专业四级英语作文参考.docx

1、专业四级英语作文参考一、 低碳与环保构思点拨：低碳生活，本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文内容和结构可如下：第一段：描述图画；第二段：列举现象，分析影响；第三段：建议措施，展望未来。思维拓展：环保话题，例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳的角度入手展开写作。As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and

2、 turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doingeverything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much elec

3、tricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for

4、having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。To serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past pract

5、ice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。名师点评； is

6、sleeping soundly:熟睡，也可以表达为A boy is fast asleep。“ A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。“with the television on”，with引导的伴随结构，即A boy is sl

7、eeping, while the television is on.也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。 are used to doing:习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。二、网络的利与弊 2010-12-28 15:42思路点拨：一个现实：网络文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以这样设计：第一段：描述图画；第二段：网络的利+举例，网络的弊+举例；第三段：提出建议措施取其精华，去其糟粕。思路拓展：所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，城市化的利与弊。大学扩招的利与弊等。高分范文

8、Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。The impli

9、cation implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such

10、as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty info

11、rmation on the net may exert negative impacts on people。In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and eve

12、n wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work。三、醉酒驾车与安全意识、社会责任思路点拨：图画有点夸张，但是它却反映了一个触目惊心的安全问题：醉酒驾车。写作时可以按照以下的脉络展开论述：第一段：描述图画；第二段：分两个分论点进行论述：提高安全意识、提高社会责任感；第三段：建议措施、强调后果。思维拓展：实际上，本文的内容和行文思路，不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，还适用于所有关于安全事故和社会责任的图片话题。例如，火灾、

13、漏油事故、施工事故、违反交规等等一系列与安全或社会责任感相关的话题，都可以参考此文。高分范文What a scary and sensational scene it is! In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications fo

14、r each member of the country。The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice. So life is t

15、o be respected and awed. It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence (DUI). For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we

16、 love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden。In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish

17、 drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail. Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。名师点评： as drunken as a fiddler

18、:醉得像一个游荡者。实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中的烂醉如泥。 Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，语言优美、地道。respected and awed:敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。 DUI:醉酒驾车，也可以写成：drunk driving。 leaving:动词的ing形式作伴随状语。句型经典。四、大学生就业：放低姿态、平常心做人思路点拨：一位正在找工作的年轻女孩，毫不犹豫地拒绝了一份服务岗位的工作，不屑一顾地说：“伺候人的工作我不干”。很多年轻人找工作时，眼光过高，不切实际，没有用平常心对待就

19、业问题。实际上，可以先就业后择业。所以这篇图画作文可以这样创作：第一段：描述图画；第二段：两个角度分析这种现象的原因：志存高远，不愿意从底层做起；好逸恶劳；第三段：建议措施：教育年轻人要脚踏实地；根除好逸恶劳的思想。思维拓展：关于平常心态做人、脚踏实地的话题还可以有很多，例如城市选择问题、院校报考问题、专业选择问题、股市问题，均可以从这个角度出发，进行展开论述。高分范文As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, c

20、omplaining that she will never take a job of serving others. At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life, especially on campus. On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take j

21、obs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success. What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step. On the other hand, wanting to

22、gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable. This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development. We should not look down upon service industry, the third

23、 industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions。Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation. For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a s

24、ingle step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life. For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young. Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved。 be co

25、nscious that:意识到，that后边必须接完整的主谓宾结构。这个表达等同于be aware that，可以进行同意替换。此外：be conscious of和be aware of在意思上也等同于这两者，表示意识到。但是：be conscious of和be aware of后边要接单词或者短语，一般不能加句子。 the third industry:第三产业，是service industry(服务业)的同位语。巧妙地使用同位语，可以把单调的句子变得错落有致、抑扬顿挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表强调，翻译成“确实”。 Only in this

26、 way can realize and can be and thus can be：排比句，短促有力，气势强大，使得对未来的展望显得信心十足！这个句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，五、节约资源 思路点拨：本图描述的场景是一副令人喜闻乐见的图画，图画中，一只可爱的小猪造型的储蓄罐，正在接住自来水里滴下来的水滴，像存钱一样，存储水滴。实际上，它储存的不是水，它储存的是幸福。我们可以看出，人们有了节水意识。但是，从正在滴水的水龙头看，还是有人忽略了节约用水这一问题。因此，本文可以这样写作：第一段：描述图画；第二段分析有

27、些人浪费水的心理，并阐述水资源的宝贵；第三段：建议措施。思维拓展：实际上，积极正面的图片写作，和揭示负面现象的文章没有什么本质上的区别，只要我们笔锋一转，就能把它继续按照原来的套路写。本文也可以从低碳、环保的角度出发进行写作。高分范文Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay atte

28、ntion. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon

29、 of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that

30、we cannot afford to waste it. Water resource is indispensablenot only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be likewhen there is no more water。Even though an increasing number of people

31、 have become aware ofthis emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, sh

32、ould be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。六、面对人生与社会：乐观与豁达 思路点拨：它乐观、豁达地认为，有阴影，那么就说明有阳光。向我们传达了一种健康的人生哲学：乐观生活、达观处世。这是一篇人生哲理类文章，所以文章安排可以相对自由一些：第一段：描述图画；第二段：利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句；第三段：倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。相反，如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片，我们也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。高分范文As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because