizzledhairfloppingoverhereyes.她她那灰白的头发翻过了眼睛。场景十一：人物动作描写关于说的动词uttered，saidinagruffvoice；blurtout；murmur(嘀咕)祈祷Theyallclosedtheireyes,foldedtheirarmsinfrontoftheche

13、stsand prayed(that.would.).他们都闭上眼睛，双臂交叉在胸前祈祷（那会）。安慰Hecuppedherface,brushingalockofhairoffherforeheadandgentlywipinghertears.他剪着她的脸，拂去她额头上的一绺头发，轻轻地擦去她的眼泪。艰难行走Withoutslightesthesitation,Iexertedallmystrength,ploddingtowardshim,regardlessofthesharppain.我毫不犹豫地用尽了我所有的力量，向他逼近，不顾那种剧烈的痛苦。观察Numbwithshock,Icr

14、ouched,cuppedmyfaceandstaredattheants withoutablink.我吓得麻木了，蹲下来，捂着脸，毫不眨眼地盯着蚂蚁。Henarrowedhiseyes,studyingussuspiciously.他眯起眼睛，怀疑地打量着我们。诉说（倾诉）Icalmedmyselfdown,inthatpeacefulroom,andpouredeverything out.在那个平静的房间里，我平静下来，把一切都倒了出来。模拟训练01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Stevewas the most amazing person in

15、 all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be exactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited!After planning the trip, we gatheredcloth

16、esandsupplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to thecampsite, Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was theranger station(护林站) where theforesterworked.Finally, after a

17、long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from theforest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef, wild

18、rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work.Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increa

19、se the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log (原木) from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped (包裹) aluminum foil (铝箔) around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.The snow had stoppe

20、d, but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dyingfire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened, I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burni

21、ng tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；;；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation._Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we heard a noise i

22、n the forest._翻译小练习：1. 我们的营地在森林深处，离公路很远。_2. 我们在一个偏僻的地方，只穿着内衣，我们的生活用品，包括我们的手机，都烧成了灰烬。_3. 甚至史蒂夫也不知道下一步该怎么办。我们唯一能做的就是坐在寒冷的空气中，想知道如何走出森林。_4. 我们焦急地听着，凝视着黑暗。一辆吉普车出现了。_5. 一个森林管理员发现了火的光，就来检查一下。_6. 我们跳进温暖的车里，森林管理员开车送我们到了护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并能给我们的父母打电话。_7. 从那以后，史蒂夫和我有了更多的野营冒险，但正是在这次旅行中，史蒂夫开始把我当作朋友和平等对待，而不是一个表弟。_8

23、. 我们的友谊一直延续到今天。_参考答案：1. 我们的营地在森林深处，离公路很远。Ourcampsitewas in the deep of theforest, really far away from the highway. 2. 我们在一个偏僻的地方，只穿着内衣，我们的生活用品，包括我们的手机，都烧成了灰烬。We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with oursuppliesburnt into ashes, including our cellphones. 3. 甚至史蒂夫也不知道下一步该怎么办。我们唯

24、一能做的就是坐在寒冷的空气中，想知道如何走出森林。EvenStevewas unsure what to do next. The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest.4. 我们焦急地听着，凝视着黑暗。一辆吉普车出现了。Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. 5. 一个森林管理员发现了火的光，就来检查一下。Aforesterhad spo

25、tted the light from thefire and had come to have a check. 6. 我们跳进温暖的车里，森林管理员开车送我们到了护林员站，在那里我们得到了衣服，并能给我们的父母打电话。We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to theranger station, where we were givenclothesand were able to call our parents. 7. 从那以后，史蒂夫和我有了更多的野营冒险，但正是在这次旅行中，史蒂夫开始把我当作朋友和平等对

26、待，而不是一个表弟。Steve and I had many more campingadventuresfrom then on, but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal, rather than a youngercousin. 8. 我们的友谊一直延续到今天。Our friendship continues to this day.参考范文：Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Ourcamps