郝老师英语作文.docx

1、郝老师英语作文高考英语作文写作技巧第一步：审题-考虑 体裁 时态 人称 要点第二步：草拟提纲简单列出要点句的关键词语或句型第三步：扩展成句-连句成篇-合理发挥 注意前后连贯，适当使用过渡词第四步：检查修改主要检查语法及粗心错误，注意书写规范，卷面整洁 （同时注意：文章结尾要精彩，可适当使用一些表示情感因素的句式使文章更自然、得体）第一讲：高级词汇和句式结构一(并列句，状语从句)一、高级词汇当我们对写作的信息要点已经确定和掌握之后，首先，我们要把这些信息要点变成简单的小句子。然后，给这些句子添加定语，状语和高级词汇的名词，或者将这些句子中的动词，形容词用高级词汇替换掉。我们应当掌握的高级词汇：（

2、主要是形容词，动词和名词）severe 替换掉serious（严重的）a severe water shortage严重缺水wealthy 替换掉 rich （ 富裕的）beneficial 替换掉 good （有益的）undesirable 替换掉 bad （不好的，不受欢迎的）nevertheless 替换掉 however/but（然而，不过）fundamental / significant/vital /crucial 替换掉 important（ 重要的）play an important role in 扮演一个重要的角色在. 中relevant 替换掉 related （有关的

3、）.is highly relevant to.与.有着紧密的联系extraordinary/amazing 替换掉 surprising （惊人的，非凡的）provided/providing （that）替换掉 if （如果.）on condition that替换掉 as long aspromote /strengthen 替换掉 improve （提高，加强）cope with 替换掉 solve（ 解决）motivate 替换掉 encourage（ 激励）pros and cons 替换掉 advantages and disadvantages（好处和坏处）-You must

4、consider all the pros and consof the matter before you make a decision.在你做决定之前，必须考虑这个问题的正反两个方面.approach / method 替换掉 way（方法，方案）adopt 替换掉 use （采用，采取）the aged 替换掉 old people（老人）adolescents 替换掉 the young （青少年）employment/occupation 替换掉 job（就业,工作）affair 替换掉 thing （事情，东西）catastrophe 替换掉（ disaster 灾难）subsc

5、ribe to 替换掉 agree with（ 同意）acquire 替换掉 gain （获得（尤指知识上的）administration 替换掉 government （政府部门）extremely/desperately 替换掉 very/hard （非常地，极度地，拼命地）for instance 替换掉 for example （例如）advocate 倡导 替换掉 suggest, proposecompensate for替换掉make up弥补.Hence 替换掉so 因此In contemporary society 在当今社会In this fiercely competit

6、ive society, 在这个激烈竞争的社会中，A vast amount of 大量的替换掉a lot of sustainable development 可持续发展be abundant in 富有. 替换掉 be rich inon ones own account 为了某人自己的利益on account of/ in view of 鉴于， 由于by no means 绝不arise from 由.引起assess 评估，评价authentic 替换掉true真实的，可信的trend 趋势，趋向，潮流emphasize 强调，重视devote替换spend-He devotes a

7、ll his spare time to reading.nothing but替换very-The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.be supposed to 替换shouldtake responsibilities to do sth 承担责任去做.appreciate 替换thankeffect/impact 替换 influenceOn+名词/doing, No soonerthan/Hardlywhen/The moment替换as soon as-As soon as he arrived, he began

8、 his research. -On his arrival, he began his research.-No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.due to替换because ofcontribute to替换 be helpful/useful/causecontribute to替换 be helpful/useful/cause-Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.round the corner 替换

9、coming soon/ nearby-The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). come up with替换think oftake .sth into consideration 替换thinkIt occurs to me that替换 I realizeset aside替换savebe of + n. 替换adj.can not but / can not help but替换have to domore often than not替换usuallylest替换so that /in order that(注意句中谓语动词

10、肯定和否定)be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换want to do sth./wish forbe crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested inperfect (ly)/fantastic/amazing 替换good/ very wellspare no efforts to do替换try ones best to dostruggle for 为了. 而奋斗comprehensive :adj 综合的 profound: adj 深远的,深刻的，深奥的 frankly

11、:adv说实话 indifferent :adj 冷漠的diligent: adj 勤奋的 excessive :adj过多的conventional :adj 传统的,惯例的,常见的 prospective :adj 有前景的，未来的,有前途的prosperous : adj 繁荣的 ultimately: adv 最终地dominant :adj支配的 miracle :n奇迹constantly : adv 不断地 extensive: adj 广泛的 essentially: adv本质上 drawback :n 缺点dilemma :n 困境 globalization :n 全球化

12、urbanization :n城市化 innovation :n发明,创新guarantee : v保证 stimulate: v 刺激conquer : v 克服 illustrate :v 阐述circumstance :n 情况 reach a consensus 达成共识underestimate :v低估 cultivate :v 培养 include:v 包含controversial :adj有争议的 life quality: 生活质量 a sense of happiness: 幸福感 sincere: adj真诚的 expect/look forward to: 期待 in

13、 order to :为了我喜欢 I like I am interested in I am fond of I spend most of my spare time in doing我认为 I think/feel/believe In my opinion From my point of view As far as I am concerned I cannot deny that 一些 some a lot of a large number of a great deal of a couple of a large amount of a quantity of variou

14、s 得到 get obtain grab acquire achieve gain attain 重要的 important necessary basic fundamental primary elementary significant central好的 good great perfect ideal beneficial amazing fantastic extraordinary unbelievable incredible out-standing excellent 二、句型结构（一）-并列句，状语从句and , but ,sobecause , if , when, a

15、s if, as, while, 你想说什么不是最重要的，你能说出来什么才是最重要的。实战演练以2015全国卷为例邀请函，李华邀请外教Lucy 一起去养老院陪老人过重阳节。单词：nursing home the Double Ninth Festival 信息点：1，出发及返回时间 2，活动：包饺子表演节目草稿：第一段：背景介绍（重阳节到了，去养老院）目的介绍（请您同往） 第二段：信息点介绍（开始结束时间） 活动（包饺子，唱歌，跳舞） 第三段：结尾（真诚期待，盼回复）单句展开：1，重阳节到了，The Double Ninth Festival is coming.2，去养老院, we plan

16、 to go to the nursing home3，开始，结束时间 this activity will begin at 10 am and end about 8 pm on the day of Double Ninth Festival.4，包饺子，唱歌，跳舞, we will make dumplings, sing and dance5, 真诚期待，盼回复 we sincerely look forward to your reply.开始添加一些简单的高大上话，添加形容词/副词，改写动词，这活动是好的对老人和我们。老人扮演着很重要的作用在生活中。为了提高老人的生活质量和幸福感

17、 我相信，通过此次活动我们可以培养学生的责任感。beneficial fundamental / significant/vital /crucial play an important role in 扮演一个重要的角色在. 中promote /strengthen （提高，加强）for instance （例如）take responsibilities to do sth 承担责任去做.In contemporary society 在当今社会范本句：Because the Double Ninth Festival is coming, in order to promote life

18、 quality and a sense of happiness of the aged ,we plan to go to the nursing home.第二讲：句式结构二和修辞手法一、句式结构（二）-定语从句、强调句 从2001年起实行的高考评分标准强调了内容要点,语言的多样性、连贯性和得体性, 鼓励学生尝试语言表达的多样化和复杂化。因此要写成一篇较有水准的英语作文,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在语用、语法结构以及表达的多样性和灵活性上有所表现。句子单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕没有任何错误也不可能得高分,相反,“有些许错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高

19、档。 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如定语从句、强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。 1，定语从句(原文) 这活动是好的对老人和我们。 我相信，通过此次活动我们可以培养学生的责任感。This activity is beneficial for the aged and us. As far as I am concerned，through this activity we can cultivate students sense of responsibility.(改写) As far as I am concerned，this activity is b

20、eneficial for the aged and us, through which (this activity) we can cultivate students sense of responsibility.2，强调句 (原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely. (改写) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. (原文) 在当今社会，老人扮演着很重要的作用在生活中。 In contemporary society，the aged play a signif

21、icant role in life.(改写)In contemporary society，it is the aged that play a significant role in life.二、修辞手法:一.导入句型1.As far as .is concerned 就而言2.It goes without saying that. 不言而喻，. 3.It can be said with certainty that. 可以肯定地说. 4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的， 5.It has to be noticed that. 它必须注意到，. 6.Its

22、 generally recognized that. 它普遍认为. 7.Its likely that . 这可能是因为. 8.Its hard that. 这是很难的.9.Its hardly too much to say that. 它几乎没有太多的说10.What calls for special attention is that.需要特别注意的是11.Theres no denying the fact that.毫无疑问，无可否认12.Nothing is more important than the fact that. 没有什么比这更重要的是13.whats far m

23、ore important is that. 更重要的是二.衔接句型1.A case in point is . 一个典型的例子是. 2.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以3.But its a pity that. 但遗憾的是 4.Further, we hold opinion that. 此外，我们坚持认为，. 5.However , the difficulty lies in.然而，困难在于6.Similarly, we should pay attention to. 同样，我们要注意. 7.In th

24、is respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说8.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is. 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即 三 .常用于引言段的句型1.Some people think that . 有些人认为2.To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。 3. I believe the statement is va

25、lid because. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为4. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。5. Along with the development of, more and more.随着的发展，越来越多常用谚语1. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 2. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。3. A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情4. T

26、ime is money. 一寸光阴一寸金。 5. Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月无情；岁月易逝；岁月不待人。6.Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。7.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 8，Where is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。9.Every coin has two sides. 凡事皆有好坏。10.Its never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。实战演练以模考卷为例建议信，你是李华收到Lucy 的一封信，信中谈到自己选择大学专业的疑虑，选择历史还是

27、英语。历史是自己的爱好，但就业不好，英语专业就业好。信息点：1，你的建议 2，你的的理由 3，其余建议草稿：第一段：背景介绍（收到信）目的介绍（个人建议学英语） 第二段：信息点介绍（理由1，就业2，个人发展）其余建议（历史课外爱好） 第三段：结尾（真诚地希望你仔细考虑，盼回复）单句展开：1，收到你的信了，I received your letter.2，信是关于大学专业的选择, The letter is about major choice in university.3，我建议你学英语 I suggest that you learn English.4，理由1，好就业English is

28、 beneficial for your employment.5，理由2，个人发展 English plays a significant role in your personal development.6, 其余建议（历史课外爱好）You could read history in spare time7, 真诚地希望你仔细考虑，盼回复I sincerely hope you could take it into consideration and look forward to your reply.开始添加一些简单的高大上话，添加形容词/副词，改写动词，添加修辞句，改写定语从句为了

29、提高自己的生活质量， 我相信，通过学英语你可以获得有前途的未来。定语从句，强调句1.As far as .is concerned 就而言3.It can be said with certainty that. 可以肯定地说. 5. Along with the development of, more and more.随着的发展，越来越多范本句：1，I received your letter ，which (The letter) is about major choice in university.2,It is English that is beneficial for you

30、r employment.3,It can be said with certainty that English plays a significant role in your personal development.4,As far as university major is concerned , in order to promote life quality, I suggest that you learn English.5, Along with the development of society , it can be said with certainty that more and more work needs English.6，From my point of view, you can obtain a prosperous future through learning English.第三讲：句式结构三和修辞手法一、句式结构（三）- 倒装句Only + 状语/状语从句 主句部分倒装（1情态动词+主语+余句2系动词+主语+余句3时助+主语+余句）(原文) 我相信，通过学英语你可以获得有前途的未来。From my point of view, you can obtain a