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1、短文改错系列1短文改错系列1一、短文改错1.Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class I decided to make the best for it I worked h

2、ardly and got along well with teachers and classmates Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivatedMy experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use

3、it that determine who you are【答案】【小题1】disappointingdisappointed【小题2】findfound 【小题3】HoweverBesides或Also【小题4】forof【小题5】hardlyhard【小题6】teachers 前加my或the【小题7】studentstudents【小题8】whatwhich【小题9】去掉but后的that【小题10】determinedetermines【解析】【小题1】disappointing修饰某事 disappointed修饰某人【小题2】文章开头Three years ago所以应是过去时【小

4、题3】however但是 此处不存在转折关系。而是与前面的表示并列【小题4】固定搭配make the best of 好好利用【小题5】hard的形容词 副词 相同，均为hard 而hardly表示几乎不【小题6】老师应是特指的 故要加my或the【小题7】one of 后面要用复数 表示 。之一【小题8】非限制性定语从句。从句中缺主语，关系代词不能用what，用which【小题9】but后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that【小题10】it后的that指代it 故从句中要用第三人称单数。2The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went

5、to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labor. They reached the park at nine oclock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the

6、 tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Childrens Playground. All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.【答案】【小题1】meI【小题2】that 去掉【小题3】They-We【小题

7、4】was divided into【小题5】 leavingleft【小题6】wherewhich【小题7】equipmentsequipment【小题8】hardlyhard【小题9】fellfelt【小题10】so-but【解析】【小题1】and表并列，前后的人称应相同 所以应用主格I【小题2】guess后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that【小题3】本文讲的是“我们”所以应是we【小题4】班里的人应该是“被分成三组”所以应是被动语态【小题5】句意：拣被留下的垃圾 所以应是left【小题6】定语从句 in后面缺少宾语 不能用where 应该有which【小题7】equipment为不可数

8、名词，不能加S【小题8】hard的形容词 副词均为hard hardly意为几乎不【小题9】句意：我们感到有点儿累 感觉feel 过去时为felt【小题10】我们很累但很开心 前后转折 故用but3Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Alee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didnt go u

9、ntil he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Alee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the neare

10、st hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible.【答案】【小题1】surprising 改成surprised 【小题2】has 改成had【小题3】such 改成so 【小题4】to去掉 【小题5】while 改成when 【小题6】them改成 him【小题7】or 改成 a

11、nd【小题8】operation 前面加an【小题9】dangers 改成danger【小题10】sincere 改成sincerely【解析】【小题1】修饰主语用过去分词转换的形容词【小题2】他被车撞是之前已经发生的事情【小题3】后面的形容词，用so修饰【小题4】see sb do sth 【小题5】固定句型hardlywhen一就【小题6】him指代Alee【小题7】上下文不是选择关系，而是并列关系【小题8】operation是可数名词，用an修饰【小题9】固定词组out of danger【小题10】副词修饰动词4In China there is about 50 million di

12、sabled 76. _people. We should try our best make their life much 77. _more easier. For example, when we design a building, 78. _well have to provide a entrance which is suitable 79. _for wheelchairs in the first floor. The Chinese 80. _government take good care of their life. Many people 81. _with di

13、sability have received good treatment from the 82. _government. Meanwhile, more and more special schools83. _have built for them. But that is not enough, their life 84._wont be much better if everyone shows love for them. 85._【答案】【小题1】is改为 are【小题2】best 后加to【小题3】more去掉【小题4】 a改为 an 【小题5】in 改为on【小题6】ta

14、ke 改为takes【小题7】disability 改为disabilities 【小题8】正确【小题9】have后加 been【小题10】 wont 改为 will， if改为 unless【解析】【小题1】is改为 are there be是倒装句，句子的主语是million disabled people作主语，谓语动词用复数。【小题2】best 后加to 固定词组try ones best to do sth.努力做某事。【小题3】more去掉 后面已经是比较级了，故more省略。【小题4】 a改为 an entrance是以元音发言，故用an.【小题5】in 改为on 在几层楼都用介

15、词On。【小题6】take 改为takes, government作为整体，谓语动词用单数。【小题7】disability 改为disabilities 用复数形式指不同的残疾；【小题8】正确 【小题9】have改为 been 上下文可知使用被动形式。【小题10】 wont 改为 will ,if改为 unless 上下文串联，除非每个人都表现出对别人的爱，他们的生活才会更好。5College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fe

16、es. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich e

17、nough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.【答案】College students have a few w

18、ays to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good students can win a scholarship. In this way they can pay at least part of the fees.

19、 As to me, I will let my parents pay half of my fees because they are not rich enough. Besides my study, I will take up a part-time job by teaching some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my

20、lessons in order that I can easily win a scholarship.【解析】【小题1】way是可数名词，用few修饰，little修饰不可数名词【小题2】have sb do 使某人做。 把parents后面的to去掉【小题3】apply for 申请 这里指申请银行贷款【小题4】many good students 许多好学生【小题5】用这种方式in this way by this way 表示顺便说一下【小题6】句意：让父母付 我的学费中的一半 把their改为my【小题7】前文说我要去挣学费，说明我的父母不是很富有 故在are后面加not【小题8】

21、把beside改为besides beside表示在。旁边 besides表示另外。，除了。【小题9】by是介词，后面加doing 所以是teaching【小题10】in order to+短语 in order that+句子 故这里应把to改为that6Which is known to all, nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life. In it, we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so

22、 much information as possible. We are often send e-mails to our classmates or our teachers or make telephone call to our families as well as our friends. However, we can go to school on the net, read different kinds of books and even teach myself English. We can also enjoy music, watching sports and

23、 play computer games on the net. We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.【答案】【小题1】Which改为As； playing后加a 【小题2】In改为On； so改为as 【小题3】去掉are； call改为calls 【小题4】However改为Besides/Moreover； myself改为ourselves 【小题5】watching改为watch 【小题6】could改为can【解析】【小题1】定语从句，从句中缺少主语，只能用as做代词，指代nowadays the Internet

24、 is playing more and more important part in our daily life.这句话，which不能指代一句话。固定搭配 play a part in 在。中是。的一部分【小题2】“it”指代“Internet” 在网上，用on on the Internet为固定搭配 固定搭配as much as possible 尽可能的多【小题3】句意：我们通常给老师同学发邮件 这里是一般现在时，不用are 打电话 make telephone calls 由上下文可知，不止一个电话，故用复数形式【小题4】前后两句话不存在转折，由递进的意味，故用Besides/M

25、oreover 句子的主语是“我们” 故此处应是“我们自学英语”故用ourselves 【小题5】watch sports 是与enjoy music和play computer games并列存在的，都是can后面的宾语。都应该用动词原形【小题1】本文时态为现在时，故用can 不用could7One cold winter day in 1900, a small boy was 1. _called Charles Chaplin was walking along the street2. _in London. He didnt have breakfast and lunch. He

26、 3. _wants to buy some bread, but he didnt have any money. 4. _His father died since he was very young. His mother 5. _was often very sickly, so she couldnt take care of 6. _Charles and his brother. Neither of them had to 7. _work to help his mother. He was a small boy 8. _and his dream was very big

27、. He wanted to 9. _be great man in the world of films. So he worked very hard. 10. _ 【答案】【小题1】was前加who或去掉was 【小题2】 【小题3】and or【小题4】wants wanted【小题5】since when【小题6】sickly sick 【小题7】Neither Both【小题8】his their 【小题9】and but【小题10】be后加a【解析】【小题1】not feeling well在句中充当状语。【小题2】表示“使自己怎么样”时，应该用反身代词。【小题3】此行无错。【小

28、题4】felt表示“感到”时，为不及物动词，没有被动形式。【小题5】and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote，所以三者在形式上保持一致。【小题6】上文中已经提到了这位大夫，所以在此应该予以特指。【小题7】another“再一次”。【小题8】前后两句话为并列关系，不存在转折的意味。【小题9】本句话意思是“他根本没有得癌症”。at all“到底，根本”；in all“总共”。【小题10】rather than为固定短语，连接两个并列成分。8判断正误【小题1】 Have you ever tried to talk to your son like a friend?【小题2】He wa

29、s determining not to make the same mistakes.【小题3】 The music performed now is written by Gu Jianfen.【小题4】 His voice hears as if he has a cold. 【小题5】 It is said Yogo is great benefit to human health.【小题6】 An European settler first discovered the place in 1820.【小题7】 He has decided to go abroad to study

30、 with the intention of improving his English and find a job.【小题8】 Would Ma Li come to Brunei, I would meet her at the airport.【小题9】 He learned English over listening to the radio.【小题10】 With the help of foreign experts, the factory produced twice many cars in 2000 as the year before.【答案】【小题1】错【小题2】错

31、【小题3】错【小题4】错【小题5】错【小题6】错【小题7】错【小题8】错【小题9】错【小题10】错【解析】【小题1】to talk 改成talking。Try doing 表“试着去做某事（看是否有效果）”【小题2】determining determined 固定词组be determined to do sth下定决心做某事。【小题3】being performed now 根据Now说明是正在发生的，故使用现在分词。且音乐和表演构成被动关系，使用现在分词的被动形式。【小题4】hears-sounds系动词听起来：sound. Sound as if听起来似乎【小题5】of great benef