广州一模试写.docx

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广州一模试写

广州一模读后续写

Ittookplaceinateachersfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.

Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogoto

thestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.

Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:

awindow-openingcat!

"

Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.

文中主要线索

1.inateacher'sfamily（indicateuniquewaysofeducatingchildren）

2.notacommondecorationbutanantique（thevaseisvaluable）

3.hismother'sfavouritepossession（thevaseisallthemorevaluable）

4.Fearingpunishment（thesignificanceofthevasementionedabovemadehimmorefearfulofpunishment,possiblyseverepunishment，）

providesbackgroundfortellingalie

5aliearises-aneighbour'scat,thearch-criminal

6.Hismotherwasquiteclear

However,Sherealizedsheshouldn'tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.

（sotheplotinthecontinuationwritingshouldbedesignedaccordingly,anotherideashouldalsobepresented）

7.hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.（thisdetailedcanbeincludedinthe1stparagraphforcoherence）

8.achocolateboxoutofadrawer（achocolateboxactsasamediabetweenthemotherandherson,asabonusandspunishment）

我的下水文：

Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:

awindow-openingcat!

" Onhearingthis,hefeltalittlebewildered.Inallhasteandterror,herealizedperhapswhathemadeupdidn’tholdmuchwater.Yethetriedhardtosticktohispreviouslieandinsistedthathewastellingthetruth.Muchbeyondhisexpectation,however,hismotherdidn’tlosehertemperandexposehim.Instead,sheapproachedhimandpressed2chocolatestohissweatyandshakinghands.“Thesearearewardfortherepair.”83

Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared. Hesuddenlyfeltbloodrushtohisface.“Mom,ThecatwaswrongedandIlied...hewaschoked“WithaseriousandcalmtoneMumstated”Icertainlyknowthetruth.ButIhopeyouspititoutyourself.Meanwhileyoucannotgetawaywithyourdishonesty“Theboynoddedhisagreementunderstandinglyandquietlyputbackthe2chocolatesbackintothebox.Themumsuccessfullyrootedafinequality,honesty,inherson160words