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短文改错

高考英语短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

No.1

AshockingincidentwashappenedinBeijingZoo.IwasvisitingthezoowhileIheardbearsroaringterribly.Ihurriedtowherebearsstayedin.Isawtheblackbearsinjuredandrollonthegroundpainfully.Oneofthemwashurttooserioustomoveandfeed.Thepeoplearoundwereastonished.Ilearnedthiswasastudentfromafamousuniversitywhocausethetrouble.Hepouredsulphuricacid（硫酸）ontothebearswhilepretendtofeedthem.Howashame!

Animalsareourfriends.Somethingmustbedonetopreventthemfrominjured.

1.washappened去掉was2.when→while3.stayedin去in4.roll→rolling

5.serious→seriously6.thiswas→it7.cause→caused8.pretend→pretending

9.How→What10.from后加being

No.2

Gabriellaworksatauniversityasaadviser.Studentscancomeorseeherwithmanyaproblemwhentheyneedhelp.Alotofthestudentsareworryingabouttheirstudiesandexams.Somewanttohelpwiththeproblemconnectedwithrentingflats.Thebiggestproblem,although,isloneliness.Collegesareexcitingplacesbutstudentsfindithardlytomakefriends.Theymisstheirfamilyandfeellostonthenewenvironment.Theywereupset.Gabriella’sjobistolistenandtrytounderstandwhattheyareanxious.Butofcourseshealsogivespracticaladvicewhenitisneededontheirquestions.

1.aadviser→an2.orsee→and3.worrying→worried4.wantto去掉to

5.although→though6.hardly→hard7.onthe→in8.Theywere→are

9.anxious后加about10.questions→problems

No.3

Iwentouttoseeafilmaftersupper.Onmywaytoacinema,ImetanEnglishmanwasnamedJohn,whohadlosthisway.Igaveupthechancetoseethefilmandtakehimtohishotel.Whilegoingthere,ItoldhimthegreatchangeshadtakenplaceinmycountryinthepastafewyearsandJohntoldmesomethingabouthiscountry.ThoughIhadlostthefilm,Ifeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedJohngotoutoftrouble,butpractisedmyspokenEnglish.Inmysurprise,myspokenEnglishwashighthoughtofbyhm.IfIhadn’tworkedhardinEnglish,IwouldnotevenhavebeenabletohelpJohn!

1.acinema→the2.wasnamed去掉was3.take→took4.changes后加that/which

5.afew去掉a6.lost→missed7.got→get8.In→To9.high→highly

10.inEnglish→at

No.4

Aperson’sagenolongertellsyousomethingabout hissocialposition,marriageorhealthy.There’snotlonger aparticularyearwhenonegoestoschoolorgoesto workorgetsmarriedorstartafamily.Thesocialclock thatkeepsusontimeandtellsuswhengotoschool,get ajob,orstopworkingisn’tasstrongasitwasusedtobe.Itdoesn’tsurpriseustosounda28-year-olduniversitypresidentora35-year-oldgrandmother,or70-year-oldmanwhohasbecomeafatherforthefirsttime.Whatweallknow,publicideasarechangednowadays.                     

1.something→anything2.healthy→health3.notlonger→no4.start→starts

5.gotoschool前加to6.wasused去掉was7.sound→hear8.70-year-old前加a

9.What→As10.changed→changing

No.5

Asisreportedthattheearthquakewassostrongastocause68,109deathand364,552peoplewerehurt.Manybuildingsweredestroyedandover5millionspeoplearelivingahardlife.Justimagininghowthestudentsthereneedtohelpandthatschoolsshouldbebuiltsothattheycanreturntoclasses.Peopleallovertheworldaretryinghisbesttohelpthem.HereStudents’Unioncallseveryonetogiveawayyouroldclothes,pocketmoney,usedbooksorsomethingother.Allthematerialandmoneytobecollectedwillbesenttothestrickenareasassoonaspossibly.

1.As→It2.death→deaths3.millions→million4.imagining→imagine

5.needto去掉to6.his→their7.everyone后加on8.other→else

9.material→materials10.possibly→possible

No.6

ItisapleasureofmetowritethislettertotellyouhowmuchIenjoyedmystayinginyourfamily.ThiswasmyfirsttimevisittoanEnglishfamily.Atfirst,IwasworryingaboutmypoorEnglish.Yetseeingyourwifewaitformewithwarmsmiles,Iimmediatelyknewallwouldberight.ThereareotherhappymemorieswhatI’llkeepwithmeforever.Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesinthetrees.Ialsolikedthefishimgtrip.Itwassogreatfun.

1.of→for2.staying→stay3.firsttime去掉time4.worrying→worried

5.wait→waiting6.right前加all7.what→that/which8.saw→seeing

9.inthe→on10.so→such

No.1

Deareditor，

I’mworriedaboutifIcanfindasuitablejobwhenIgraduatefromuniversitybecausethatI’mnotasociablegirl.Ispentmostofmyowntimeonmystudy,soIhaveonlyafewfriends.It’sdifficultofmetocommunicatewithboysandgirls.ThoughItrytogetalonggoodwiththem,Icannotexpressmewell.SometimesIevendon’tknowwhatIshouldspeakwhenIamwithboysorteachers.Ihavelostmanychancestochangemylifebecausemycharacter.Iwanttobecomethesociablegirlbutitisnoteasy.IhopethatIcangetsomeadvicesfromyou.

1.if→whether2.去掉that3.spent→spend4.of→for5.good→well

6.me→myself7.speak→say8.because后加of9.the→a10.advices→advice

No.2

OnedayMrs.Blackwrotealettertoherfriend,thatwasadoctor,invitedhimtohavedinnerwithherfamily.Afewdayslate,thedoctorwroteback,butshewasnotabletoreadhiswriting,becausetheletterwaswrittentoocareless.Sheturnedtoherhusbandforhishelp.Herhusbandgottheidea.Hetoldherthatachemistcouldreadunderstandthedoctor’swriting.SoMrs.Blackcametothechemist’sshop.Thechemistintheshopreadtheletterandthengaveheralargebottlemedicine.YetMrs.Blackstillhadnotideawhetherherfriendwouldgotohavedinnerornot.

1.that→who2.invited→inviting3.late→later4.careless→carelessly5.去掉his

6.the→an7.去掉understand8.bottle后加of9.not→no10.go→come

No.3

Timeisimportant.Losingtimewillnevercomeback.Wemustrememberitinourdailylifeandmakewelluseoftime.Onlybythiswaycanwesucceed.Whatcanwemakefulluseoftime?

First,we’dbettertomakeaplan.Weshouldarrangeourstudy,workandrestandknowwhichweshoulddonextsothatwecansavemuchtimeaspossible.Weshouldspendeveryminutetimeonit.Afterwestudyorworkforalongtimewecantakethegoodrest.Ithinkthatallofusshouldemphasizeusingourtimeeffective.

1.losing→lost2.well→good3.by→in4.What→How5.去掉to6.which→what

7.much前加as8.去掉time9.thegood→a10.effective→effectively

No.4

TheAustraliangovernmenthavethelongestfenceintheworld.Itis9,500kilometerslongerwith20,000menlookafterit.Theyoftendrivealongitandrepairit.Iftheydon’t,thedingoeswillgetin.Dingoeswerewilddogs,thefiercestkillersinAustralia.Wildanimalsusuallykillforthefood,butdingoesforpleasure.Dingoeskilled600,000sheepsinQueenslandfortenyears.Thefarmersfeltangrily,buttheycouldn’tstopthedingoes.Theproblemwassobigforthefarmerstosolve.Sothegovernmentagreedbuildthefence.

1.have→has2.longer→long3.look→looking4.Dingoeswere→are5.去掉the

6.sheeps→sheep7.forten→in8.angrily→angry9.so→too10.build前加to

No.5

It’sdifficultofparentstoteachtheirchildrentoberesponsibleforhousework,butwiththefollowedsuggestions,youreallycanmanagetodoingit.Ifyougiveyourchildrentheimpressiontheycan’tdoanythingquiteright,theywillregardthemasunablepersons.Unlesstheybelievethemselves,they’llneverbecometotalindependent.Don’talwaysscoldthem;givelotsofpraiseinsteadof.Talkaboutwhatthey’vedoneright,notaboutthattheyhaven’tdone.Ifyourchildrencompleteadifficulttask,rewardhimwithaSundaytriporaballgame.

1.of→for　2.followed→following　3.doing→do4.they前加that

5.them→themselves6.believe后加in7.total→totally8.insteadof去掉of

9.notaboutthat→what10.him→them

No.6

AsthedevelopmentoftheInternet,thenetbarplaysanimportantroleonpeople'slife.Moreandmorestudentsliketogotonetbars.Theywereabsorbedinplayinggames,ormakingfriends.Someoftengoontoplayinglateintothenightinthenetbar.Asaresult,notonlyitdoharmtotheirhealthybutalsoithasabadeffectontheirstudies.Luckily,manyparentshaverecognizedit.Recently,sixthousandsstudentsguaranteedtheywouldbefarawayfromnetbarsinJinzhoucity,LiaoningProvince.Thisisnecessaryforthestudentstogetridoffthebadhabit.

1.As→With2.on→in3.were→are4.去掉to5.notonly后加does

6.healthy→health7.recognized→realized8.thousands→thousand9.This→It

10.off→of

No.1

WelcometotheGreatWall.TheGreatWallofChinawasoneofthewonderoftheworld.Itisoneofthefewman-madeobjectsonearthwhatcanbeseenonthemoon.Itdatedfromabout770BC.Itismorethan6000kilometreslong,6-7metreshighor4-5metreswide.Alltheworkwasdonewithhand.Manypeoplewereforcedtoworkonthewall.NowtheGreatWallbecomeaplaceofinterest.WeallknowthefamousChinesesaying:

“HewhodonotreachtheGreatWallisn’tatrueman.”NowletmetoshowyouaroundtheGreatWall.Thatway,Please.

1.was→is2.wonder→wonders3.what→that4.dated→dates5.or→and

6.with→by7.become前加has8.do→does9.去掉to10.That→This

No.2

Inmanycountries,womanarelookeddownupon.It’smoredifficultofthemtogetsomeworkthanmen.Inordertogetajob,theysometimehavetotellalie.That'sunfair.Onfact,womencanworknoworsethanmen.There'snothingwhatwomencan'tdo.Perhaps,they’rebetterattheirworkthanmen.Forexamples,inmakingtelephones,