高考英语作文必背佳作.docx

1、高考英语作文必背佳作2004 年-2009 年高考英语满分作文及名师评析2009 高考英语满分作文【全国卷I 海南、宁夏】【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电注意：1. 词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, and wont be b

2、ack until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but

3、said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语

4、言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。【江苏卷】【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除编辑文本，搜索信息收发邮件，选购商品点播音乐，下载电影如果过分依赖鼠标 (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数150 左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人

5、姓名。The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions

6、of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesnt alwa

7、ys help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们

8、生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。2008 高考英语满分作文【全国卷】【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数100 左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greet

9、ings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday a

10、nd to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照

11、顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育好句 Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks

12、 to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。评析：定语从句的使用。【江苏卷】【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

13、谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)注意：1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2、 词数150 左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding

14、, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselv

15、es in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they f

16、inish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名师点评】这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅

17、地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的 3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的好句 1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from

18、each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。评析：复合句的使用。【湖北卷】【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无

19、法更换;型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。注意：1. 词数为100 左右;2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part;3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short

20、 messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spa

21、re parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi【名师点评】本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的

22、要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的 3. consideration n.体谅好句 To my disappoint

23、ment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。评析：复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。2007 高考英语满分作文【全国卷II】【试题回放】一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处500米;2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间

24、)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100 左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan

25、 per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these se

26、rvices can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名师点评】本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which 引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。积累卡片英汉互译好词 1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利好句 All

27、these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。【安徽卷】【试题回放】假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。l 提出你喜欢的栏目。l 简要说明理由。注意：1. 词

28、数100 左右。2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4. 参考栏目：栏目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture

29、express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improv

30、e oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully,Li

31、 Hua【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy 的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这

32、种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。【江苏卷】【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。教育部倡导学生：u 每天锻炼一小时u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一辈子请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。注意：1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。2、 词数：120 左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program;教育部the Ministry of EducationGood after