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广州一模试写
广州一模读后续写
Ittookplaceinateachersfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.
Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogoto
thestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.
Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:
awindow-openingcat!
"
Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.
文中主要线索
1.inateacher'sfamily(indicateuniquewaysofeducatingchildren)
2.notacommondecorationbutanantique(thevaseisvaluable)
3.hismother'sfavouritepossession(thevaseisallthemorevaluable)
4.Fearingpunishment(thesignificanceofthevasementionedabovemadehimmorefearfulofpunishment,possiblyseverepunishment,)
providesbackgroundfortellingalie
5aliearises-aneighbour'scat,thearch-criminal
6.Hismotherwasquiteclear
However,Sherealizedsheshouldn'tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.
(sotheplotinthecontinuationwritingshouldbedesignedaccordingly,anotherideashouldalsobepresented)
7.hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.(thisdetailedcanbeincludedinthe1stparagraphforcoherence)
8.achocolateboxoutofadrawer(achocolateboxactsasamediabetweenthemotherandherson,asabonusandspunishment)
我的下水文:
Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:
awindow-openingcat!
" Onhearingthis,hefeltalittlebewildered.Inallhasteandterror,herealizedperhapswhathemadeupdidn’tholdmuchwater.Yethetriedhardtosticktohispreviouslieandinsistedthathewastellingthetruth.Muchbeyondhisexpectation,however,hismotherdidn’tlosehertemperandexposehim.Instead,sheapproachedhimandpressed2chocolatestohissweatyandshakinghands.“Thesearearewardfortherepair.”83
Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared. Hesuddenlyfeltbloodrushtohisface.“Mom,ThecatwaswrongedandIlied...hewaschoked“WithaseriousandcalmtoneMumstated”Icertainlyknowthetruth.ButIhopeyouspititoutyourself.Meanwhileyoucannotgetawaywithyourdishonesty“Theboynoddedhisagreementunderstandinglyandquietlyputbackthe2chocolatesbackintothebox.Themumsuccessfullyrootedafinequality,honesty,inherson160words