Step Two分类突破谋篇布局.docx

1、Step Two 分类突破谋篇布局第9讲记叙文记叙文是最常见、最基本的写作文体，它以真实的社会生活、自然景物为材料，以记人、叙事、状物、写景为主要内容，以叙述、描写或对话为主要表达方式，通过形象表达思想的一种文体。一、写记叙文必须注意以下几点：1主题要鲜明。首先要认真审题，对题目所给信息，不论是短文还是表格，不论是文字还是图画，都务必仔细分析、反复推敲，确定选择典型事例、反映主题。2内容要完整。一般说来，记叙文包含六大要素：when(时间)，where(地点)，who(人物)，what(事件)，why(原因)，how(结果)。文章要有始有终，确保内容的完整性。3情节要合理。按照事情发展的先后顺

2、序，使用恰当的过渡词，使文章连贯、自然、详略得当。4用词要恰当。描写事件时，切忌词不达意，影响理解。要牢记常用动词词组和经典句型。5记叙事例中的时态通常是一般过去时。二、记叙文写作要点1活动的时间、地点、人物；2表明事情开端；3叙述事情的发展/活动内容一； 事情进一步发展/活动内容二；事情发展的高潮/活动内容三；4事情的结束；5表明个人的看法或感受； 6总结全文，再次抒发自己的感情。经典语篇(2015浙江) 在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写

3、一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：1从以上两种做法中选择一种；2以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。When I Have a Different Opinion 佳作欣赏1When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it.By doing so

4、，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a

5、good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.佳作欣赏2When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities.When I have a different opinion，I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.The main reason

6、for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism，I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum.I would love to go to a museum，but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic.W

7、ithout hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.即时训练(2013浙江)请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1记述事情经过；2简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数)。One Thing Im Proud of 参考范文One Thing Im Pr

8、oud ofLast summer I spent one month in California as a visiting student.I had to study at a school and stay at a host family.There were seven people in their family，including the parents，four sisters and one little brother.During the onemonth stay，I had to adapt myself to their American lifestyle an

9、d help them understand the best part of Chinese culture.With my great efforts，they all became my best friends，or rather I had become a member of the family.I have proved that friendship can help while in a different country.In a word，being able to win their friendship in a very short time is the thi

10、ng that I am proud of most in my life.第10讲应用文(1)书信书信写作旨在考查学生在实际生活中应用英语的能力，体现了学习英语的实用性。书信种类很多，它包括笔友信、感谢信、慰问(候)信，祝贺信、鼓励信、介绍信、自荐信、询问信、应聘信、联系信、求职信及其答复信、邀请信及其接受邀请的信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。书信格式一般不作考查内容(开头和结尾已给出)，重点考查考生的谋篇布局、遣词造句能力。总的说来，写英语书信时有以下几点须注意：1信件开头要开门见山、直入主题。常用语句是(1)Im writing to.；(2)Id like to.2信的正文是信

11、函的主体部分。在高考作文中应该按照题目要求把题目的要点表达清楚；使文章逻辑清晰、语言通顺；可以根据需要分为若干个段落；要确保没有遗漏内容要点。3注意根据收信人的年龄身份不同，信的语气也应不同，对朋友要亲切自然，对领导或长辈要委婉。高考书信开头语段：(1)Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide，I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of bo

12、oks.(2015重庆)了解到你在组织这个在全世界分享书籍的活动，我正在写信申请参加。理由很简单，我爱读书，而且我有很多书。(2)Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.(2015全国)我想请你为我们学校的英语报写一篇文章。(3)Dear Chris，How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now，because my left foot was injured，I canno

13、t go with you as planned.(2014北京)一切都好吗？我记得我们原本计划七月去云南。但是因为我的左脚受伤，我不能按计划和你一起去了。(4)Dear American guests，On behalf of our school，I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.(2014陕西)我代表学校，表达对你们的热烈欢迎。我们很幸运有你们参加我们的英语周活动。(5)Dear

14、 Chris，Im Li Jin，monitor of Class One，Grade Eleven.Im very delighted to learn that youre coming to our class to study with us as an exchange student next term.Welcome to our class！(2014天津)我是李津，11年级1班的班长，我很高兴得知下学期你要作为一名交换生来我们班和我们一起学习。欢迎来到我们班！(6)Dear Mr.Wang，Knowing that our library is going to buy bo

15、oks，Id like to give some suggestions.(2014浙江)得知我们图书馆要买书，我想给一些建议。(7)Dear Tom，How are you doing？I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.(2013新课标全国)你好吗？我想知道你是否能为我卖一些中国结。(8)Dear Tom，Im sorry I couldnt reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.I was so occupied with going

16、over my lessons for my final exam.Now I am writing to tell you my plans for the coming summer holidays.(2013山东)我很抱歉没有立刻回复你上周发来的邮件，那时我正忙着复习功课准备期末考试。现在我写信告诉你我的下一个暑假计划。(9)Dear Peter，How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference，and Ive asked him t

17、o bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.(2013新课标全国)你还好吗？我写信想告诉你我叔叔李明要去你住的城市开会，我已经请他捎去你以前曾向我索要的中国画。经典语篇(2015陕西)假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival，which will be held on June 1517,2015，is now looking for 20 student vo

18、lunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate.If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi.写作要点：1表达写作意图；2陈述应征目的；3说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1邮件词数不少于100；2开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，

19、a student from Class 2，Grade 3. Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua佳作欣赏Dear Ms Chen，Im Li Hua，a student from Class 2，Grade 3. I am writing to apply for the volunteer position stated in your notice.I think its a perfect opportunity for me to further develop my abilities.For the past two

20、years，I have been an active participant of our national annual English festival and played an important role in it.As a diligent student in my class，I have a good knowledge of English and can express my thoughts and opinions clearly and fluently with foreigners.In addition，I am an outgoing girl who

21、has rich experience in organizing school activities.Once，I took part in a national hostess speaking contest on behalf of our school and won the first place.I would appreciate it if I am offered with an opportunity to display my talent. Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Hua即时训练(2015北京)假设你是

22、红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括：1介绍训练营的相关内容(例如：时间、地点、参加者等)；2说明你打算参加的原因；3询问对方的意向。注意：1.词数不少于50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim， Yours，Li Hua参考范文Dear Jim，Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I want to join a Dragon Boat T

23、raining Camp.I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it，let me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Y

24、ours，Li Hua第11讲应用文(2)建议信一、写作要点 1建议信的内容：作者就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2建议信的对象：(1)写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；(2)写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。注意：建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。语气和用词要恰当，如果收信人是长者，则宜采用严谨、谦虚、正式的语言；如果对方是亲密的朋友，语言就可以亲切自然一些。二、文章结构1开门见山，点明写信的目的是提建议。2讲清楚提建议的理由及应采取的具体措施，层次分明。3呼应开头，指出所提建议的意义，并发出号召或提出希望，

25、礼貌结束全文。三、常用句型1开头(1)Id like to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with.(2)I am writing to express my views concerning. (3)It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on. 2正文(1)My suggestions are as follows.(2)May I suggest that you.(3)I really hope that.(4)What about. ?(5)How about. ?(6

26、)If I were you，I would.(7)It would be better if. (8)When it comes to such a situation，I would like to suggest that you.3结束语(1)If you could take what I suggest seriously，you would. (2)If you can take my suggestions into consideration，.(3)I hope they will be helpful.(4)I hope you will find these propo

27、sals/ideas helpful/useful.四、写作模板Dear ，You have asked me for my advice with regard to ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my opinion，you would be wise to take the following actions：Firstly， .Secondly， .Whats more， .I hope you will find these proposals useful/helpful.Good luck

28、with your .Yours sincerely，经典语篇(2014安徽)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre

29、 having such a bad time at the moment. Yours，Jamie佳作欣赏Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control

30、your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips：First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise

31、is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third，remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours，Jamie即时训练假定你是李华，贵校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)。你支持开设iPad课堂。请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：1资源丰富；2促进交流；3利于环保；4其他理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster，W