大学四级英语高分作文标志课堂用.docx

1、大学四级英语高分作文标志课堂用高分作文标志 1. 四级120-180字;六级150-200字; 2. 是否长短句交叉; 3. 用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老 师的亮点词汇;4.关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如howeve

2、r / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitiv

3、e edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) Example 1 I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a s

4、ea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换very thrilling 替换exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb. be interested in sth. google 替换search an army of 替换a lot of Example 2 The dawn of the new century witnessed

5、the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century

6、witnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的词汇,表达与一致的意思,替换With Advancement 替换development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into Current ( currently )替换now Appeal to sb. 替换sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替换more and mor

7、e people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的 Example 3 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, play

8、ing games, or delivering email. For a start 替换To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 1:individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, ple

9、asurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches

10、to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理用most, if not all ,替换most. 5:

11、a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits ) 10:for my p

12、art ,from my own perspective 替换in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardl

13、y 13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested

14、 in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause. 22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want. 24.

15、pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思) 27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly

16、 / almost impossible 形容词adjs. important-vital-crucial-prominent meaningful-significant-sensible necessary-essential-indispensable good-beneficial-rewarding pleasant-delightful-jolly-exhilarating useful-helpful-assisting strong-strengthened safe-sound-secure convenient-expedient-advantageous comforta

17、ble-cozy profitable-gainful-lucrative active-positive ambitious-aspiring-enterprising special-exceptional-outstanding-extraordinary equal-just obvious-apparent-evident best-greatest-first-class colorful-various-diversified available-attainable-usable different-distinct-diverse popular-welcome-lovabl

18、e independent-self-helping competitive-fightful lucky-fortunate-auspicious carefree-unconcerned-relaxed interesting-amusing-entertaining helpful-assistant positive-active-zealous boring-senseless-annoying tiring-tiresome-fatiguesome lonely-solitary-isolated negative- passive-unaspiring harmful-disas

19、trous-detrimental useless-void-futile limited-short-sighted-improvident worse-inferior 副词advs. generally-normally-commonly-universally widely-well-extensively freely-unrestrictedly partly-partially possibly-probably-likely almost-nearly very-most-extremely especially-specially-particularly generally

20、-widely-universally 动词v. think-hold-claim-argue-emphasize believe-presume-deem practise- fulfill- carry out travel-journey learn-acquire-obtain-gain look for-seek-discover-pursue relate-connect-associate provide-offer-supply ask-inquire-question give-grant-bestow do-perform-deal with-cope with recog

21、nize-ratify-identify succeed-make it can not-be unable to-fail to appear-arise-happen show-express-reveal introduce(介绍)- recommend introduce(引进)-bring in look forward to-expect-long for-aspire through-undergo-come through understand-comprehend support-sustain continue to do-go on doing-keep on doing

22、 remember-bear in mind suggest-make suggestions-propose see-behold- witness advocate-call for think ofas-regard as-look onas tend to do-prefer-be inclined to-be prone to make progress-progress-get ahead-advance mean-can be explained by-The significance is cause-lead to-bring on-result in prefer-be i

23、n favor of flourish-prosper-thrive rise-increase-go up- shoot up give a boost to -optimize-enhance-boost-accelerate 名词Nouns opinion- standpoint-viewpoint attitude-sight-notion bound-range-scope thought-sight-idea chance-opportunity practice-exercise-training college-university-campus student-learner

24、 teacher-instructor-tutor-supervisor Many kinds of-varieties of saying-proverb-aphorism competition-strife-rivalry efficiency-effectiveness belief-faith-conviction independence-autonomy confidence-(self-trust)-(self-assertion) health-exuberance-healthiness strength-power-vigor recreation-entertainme

25、nt joy-pleasure-bliss safety-security-sureness book (cartoon, novel, essay, encyclopedia) experience-story experiment-test-trial freedom-liberty-independence society-world-community knowledge-information-lore energy-strength-potence-vigor environment-surroundings-circumstance risk-venture developmen

26、t-progress-evolution danger-hazard-jeopardy pollution-contamination money-cash-dough choice-selection-option emphasis-focus-stress comparison-antithesis tool-means-instrument suggestion-advice-proposition people-human-man mass(大众) -general public future-aftertime-tomorrow country-nation-state time时代

27、-age-epoch-era activity-action-behavior work-job-assignment-task effect-impact-influence life-living-existence the Internet- the Net- the web-the virtual world advantage-good-benefit disadvantage-adversity-disbenefit function-utility-use reason-cause harm-damage-harmfulness change-transformation mea

28、sure-step analysis-construal trend-current-tide-stream conclusion-summary improvement-reform-enhancement evidence-proof meaning-significance-sense example-instance area-field-domain-realm ability-competence-capacity-capability rule-regulation-order position-place-location-situation question-problem-issue world-society goods-commodity-merchandise education-instruction-teaching luck-auspice-fortune English- the universal language- the global langua