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作文范文之专四作文

2011专四作文

【篇一：

2011专四作文范例讲评】

2011英语专四作文范文

2011英专四级作文题目

recentlygovernmentagenciesinsomebigcitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityof“posingapollutiontax”onprivatecars.theamountoftaxprivatecarownerswouldhavetopaywoulddependontheemissionlevels,i.e.engineorvehiclesize.thishascausedquiteastiramongthepublic.someregarditasaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcarsandreducepollutioninthecity.butothersdon’tthinkso.whatisyouropinion?

writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?

范文一：

分作文

shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?

recentlythegovernmentagenciesinsomebigcitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityofputtinga“pollutiontax”onprivatecars.thishascausedagreatstiramongthepublic.somepeopleholdtheopinionthatitisaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcarsandreducetheamountofpollutioninthecity,butothersdon’tthinkso.asfarasi’mconcerned,privatecarownersshouldbeproperlytaxedforpollution.

thefollowingtworeasonsareusedtosupportmypointofview.ononehand,aswellknowntous,oursurroundingisseriouslypollutedespeciallybycarpollution.therefore,“pollutiontax”onprivatecarcaneffectivelyremindusoftheseverelypollution.thenthenumberofcarsandpollutioninthecitycanbereducedinsomeway.ontheotherhand,weknowthatwearefacingtheresourcecrisis.however,moreprivatecarswilluseupmoregasorotherresources.soifwetaxprivatecarownersforpollution,wecandecreasetheuseofresourcesandthenprotecttheenvironmentfrompollutionindirectly.

inconclusion,ithinkthatprivatecarownersshouldbeproperlytaxedforpollution.itisnotonlyforpunishmentbutalsoforwarning.“pollutiontax”onprivatecarsisaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcars,reducepollutionandprotectresources.fromnowon,asstudents,weshouldtryourbesttocarryoutit,suchasgoingsomewherefarawaybybus,orotherpublictransportations.

阅卷专家评论：

1.审题基本准确；

2.内容基本切题；

3.结构不够严谨；

4.论据缺乏说服力，论述不够充分；

5.语言一般，不够流畅。

范文二：

分作文

shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?

asthedevelopmentofoursociety,moreandmorepeoplebuyprivatecars.andrecentlygovernmentagenciesinsomecitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityofputtinga“pollutiontax”onprivatecars,whichhasarousedquiteastiramongthepublic.inmyopinion,theprivatecarownersshouldnotbetaxedforpollution,andihavethreereasonsformyopinion.

firstly,ithinktheemissionlevelscan’tdecidehowmuchpollutionthecarhadmadeandhowmuchmoneytheownershouldbetaxed.forexample,acarwithasmallerenginemaybeproducelesspollution,butiftheowneruseitmorefrequently,ofcourseitwillproducemorepollution.sothetaxshouldn’tdependontheemissionlevels.

secondly,thetaxforpollutionmaybemoreharmfultoourenvironment.asyouknow,ifapersonpaysomemoneyforthepollution,hewillthinkthereisnoresponsibilityforhiscarandthereisnoneedforhimtoprotecttheenvironment,becausehehasalreadypaythemoneyfortheenvironment.thenhemaypaylittleattentiontotheenvironment,andevenharmtheenvironment.so“pollutiontax”maybenotbegoodfortheenvironment.

thirdly,protecttheenvironmentisthedutyofeveryofus,notjustseveralprivatecarowners.ifthegovernmentjustforcesomeprivatecarownerstopaythe“pollutiontax”,therestofuswillthinkthereisnodutyforustoprotecttheenvironment.thentherewillbemorepeopletodestroytheenvironment,andlesspeopletoprotecttheenvironment.ofcourse,theresultofthe“pollutiontax”willbeopposetotheoriginalpurposeofthegovernment.

allinall,“pollutiontax”isnotgoodtoourenvironment.andweshouldalsorememberthatthedutyofprotecttheenvironmentisnotjustthedutyofseveralprivatecarowners,butthedutyofeveryoneofus.

专家评论：

1.审题准确到位；

2.内容切题充实；

3.观点清晰独到；

4.结构严谨合理；

5.有一些语言错误。

范文三：

作文

privatecarownersshouldbetaxedforpollution

thefirstandforemostthingtoconsideristhevolumeofvehiclethatbelongstogovernmentitself.asthegovernmentcallsfortakingpublictransportationratherthansmallvehicle,the“pollutiontax”imposedonstatedownedvehicleswhichisalmostforpersonaluseshouldbemoreseverethanthatonprivatevehicles.aslongasthegovernmentcreatestheimageofreducingpollutionbyconstrainingitsvolumeofvehicletonesserarylevel,willthepublicbegintolayemphasisonthereductionofvehiclesandalsoenvironmentalprotection.

thereisafurtherconsiderationthatthetaxshouldnotonlybejudgedbytheengineor

vehicles’sizes,simplybecausenoteveryonedrivesthesamedistance.inotherwords,the“pollutiontax”willbeenhancedthroughthecollaborationwithotherformsoftax,like“oiltax”.theintroductionoftaxportfoliocanmaketaxpaymentreasonablewhentheindividualinterestissafeguarded.

itiscertainthat“pollutiontax”cancontributetotheenvironmentprotection.however,thetaxwillnotfullyfunctionunlessamoreconsiderateschemeofpoliciestakenintoaccount.英语专业四级考试在线课堂

专家评论：

1.观点新颖明确；

2.内容切实到位；

3.篇章结构清晰；

4.衔接自然合理；

5.语言流畅，词汇丰富，句式多变；

6.有一些语言错误。

牢记英专四级合格作文要求：

论点明确、清楚

论证层次分明

结构严谨

紧扣论点讨论分析，论证有说服力

观点阐述合乎逻辑

衔接自然、顺畅

语言运用得体

【篇二：

2011年专四作文强化班材料】

moduleone

requirementsfortem-4composition

一2004《大纲》对写作部份的要求

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a.作文：

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能根据所给作文题目，提纲或图表，数据等，写一篇200个单词左右的作文。

能做到内容切题，完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺，表达得体。

考试时间为35分钟。

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b.便条：

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能根据所给提示写50-60个单词的便条，通知、请帖等。

能做到格式正确，语言得体。

考试时间为10分钟。

二．测试形式

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本部份为主观题，分两节：

sectionasectionb。

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sectiona:

composition

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本节是命题作文，文章体裁主要属于说明文，议论文或记叙文的范围。

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sectionb:

note-writing

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本节是写便条。

三．新大纲与旧大纲的不同

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a.短文写作的字数由原来的150字增加到200字。

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b.便条写作的计分由原来的5分增加到10分

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c.写作总分由原来的20分增加到25分。

四．评分原则

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1．总体评分法。

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2．从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。

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a.作文是否体现主题。

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b.结构是否合理

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c.语法文字是否有重大错误

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d.卷面布局是否整洁

五．评分标准

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a.命题作文

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15~14分：

切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，几本无语言错误。

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13~11分：

切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。

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11~9分：

基本切题。

表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。

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8~6分：

基本切题。

表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。

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5分以上：

条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有语法错误，且多数为严重错误。

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字数要求：

150-170字，扣1分；130-150字，扣2分；110-130字，扣3分；90-110字，.扣4分；90字以下，至多给5分。

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另外，如照抄提示中原句，不得计入所写字数。

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b.便条：

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格式完整，结构合理，内容表达清楚，行文连贯，能实现应用文的交际功能

等。

六．分档样卷

14分档：

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withtheinternetbecominganindispensablepartofmodernpeople’slife,

makingfriendsonlineenjoysitsgreatpopularity,especiallyamongyoungpeople.however,isitwisetomakefriendsonline,asmanyparentsandteachersareworryingabout?

asfarasiamconcerned,istronglyopposebeingaddictedtomakingfriendsonline.

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firstly,toomuchattentiontoonlinefriendsdistractsyourconcernstothetrue

friendsandfamiliesintherealworld.ifwelookaround,weoftenfindalotofsametime,thecommunicationbetweenthemandfriendsaroundthemarebecominglessandless.therefore,theyfeellonelierinreallifeandspendmoretimeoninternet.

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besides,onlinefriendsareoftendisguised.alargenumberofcaseshave

provedthatmanycriminalsmakeuseofinternettocheatofmoneyorlove.eveniftheyarenotcheaters,theytendtobetotallydifferentpersonswhenyougetinactualcontactwiththem.there’salwaysagapbetweentherealworldandtheimaginaryone.

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nevertheless,itisunwisetomakefriendsonline.thosewhoareindulgingin

internetshouldtothefriendshipandkinshipinthereallife.whatyoushoulddoistoseeksolution,butnottoescape.

12分档：

nowadays,ithasbeenafashiontomakefriendsonline,andmoreandmoreteenagers,collegestudentsandevenmanyadultswillspendalotoftimechattingwithidon’tthinkitiswisetomakefriendsonline.

firstly,mostofpeoplewillnotrevealtheirrealidentityontheinternet,whichwillnotenableyoutomaketruefriends.justimagine,ayoungladyyouaretalkingwithmaybeanoldman,andi’besides,thefriendsonlinecanbringbadeffecttopeople,especiallyforteenagers.thecertaindegree,atlast,makingfriendsonlinecandobadtotherelationshipbetweenyouandyourfamilyandfriendsinreallife.beingaddictedtotheinternetmakesyouignorethereality.youwillbeangryaboutyourparents’inaword,itisnotwisetomakefriendsonline.ihopeeveryonecanfocusontherealityinsteadofwastingtoomuchtimemakingfriendsontheinternet.

9分档：

thereisatendencywecan’tdenythatmostofushaveaccesstointernet.susequently,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeacommonthing.somemayarguethatmakingfriendsonlineisn’wisertomakefriendsonline.

ononehand,it’with.thenmakingfriendsonlineisagoodwaytosolvethisproblem.meanwhile,wecannotonlygainfriendship,butalsoexchangeourminds.inthisway,weobtainasenseofsatisfactionfromtalkingwithastrangerwhowilltendtosaybeautifulwordstowardus.ontheotherhand,makingfriendsonlinesometimes,friendsonlineencourageustoreadhelpfulbookswherewillbeabletolearnmore.

allinall,frommypointofview,onlineaslongasweuseitproperly.

7分档：

peoplewouldliketomakethebestinternettobroadentheirminds,theycangetlargeinformation,theycanplayinterestinggames,eventheycanfriendsonline.whileaquestionhasbeenarisen:

“isitwisetomakefriendsonline?

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youthathemoneyeagerlyandtotrustasocalledonlinefriend.

solet’sdo

5分档：

ithinkitiswisetomakefriendsonline.first,nowjob’spressuremoreandmore.everyonecann’tbettertalkfacetoface.second,friendsonlinemayspeakeverthingofthem.

third,friendsonlinemayhelpsomethin