英语 中考英语书面表达培优卷word1.docx

1、英语 中考英语书面表达培优卷word1【英语】 中考英语书面表达培优卷（word）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。要点提示：（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）（2） 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）要求：（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2） 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear students , As we all know , ha

2、zy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution_ 【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause

3、 air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is b

4、ecoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介

5、绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示

6、乘公共汽车。【高分句型二】Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。2书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 oclockat 4:45at 5 oclock.exercise to

7、 keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a part-time job.注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80-100；（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is t

8、he result of the discussion._【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and r

9、ead more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting d

10、iscarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to

11、do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can

12、have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think/ Some think/ A few think使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的

13、单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达 初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。在校老师工作认真负责，充满爱心学生 （至少发挥两点）周末作业作业多舍弃爱好其它活动锻炼，电视愿望 （发挥一到两点）要求：1所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Our school l

14、ife in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work

15、 very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every stude

16、nt is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we cant afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No p

17、ains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，s

18、pend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英

19、语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4（题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb.

20、 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Id like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at h

21、ome. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. Whats more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately

22、for help.Im sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，Id like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixe

23、d time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使

24、表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化

25、课的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _ Yours,Mike【

26、答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, its necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we

27、 shouldnt give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Ch

28、inese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Lets call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional cu

29、lture is facing，its necessary for schools to，we shouldnt，They can raise，it is of great importance to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all

30、 in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。6Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。1、参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it