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第一章英语四级考试作文题评分原则及标准

1。

本题满分为15分，最后再换算成标准分。

2。

评分标准共分五等：

2分，5分，8分，11分，14分。

3。

阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。

但不得加或减半分。

4。

评分标准

2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分-基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分-基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分-切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分-切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

（注：

白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分.）

在总体评分原则指导下，四级写作的评分强调五项标准，既内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式多变和语言规范。

第二章应试作文分析

第一节英语四级考试作文体裁与例证

一说明文

说明文是用来解释，介绍和阐述事物的发生，结果，特征，性质，状态以及功能的文章。

目的在于提供知识信息，表明观点。

由于说明文的宗旨是解释和说明，因此完全是就事论事的阐述，不带任何感情色彩，旨在使读者对所解释的事物有一个清楚的，完整地了解和认识。

说明文写作特点

（1）客观性

说明文的主要功能是解释事物，阐明事理以达到传递信息的目的，所以作者应以客观而不带自己好恶倾向的态度对所说明的事物进行就事论事的客观描述和解释。

（2）解说性

说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的文体，它主要对事物的性质，形状，成荫，功能，特点等作出直接的解说，把事物或事理提供给读者。

因此写作时要求深入浅出，条理分明，例证充分，合乎逻辑。

（3）掌握说明顺序

要把说明文写的条理例分明，必须了解说明的顺序。

常见的顺序有：

时间顺序，空间顺序，逻辑顺序和认识顺序。

（4）了解写作方法

写说明文常使用的方法有定义法，举例法，对比法，分类法，比喻法和因果法等。

（5）准确用词

说明文用词要直截了当，避免使用话里浮夸和含义模糊的赐予。

文章结束时，语言应短而有力。

说明文主要包括现象解释型和问题解决型

1.现象解释型

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudentUseofComputers.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositiononthechartandtheoutlinebelow:

Averagenumberofhoursastudentspendsoncomputerperweek

1）下图所示为1990年，1995年，2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化;

2）请说明这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途，价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）;

3）你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题

StudentuseofComputers

Accordingtothechart,wecanlearnthatthenumberofhoursastudentspendsoncomputersperweekhasgrownrapidlyinrecentyears.Thechartshows,from1990to1995,theaveragehoursastudentspentoncomputersineveryweekwereonlydoubled.However,in2000,thenumbergrewto20hours,whichwasfivetimesasmanyasthatin1995.

Therearemanyreasonscontributingtothistremendousgrowth.Firstofall,thecontinuingdevelopmentoftechnologybringsdownthepriceofcomputers,whichenablesmanystudentstoownone.Thisinevitablyencouragesstudentstospendmoretimeoncomputers.Moreover,theknowledgeprovidedonInternetissorichthatstudentscan’tturntheirattentionfromit.Inaddition,moreandmoreacademicworkisaskedtobedonethroughcomputers.Asaresult,itgoeswithoutsayingthatstudentsspendmoreandmoretimeoncomputers.

AsfarasIamconcerned,therearestillproblemsinstudents’useofcomputers.Foronething,sincestudentsdidnotreceivecomputereducationatanearlyage,theysometimescannothaveenoughskillstocommandcomputers.Foranother,studentswhodonothavehighself-disciplinesmayabandonthemselvestocomputer,whichwillgreatlyaffecttheiracademicachievement.Toconclude,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoguaranteestudents’reasonableuseofcomputers.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudentSelectingTheirLecturers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinebelow:

1）有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师

2）学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素

3）学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题

StudentsSelectingTheirLecturers

Nowadays,manyuniversitiesentitlestudentstochoosefreelythelecturersforcourses,whichhasarousedcommonconcern.Whatimpressesusmostisthatthisnewpolicyisbecomingmoreandmorepopularamongstudents.Therearemanydifferentfactorsdecidingstudents’choosinglecturersforcourses.

Firstofall,ateacher’sprofessionalknowledgeandabilityplayacriticalroleinstudentsmakingtheirfinaldecision.What’smore,teachingmethodsandskillsarealsoessentialfactorsthatstudentswilltakeintoaccount.Forexample,NewOrientalSchoolhasattractedlotsofstudentstoalargeextentbecauseofitsteachers’uniqueteachingmethods.Inaddition,ateacher’shumorsenseisalsowhatmanystudentswillconsider.Therefore,thefreedomofchoosinglecturerstosomeextentisbeneficialtostudentsintheirstudy.

AsfarasIamconcerned,aseverythinghasitsprosandcons,thefreedomofchoosinglecturerscannotonlybenefitstudentsbutalsobringsomeproblems.Ontheonehand,studentscanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirvisionunderthedirectionofsomecompetentlecturers.Ontheotherhand,sinceitisafreechoice,theexcellentteacherswillbecomethefocusofmoststudents’choosing,whichwillleadtoanunreasonableclasssizeandaffectteachingeffectseriously.Inaword,studentsshouldbeprudentindecidingwhichlecturertochooseaccordingtotheirownneed.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayOnTransportation.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbasedonthechartandtheoutlinegivenbelow:

People’sPreferenceforDifferentTransportation

1）上图所示为在长途旅行时，选择这三种交通工具出行的人数比例的对比情况

2）出现这种现象的原因

3）这种现象可能产生的影响

OnTransportation

Itisclearthatamongthethreedifferentkindsoftransportation,morethan50%peopleprefertotravelbytrain.However,peoplewhochooseplaneandcararelessthan10%and30%respectively.Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.

Firstofall,itisfarcheaperandmoreeconomictotravelbytrainthanplaneorcar,whichcandirectlycutpeople’stravelcost.What’smore,theaccidentshappeningtotrainsarenotasmanyastoplanesorcars.Thisindicatesthattrainisoneofthesafemeansoftransportation,sopeoplewhotravelbytrainwillnotworrytoomuchabouttheirsafety.Finally,peoplewhotravelbytraincanhavemoreopportunitiestohaveacloselookatdifferentcitiesbecausetrainsusuallystopmanytimesduringthewholejourney.

AsfarasIamconcerned,trainshavemanyadvantages,whichplanesandcarscannotrivalintermsoflong-distancetravel.However,mostpeopletravellingbytrainscanalsoarousesomebigproblems,especiallyinholidays.Ontheonehand,thecarriageswillbecomecrowdedandtherebystuffy.Ontheotherhand,therateofcrimes,forexample,theft,ontrainswillrise,becausetravelerscannottakecareoftheirbelongingswhentheyevencan’tstandstraight.Therefore,itisnecessaryfortravelerstobeprudentbeforetheydecidewhichmeansoftransportationtotake.

2.问题解决型

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSucceedinaJobInteriew.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow:

1）面试在求职过程中的作用

2）取得面试成功的因素：

仪表、举止、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…

HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview

Theimportanceofajobinterviewhasbeenoneofthefocusesdiscussedbypeople.Itisobviousthatinterviewisagoodchancetodisplaytalents.Additionally,excellentperformanceinaninterviewwillenabletheintervieweetoleaveagoodimpressionontheinterviewerandfinallywinthejob.Therefore,howtosucceedinajobinterviewisworthpayingattentionto.

Ontheonehand,intervieweesshoulddressneatlyandproperly.Thefirstimpressionalwaysstartsfromone’sappearance.Ontheotherhand,goodmannersareequallyimportant.Forexample,one’swordsshouldbeformalandcourteous.Inaddition,theintervieweemustdemonstrateclearlyhisaptitudeandskillsforthejobandhisknowledgeaboutjob-relatedareas.

Infact,morethatthreewayscanbeadopted.Asforme,inordertosucceedinajobinterviewtheintervieweeshouldhavetheabilitytodothejob,makecarefulpreparationandhaveafairlyconfidentandhonestperformance.Undoubtedly,itisnecessarythatweshouldgainsomeknowledgeofhowtoperformbetterinajobinterview.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSay“No”toPiratedProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1）目前盗版的现象比较严重

2）造成这种现象的原因及危害

3）我们应该怎么做

Say“No”toPiratedProducts

Itiswell-knownthatpiracyisacriminalbehavior,butinmodernsocietypiracyisquiterampant.Therearetoomanyexamples,suchaspiratedtapes,CDsandhi-techdevices,tobelistedindividually.Shortlyafteranewly-developedproductisonthemarket,peoplewillfinditspiratedcounterpartsinthestores.

Publicattentionshouldbepaidtothefactthatpiracyiscausinggreatharm.Ontheonehand,piratedproductswilldisturbtheorderofE-productionmarketandculturemarket.Ontheotherhand,piratedproductsmayhavemanyviruses,soit’sverydangerousforthecustomerstousethem.Therefore,itishightimethatwelaidconsiderablespecialemphasisonprohibitingpiracy.

Firstofall,thegovernmentshouldcalloneveryonetofightthebattleagainstpiracy.Itisthedutyofthegovernmenttoletpeopleknowtheimportanceoffightingpiracy.Inaddition,ascustomers,weshouldnotbuyanduseanypiratedproducts.Besides,lawsandregulationsonpiracyshouldbemadeandcarriedoutstrictly.Onlyinthiswaycanweprohibitpiracyeffectively.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSaveWaterResources.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow:

1）目前中国的水资源正以非常惊人的速度减少，水资源的减少将产生非常严重的问题

2）我们应怎么做才能保护水资源

HowtoSaveWaterResources

Itisgenerallyacceptedthatwateristhesourceoflife.Withoutwater,anythingintheworldwillnotsurvive.However,atpresentourwaterresourcesaredisappearingatafastspeed.ItisreportedthatinChina,thelackofsupplyquantityofwaterresourcesreaches6billionm3.Therefore,howtosavewaterresourcesisworthpayingattentionto.

Manyafactorplaysanimportantroleinsolvingthisproblem.First,weshouldcultivatewater-savingawarenessandshouldregarditdisgracefultowastewater.Second,weshouldsavewaterinourdailylife,forexample,turningoffthetapafterwashing.Third,thewaterbillshouldberaisedtodiscouragepeopletowastewater.

AsfarasIamconcerned,thosefactoriesthatpolluterwaterresou