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1、陈益民作文2011年10月29日雅思作文题目+优格原创范文(2011-10-29 14:59:43) 转载标签： 雅思作文范文教育分类： 雅思作文 Films and computer games with violence are very popular in the world. Some people believe these have negative effects on society and should be banned. Other people say these are just harmless relaxations. Discuss both views an

2、d give your own opinion.Many people, especially the young, are now seemingly taking those violent films and computer games as ways to escape from the heavy pressure in reality. However, other people, mostly the parents, are worried about the negative influence. To discern the true value of that viol

3、ence, I believe it more sagacious to make a careful discussion first.Obviously, too much exposure to violent pictures on the mass media, such as in films and computer games, without a reasonable censorship, may to some extent, produce a negative influence on people , especially the teenagers, and th

4、us induce them to go astray because of their vulnerable mentality. Also, being always surrounded by violent information, citizens, with the young mostly being involved, may feel insecure living in the society, and thus fail to enjoy the happiness in life. In this sense, banning them seems to be reas

5、onable.However, information is just information, depending on the receivers to decide in their activities. Films and violent computer games have already existed in this society for years, and people, young or old, more or less, have been involved in those violent pictures, but most of them are behav

6、ing normally as they usually do, leaving the worries about those negative impacts not well-grounded. Besides, facing such a severe competition and rapid pace of life, citizens need ways to release their negative moods, and illusive violence is just a good choice. Otherwise, depressed for a long time

7、 without appropriate ways out, those people may behave abnormally. Furthermore, by enabling the public to be aware of the situation and learn to tackle in illusions, violence in reality can be reduced to a large extent, showing its advantages in this field.To sum up, like it or not, violent informat

8、ion is on the media. What we have to do is to take the most advantages of it and try to avoid those disadvantages, so as to enjoy the life better with less possibilities of being harmed.陈益民：2011年5月28日雅思作文+原创范文(2011-05-30 14:11:47) 转载标签： 雅思作文范文高分陈益民教育分类： 雅思作文 Some people think that teachers should be

9、 responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.这是一个典型的讨论型的文章，学生们最会写的也是这种文章了，也就意味着这类文章要拿高分也不容易。陈益民 原创范文 转载请注明A person in shanghai, with a

10、doctors degree, supposed to contribute greatly to the development of the society, turned out to inflict a huge loss valued 3 billion RMB to the country. Thus, whether teachers should guide students behavior or just teach academic knowledge is under a heated debate. To arrive at a standpoint, I belie

11、ve it sagacious to have a carful discussion first.Some people assert that teachers should assume responsibilities to teach children moral values of the society. They state that only when students are educated to behave well, can the sound progress of the society be maintained, and positive social or

12、der be established. Otherwise, the damages from the well-educated but ill-willed ones may be disasters to others and the nation. Besides, mastering more skills in teaching and deeper understanding of what is right and wrong, teachers can perform the task more efficiently, cultivating more qualified

13、citizens for the society. Without the guidance, students may be at a loss on their social positions no matter how well they have learned those academic subjects. In addition, students spend most of their prime time of growth in personality at school with teachers. The lack of teachers as role models

14、 may mean a shortage of guidance in students growthHowever, others who believe teachers duty is only to teach academic subjects also seem well grounded. Firstly, being trained in skills and enriched in knowledge about teaching specific subjects, rather than the morality, teachers are more qualified

15、in fulfilling the former task than the latter one. Moreover, staying with the parents since being born, students have formed their habits and ways to behave. Specifically, they expect to study academic knowledge from teachers, instead of learning how to behave. Additionally, for a long time in histo

16、ry, no evidence shows that moral behaviors should be learned from teachers, otherwise, those who receive little education can all be considered as ill-behaved ones, which is actually ridiculous.To sum up, both sides seem to be rational to some extent. Personally, I believe a combination of teaching

17、morality and academic knowledge will bring more benefits to the growth of the students, which is actually what most teachers around the world are doing now.2011年6月4日雅思作文题目+原创范文(2011-06-04 20:19:48) 转载标签： 雅思作文范文批改教育分类： 雅思作文 根据我们群里学生的今天考试反馈，以及浏览网上学生的回忆，还有参考以前的老问题，今天的题目，应该是如下的样子：We can get knowledge fr

18、om news, but some people think we cant trust the journalist. What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have?这个范文，是根据原来学生写给我，要求我精批的文章，我修改后的版本，也可以当做范文来参考的Recent decades have witnessed dramatic developments in media industry, so the public are better informed about the world around. Meanwhi

19、le, increasing doubts are cast on those publishers and journalists due to the existence of cases like spying on privacy, misleading advertisements, and distorted reports. However, in my opinion, the majority of journalists are positively performing their duties, making their reportsThe vast majority

20、 of journalists working for the prevailing media ,usually supported and censored by the government , are demanded to work professionally. With a high reputation, an improved welfare, a promising future, and a relatively ideal salary, they will not risk violating those rules and regulations, and thus

21、 can be trusted. Besides, those renowned press companies, will no doubt be choosy about employees, and thus, the journalists selected, are highly educated and knowledgeable, which means , they have no intention to mislead the public.Most journalists are forced to justify their overages in this moder

22、n society. The advent of computer technology and later the Internet has made it possible for almost any information, be revealed to the public instantly, leaving few spaces to the journalists to compiling stories. Otherwise, their survival in this field will soon be challenged. Also, the improvement

23、 of educational level of the public, as well as their growing ability in distinguishing the right from the wrong, will make those dishonest journalists and those false reports lifeless in this society.small publishing houses and their reporters, in order to earn a foothold in such a severely competi

24、tive line, may, to some extent, not be able to resist the temptation of some profit-driven companies , and thereby write reports for their own benefits rather than the interest of the public. However, with the growing awareness of the people, with stricter censorship from the government, and with in

25、creasing challenge by the Internet, only those journalists who are honest, upright, professional, and those who are to fight against evils and those who are willing to safeguard the public interest, will have their stands, leaving the above worries unnecessaryTo sum up, most journalists and their re

26、ports in this society are trustworthy. With more concern being put in this field, the public are surely to have a much healthier source of information.2011年6月11日雅思大作文题目+原创范文BY陈益民(2011-06-13 11:04:37) 转载标签： 雅思作文高分范文教育分类： 雅思作文 Some people think governments should only focus on spending public services

27、 but not waste money on the arts (such as music or panting)To want extent do you agree or disagree?“I dont see any value of this music, except for its noise”， that was how an old man complained about the recently composed music played over the park. Words like this are not rarely heard among people

28、especially when talking about governments spending. However, in my opinion, public services do need the investment from government, but it does not mean they will occupy all the government revenues without sharing with other fields, including arts such as music and paintings.Admittedly, those public

29、 services, with the road system, water system, electricity system, education, health care and employment inclusive, closely related to the life of the public, should be put into the focus of the government. No one will deny the importance of public services to the benefit of the people, the society

30、and the whole country. However, the governments duty is not only to provide those direct benefits, those practical projects, but also to create a positive social living atmosphere, although it may not look so effective in reality.Those well-signed arts, in the form of music and paintings, benefit th

31、e public in their spiritual life, should also be invested. Art works help to create a comfortable living atmosphere, stimulate their interest in life and offer them chances to relax and entertain, so that people are enabled to refresh themselves, enjoy their life and thereby contribute more to the d

32、evelopment of the society. For example, pleasant music can help to ease peoples tension, relieve their stress , and tell people to sense their lives , while paintings, on the other hand, create a beautiful environment, guide people to appreciate the world and help them to develop a sense of beauty. In this case, spending some money in this field is more than worthwhile.To sum up, spending public money on public service is important, but investment in art is als