小作文之摘要报告.docx

1、小作文之摘要报告作文到底要不要模板，怎么不同的老师说法不一样？ 答：作文必须要模板。请看下面是2008年教育部考试中心的一篇满分写作范文的第二三段： Simple as it is，what the picture conveys to us is thought-provokingWith the development of economy and society，competition is becoming increasingly fierceIt is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himselfHence，people

2、 in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamworkIn fact，it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possessAccordingly，it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of te

3、amwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselvesEvery one should have the ability of teamworkOnly in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in 注意划线部分，换成confidence 就完全适合另

4、一篇终点又是起点。2010年全国硕士研究生入学统一考试英语大纲第三部分 写作该部分由A、B两节组成，考查考生的书面表达能力。总分30分。A节：考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分10分。B节：考生根据提示信息写出一篇160200词的短文（标点符号不计算在内）。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分20分。英语二的考试的写作，小作文有一个比较大的变化，过去五年大纲，英语一教育部是这样一句话，就是考察私人或公务信函、备忘录、摘要和报告，但过去小作文考察的都

5、是信函，另外三种题型没有考到过，但是今年大纲明确提出了，不管是英语一还是英语二，明年小作文分成两种题型，二者选一。第一种题型还是信函、备忘录、报告，写一百词左右。这种题型还有。第二种题型，是新加的或者说特别点出的，就是根据给出的一篇中文或英语文章，用英文写一篇80到100个词的文章摘要。摘要这种题型以前大纲也提到了，但是并没有明确的点出。大纲出来之后，针对明年的考试，小作文大概可能有60%左右的可能性还是考书信，复习思路40%的可能性可能会考摘要。告示 Notice Announcement两种： 1 何时何地何人 举行讲座/会议 2 因故取消1 一起写AnnouncementLadies a

6、nd Gentlemen, There is going to a lecture, titled “CET-6 preparation”, in the meeting room of the English Department from 9:00am to 11:00am on Monday, December 15th, 2010. This lecture will be given by Jason and Allen, who are from Hangzhou New Oriental School. Those who are interested in taking par

7、t in it may sign with the monitor of their classes before the end of this week. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend the lecture. Li Ming the Student Union2 Directions: Because of the rain, the swimming competition of your college (to be held from late morning till this afternoon) can

8、t be held at the new town swimming pool. Write a notice, informing the audience students of the changed place, the arrangement of time and lunch matter especially. NoticeLadies and Gentlemen, Your attention, please. Because of the rain the swimming competition will not be held at the new town swimmi

9、ng pool as planned. It will be held at the 地点, 时间. Please assemble at the front gate at 9:45 am, and buses will be leaving school at 10:00 am. Please be punctual so that we can have enough time to finish the competition.Li MingDepartment of Sports摘要文章摘要是对所写文章主要内容的精炼概括。美国人称摘要为“Abstract”，而英国人则喜欢称其为“Su

10、mmary”。写作要点 1 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一，考试时应遵守规定的字数限制； 2 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文； paraphrase3 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致，并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列； 4 重点反映主要观点，删除细节； 5 简化从句，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句； 范例：Directions: Studythefollowingessaycarefullyandwriteasummaryinabout80words. Wecontinuetosharewithour remotestancestorsthemost tangledandevasive attitud

11、esaboutdeath,despitethe greatdistancewehavecomeinunderstandingsome oftheprofoundaspectsofbiology.Wehaveasmuchdistastefor talkingabout personaldeathasforthinkingaboutit;itisanindelicacy,liketalkinginmixed companyaboutvenerealdisease orabortionintheolddays.Deathonagrandscale doesnot botherusinthesames

12、pecialway:wecansitaroundadinnertableand discusswar,involving60billionvolatilisedhumandeaths,asthoughweweretalkingaboutbadweather;wecanwatchabrupt bloodydeatheveryday,incolor, onfilms andtelevision,withoutblinkingbackatear.Itiswhenthenumbersofdeadarevery small,andveryclose,thatwebeginto thinkinscurry

13、ingcircles.Attheverycenteroftheproblemisthe nakedcolddeadnessofonesownself,theonlyrealityinnatureofwhichwecanhaveabsolutecertainty,anditisunmentionable,unthinkable.Wemay beevenlesswillingtofacetheissueatfirsthand thanourpredecessorsbecauseofa secretnewhopethatmaybeitwillgoaway.Weliketothink,hidingth

14、ethought,thatwithallthemarvellouswaysinwhichweseemnowtoleadnaturearoundbythenose,perhapswecanavoidthecentralproblemifwejustbecome,nextyear,say,abitsmarter.(246words)原文要点 (1)Continuetohavethemostconfusedideasofdeathlikepredecessors (2)Avoidtalkingaboutdeath (3)Talkaboutdeathwhenmillionsofpeopledie (4

15、)Becomeconfusedandanxiouswheneachtimethedeadpeopleareveryfewandthedeath ratesarealmostequal (5)Peoplesfearfulness (6)Seemtocontrolnature (7)Avoiddeath 参考摘要 Peopledisliketalkingaboutdeathbecausetheyjustliketheirpredecessorsstillhavethevaguest ideasoftheissue.Theytalkaboutdeathonlywhenmillionuponmilli

16、onsofpeoplearekilledinwar.Whentheyfindonlyveryfewpeopledieeachtimeandthedeathratesarealmostequal,theybecomeveryanxious,thinkingthatnexttimetheythemselveswillmeettheirdoom.Therefore, theyfearverymuch.However,theyhaveahopethatwhentheycontrolnature,theycanavoid death.(84words)我的摸版句：源自TOEFL的综合写作一 In the

17、 article, the writer made several points about peoples attitude toward death.二 首先，你写出的概要内容必须忠实于原文，或者说精确（accurate）。概要中所有的内容和信息必须来源于原文，既不可篡改原文内容也不能包括原文未涉及到的内容。其次，概要读起来应是一完整连贯的段落。要取得这一完整连贯，就应该使用一些连接词（linkwords），如but，and，however，also等连接要点；同样，也可使用诸如since，though，even if，when，after，before等词。三 In conclusion

18、, the aim of this essay is to determine peoples confused views upon death.小作文操练Directions:You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/She has parties in the room and sometimes borro

19、ws your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and:1) ask for a new room next term,2) explain your reasons.3) you would prefer a single room,Dont sign your own name at the end of your letter, using“Li Ming”instead.Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this lett

20、er in purpose of making a complait about regarding accommodation. 1) ask for a new room next term I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction with my roommate. For one thing, his

21、 friends are constantly visiting him. For another, he regularly holds noisy parties.To whom it may concern,I am writing this letter in purpose of making a complaint about my roommate. In fact, I would like to move into a new room next semester.To be frank, three fundamental reasons could contribute

22、to my dissatisfaction with my roommate. To start with, there are many friends paying a visit to him so that I cannot concentrate on my studies. Whats more, too many parties are held frequently in our room by my roommate this term. Finally, what I cannot tolerate is that he always borrows my stuff wi

23、thout my permission. I wish this letter can draw your attention to this matter and I hope I could be offered a single room next term. I would appreciate it if you could send me a reply, at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Ming一 从句（宾语从句：it is that; 主语从句：what I is ）二 There be三 被动句询问信结构要点

24、询问信是希望获取信息的信件，分为三个部分：1目的；自我介绍（申请信）2 征询具体信息；3 期待回复；感谢（感谢信）Directions:You and your family are 1)planning for a trip to Hong Kong during the May holiday. Write a letter to a travel agency to 2)explain your travel plans, ask for relevant information, and 3)express your gratitude for a reply.You should w

25、rite about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.范文：To whom it may concern,I am writing this letter in purpose of asking for some information about your agencys Hong Kong travel packages for the May holiday. To

26、briefly introduce my plan, my family and I plan to travel there from May 1st to 7th.模板句：It would be greatly appreciated if you could let me know about your travel packages and their corresponding price per person, covering both hotel and a return ticket. Another matter I need information on is a com

27、plete schedule/agenda of the whole trip. Id also like some detailed information about Thank you for your time and trouble. I would be grateful if you could reply to me, at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Ming练习你们考试的文章：Directions: You want to continue your graduate study at an American u

28、niversity after graduation. Write to the University to ask for relevant information.To whom it may concern,I am writing this letter in purpose of asking for some information about applying for California University, Berkley Branch. To briefly introduce myself, I am a senior student of Peking Univers

29、ity, majoring in Computer Science.1 成绩要求 academic requirement 2 具体学费tuition fee3 住宿条件accommodation conditionIt would be greatly appreciated if you could let me know about the corresponding/relevant academic requirements covering TOEFL, GRE and GPA? Another matter I need information on is tuition fee

30、. Is it possible for me to obtain a scholarship for a foreign student? Id also like some detailed information about accommodation condition. I would prefer a single room on campus. Thank you for your time and trouble. I would be grateful if you could reply to me, at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Ming摘要操练The sentry watched a hawk that hovered overhead，looking for some unsuspecting prey to pounce upon. Then he heard the distant，muffled roar of planes，then silence.For the past week he had been told to take note of everything that happened on th