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1、初三一模上海各区范文2017-2018初三一模考作文汇编专题一：图画类One 静安区94. In 60-100 words, write a story based on the pictures below.（展开合理想象，看图写一篇60-100个词的有趣的短文故事，标点符号不占格）The following words and phrases are for reference only.（以下单词和短语仅供参考） hours of studying take a break a pair of skates【分析】本篇作文题材是漫画类作文，根据题目要求，展开想象，描述这四幅图，因此文章体

2、裁应为记叙文，需注意时间地点人物的介绍，以及整篇文章所使用的时态应为一般过去时。文章重心应放在第三第四副图上，要做到详略得当。【参考答案】 One Sunday afternoon, Tom stayed home, preparing for the coming exam. After several hours study, he was tired and determined to take a break. So he took out a pair of skates, enjoying going skating on country roads. Suddenly a lit

3、tle cat rushed out from the side scared Tom a lot, but time was too short for Tom to stop. As a result, Tom fell down and the little cat was hurt. Seeing this little cat, Tom hurried to send it to the hospital nearby. Luckily, the little cat wasnt hurt badly. After treatment, Tom took it home and to

4、ok good care of it. They became good friends and lived a happy life.Two 杨浦区VII. Writing(作文)(共20分)94.In60-120 words, write a story to go along with the given pictures.(根据所给图片,合理发挥想象,用60-120个词写一个故事)(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)The following words and expressions are for reference(以下词语仅供参考)theft,

5、 handbag, bench, run away, walking stick, trip, arrest94. 参考文章：On a cloudy morning, a theft happened on a little boy when he was shopping with a basket. The thieve took the handbag out of the basket quietly. It was too late when the boy reacted to this behaviour because the thieve ran away as fast a

6、s he could. He just only asked for help. An old man heard the voice and realized what happened immediately, he used his walking stick to prevent the robber from escaping, luckily it worked. The thieve was trapped by the walking stick and fell down. The policeman came here quickly and arrested him. T

7、he old man gave back the handbag to the boy and told the boy he could be careful when he came out alone. The boy showed his great thanks to the brave man.专题二：憧憬，愿望类One虹口区/松江区VII. Writing(作文) (共20分)94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Im looking forward to in 2018” (以“2018，我期待”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点

8、符号不占格)每个人对生活都有憧憬和期待，2018年你的期待是什么？请说说你的理由。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）参考范文As far as I am concerned, the most thing I look forward to is to enter my own ideal key high school.When I am in my ideal high school, I can learn more about study and more about the society out of class instead of just c

9、oncentrating on book knowledge. If I am admitted to a boarding school, I will also have a chance to live in the dormitory with my classmates, which will enable me to learn to cooperate with others and learn to be more independent and more mature.Two 奉贤区VII. Writing (作文): (共20分) Write at least 60 wor

10、ds on the topic “Imagine 2020”（以“畅想 2020 年”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）未来已来，请发挥你的想象力，畅想2020年你的生活中会有哪些令人欣喜的变化。 (注意：短文中不得出现任何人名。校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考) enjoybe more convenient not.any longer范文imagination2020I have imagined a lot about lives in 2020. I want to summ

11、arize my imagination in two parts.The first part is high speed. In 2020, we will have quickertransportation means. Itll only takeusa few hours togoanywhere around the world. The second part is convenience. Due to the rapid development of artificial intelligence, most of the work can be done by compu

12、ters or even robots. We just need to give some simple instructions to finish complicated tasks.I believe my life in 2020 will be more interesting and wonderful.专题三：观点类One 普陀区94.write at least 60 words on the topic my opinion on getting pay for doing housework【以“我对有偿做家务的看法”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格】提示:

13、一些家长为奖励,你怎么看这件事?可以了鼓励孩子参与家务活,便给么结合自身的经历阐述观点和理t予孩子一定的报酬作为孩子承担家务的由。(注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)参考范文My opinion on getting pay for doing houseworkIt has been on hot discussion whether children should get pay for doing housework. As far as I am concerned, getting pay for doing housework is reasonab

14、le and beneficial to childrens growth. As the only child in my family, I am always encouraged to do various kinds of housework, such as washing clothes and mopping the floor. In return, my parents give me pocket money as rewards. Through this experience, not only do I become more diligent and hardwo

15、rking, but also I am able to afford what I want to buy. In addition, as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains”, I am fully aware of the value of labour and happiness in the process of doing housework.In conclusion, I firmly support the view that it is essential for children to get pay for doing h

16、ousework, which contributes to our all-round development. Two 宝山区. Writing(作文)（共20分）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Are Piggy Good for Children”（以“储蓄罐对孩子有益吗？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a guide:Do children still need piggy banks now?What can children under

17、stand by saving money in the piggy bank?(注意，短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)参考范文：Are piggy banks good for children?Some people think that piggy banks are too old-fashioned for children to use, but I think they are a great idea.Children cannot understand what saving is really all about, but by saving

18、in piggy banks, they can slowly understand it.Children might not understand what 100 yuan means until they see a lot of coins.If you have 100 yuan worth of coins, you can better understand the meaning of 100 yuan.Saving becomes fun when you can see your money slowly build up.For children, the piggy

19、bank is still best way to save money.Three 黄浦区VII. Writing94. In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “Life is not always ”. 作为一名初三学生，你的学习生活紧张忙碌。要想取得好的成绩，良好的心态很重要。你是如何看待初三的学生生活，请谈谈你的体验或想法，分享自己的故事。范文：How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school

20、 in several months. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and almost ga

21、ve it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, Ive become interested in English and Im good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Ive learned a lot from her

22、. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.专题四：书信类One 青浦区VII. Writing (作文): (共20分) 94. Read this letter from Kim and write back in at least 60 words. (阅读下列书信，写一封给Kim的回信，不少于60词，标点符号不占格。)Dear Sarah, I have a problem that I need to talk over with yo

23、u because its difficult for me to talk to my parents. I dont think they understand me. There is one thing that is important to me at the moment. I want to be happier. My parents dont let me go out with my friends very often and I often feel bored. Can you please tell me what to do?Yours,Kim书信大意：Kim的

24、父母不允许他经常与朋友们外出，为此他感到非常烦恼，希望得到Sarah的建议。Dear Kim,Im glad to hear from you and I know what bothers you now. According to what you said in the letter. I have some advice which may help you. Firstly, if you want to hang out with your friends, you should tell your parents where you go and when you will co

25、me back, they need to be sure that you safe with your friends. Besides, make sure that they can contact you wherever you go, or they may be go crazy, which may lead to the chance that you are not allowed to go out with your friends. Moreover, the reason why your parents forbid you to go out lies in

26、that they may think it will distract you from study, so you have to explain to them that hanging out with friends is a good way to relief the stress from study, and next time your parents may understand you. In brief, I hope the suggestions will help you.专题五：夹叙夹议类One 嘉定区. Writing(作文）（共20分）94. Write

27、at least 60 words on the topic “ _ brings me happiness” (以“_为我带来快乐”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 我们的生活多姿多彩，在学习和生活中，总有一些经历，习惯，爱好或一些人为你带来快乐。请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感想。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校及其他信息。否则不予评分。） The following is only for reference only (以下表达仅供参考）be full ofmake.happybe fond of Friend brings me happiness I believe

28、 that everyone can live a happy life.In my opinion,it is friend that brings me happiness.When Im in trouble,my friends are always around me and ready to do me a favor,which makes me happy.However,friendship is a round way ticket.I have already received so much love.Therefore ,in order to keep our fr

29、iendship strong,I should do more to help my friends.I should listen to them patiently when theyre annoyed by something.Also,I should give my shoulder to them when they feel sad .And I should share all my happiness with them so that the happiness is twice than before. All in all, friend can bring a l

30、ot of happiness.Why dont you build a wonderful friendship for yourself,my friend?Two 浦东区VII Writing94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The beauty in my life” （以“我生活中的美”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格）生活中的美无处不在，如在学校活动中，与家人共处时，与朋友相聚时，与动物相处时。请选择一个方面，结合发生在你自己身上的一次经历，来写一写你发现的发生在家人或师生间的亲情之美，朋友或同学间的友谊之美，人与动物

31、间的和谐之美。并说说理由。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校名或其他相关信息，否则不予评分）The beauty in my lifePeople always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I cant agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were m

32、any old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attracted my eyes. The city was covered by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ignored its beauty usually. Three 徐汇区VII. Writing (作文): (共20分) Write at least 60 words on the topic “