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英文投诉信表达及例文
DearSirorMadam,
Iamwritingtoexpress/airdissatisfaction/disappointment/concernregardingaccommodation.Iwouldprefertomoveintoasingleroomnextsemester,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.
Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.
Tosolvethisdifficulty/surmountthisdifficulty/improvethissituation/crackthishardnut,Ihopetodrawtheattentionoftheauthoritiesconcerned.Iamsureyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionformeistomoveintoaroomofmyown.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
DearSir,
Iamhappythattherefrigeratorweorderedlastweekhasarrivedontime.Butitisagreatpitythatwefindthereissomethingwrongwiththerefrigerationfacilities.
Afterweuseditforseveraldays.wefoundthatfoodstoredintherefrigeratingcompartmentturnedbadquickly.Whenwefinallydecidedtotakethetemperatureinit,weweresurprisedtofinditwasaround15℃,farfromthestandardtemperturerangefrom0℃to9℃。
Thisproblemhasaffectedournormallife.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowwhetherornotyoucansendarepairmanassoonaspossible?
Ihopethatmyproblemwillgetyourkindconsideration.
Yoursfaithfully,
LiMing
DearSir,
Iamwritingtoletyouknowthedeplorableattitudeofoneofyourstaffmember.Ireceivedmynotebookforonemonthfromyourcomputerandthoughtthereweresomeproblems:
thescreenisalwaysblackwhenIdonothing.
However,whenIcalledyourComplaintsDepartment,thegirlwhoansweredmyphonewasveryrude.Foronethingsheinterruptedmecontinually,foranothersheevensaidthatthefaultwasmyown.Needlesstosay,suchawayofdealingwithcustomersisunacceptable.
Iwouldliketosuggestthatthegirlinquestionshouldbedisciplined,andinstructedontheproperwaytodealwithclients.AndIhopeshecanmakeformalapologytome.
Anearlyresponsewillbeappreciated.
Sincerelyyours,
ben
亲爱的先生:
我写这封信是为了让你知道你们一个员工的服务态度。
我收到你们上个月的话费单后发现有些计算错误,我觉得我被多收了两个国际长途费用。
但当我打电话询问客服部门时,接电话的女孩态度非常粗鲁。
一方面她总是打断我的话,另一方面她甚至说错误在我。
这样对待客户的态度实在让人难以接受。
我建议对这个女孩进行惩罚,另外告诉该如何对待客户。
我希望她能向我正式道歉。
请早日回复。
真挚的:
堂娜
3.必背经典范文
DearSirorMadam,
IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextsemester.Iwouldliketohaveasingleroom,becauseIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.
Iamdissatisfiedwithmypresentroommatebecauseofhisinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlymakescallsatnight.Inaddition,heoftenusesmythingswithoutaskingformypermission.Undersuchcircumstances,Ifinditdifficulttoconcentrateonmystudies,andIamfallingbehindinmyassignments.
Ibelieveyouwillagreethattheonlysolutionisformetomoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwillbefreefromthesekindsofdistractions.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldarrangeasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuilding.
Sincerelyyours,
TomWilliams
亲爱的女士或先生:
我写信来是告诉您下学期我想搬到一个新房间。
我想要一个单独房间,因为我觉得现在这样合住非常不方便。
我之所以对我现在的室友不满是因为他毫不顾及他人的行为。
一方面,他老是有朋友来访;另一方面,他夜里经常打电话。
另外,他经常不经过我允许就用我的东西。
在这种情况下,我很难专心学习,现在我的成绩已经下降了。
我相信您肯定同意惟一的解决办法就是我搬到单独的房间,那样就没有什么干扰了。
如果您能帮我安排一个单独的房间,最好不要在目前这个楼里,我将万分感谢。
您真挚的:
汤姆·威廉姆
DearManager,
IventuretowritetocomplainaboutthequalityofthedigitalcameraIboughtlastFridayatyourstore.Duringthefivedaysthecamerahasbeeninmypossession,problemshaveemergedoneafteranother.Foronething,thescreenisalwaysblack,makingthecameranodifferentfromatraditionalone.Foranother,thebatteryisdistressingasitsupportsthecamera’soperationforonlytwohours.Therefore,Iwishtoexchangeitforanothercameraordeclarearefund.Iwillappreciateitifmyproblemreceivesdueattention.
Yours,
LiMing
尊敬的经理:
我冒昧给你写这封信,投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的数码相机的质量问题。
购买至今的五天中,各种问题一个接一个地出现。
一方面,相继屏幕总是黑屏,我们使用起来仿佛和传统相机没有区别。
另一方面,电池的状况也不尽人意,只能支持相机工作两个小时。
因此,我希望可以换一个相机,否则我要求退款。
我希望这个问题能够得到足够的重视。
谨上,
李明
DearSir,
Iamwritingtoyouaboutamostunhappyexperience.LastTuesdaymorning,wetookalongroutebusofyourcompanyfromDukoutoLijiang.ThebuswasscheduledtoarriveinLijiangat7oclockintheevening,butitstoppedmidwayat4p.m.formechanicalproblems.Thedriverandtheticketsellercouldneithersolvetheproblembythemselvesnorseekhelpfromothers.
Wherewestoppedwasnowherenearavillage.Upuntil8oclock,anotherbusfinallycarriedustoashabbyruralmotel.Wehadtopayforouraccommodation.Theroomwastoosmallandthequiltwassodirty.Tooursurprise,whenwejustmanagedtosleepataround2a.m.,thedrivercametowakeusup—thebushadbeenfixed!
Isuggestthatyoulookintothismatterimmediatelyanddealwithitquicklyandproperly.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiMing
ComplaintLetter
complainagainstsb.aboutsth.
dissatisfactionwith不满于......
putupwith/bear/tolerate忍受
awful糟糕的
poorservice糟糕的服务
inconceivable不可思议的
outofone’sexpectation令某人大失所望
lookinto/investigate调查
incident/matter事件
sanitarysituation卫生条件
badmanners不礼貌
disturbance干扰
nuisance麻烦事
remedy补救
solve解决
recurrence再次发生
1)Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabout...
2)Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith...
3)TherearesomeproblemswiththeflatthatIwishtobringtoattention.Foronething,thereis…Foranother,...
4)Icanhardlybear/tolerate/putupwithitanymore.
5)Ihopethattheauthoritiesconcernedwillconsidermysuggestionsandimprovethesituationasbestastheycan.
6)Isincerelyhopethatitwillreviewitsmanagementsystem,withtheviewtoproviding,betterservicetothepublic.
7)Wetrustthatyouwillnowconsiderthismatterseriouslyandmakeanefforttopreventtherecurrenceofthiskind.
8)Wewillappreciateyourwillingnesstomakeupfortheloss.
结构要点投诉信是对产品或服务表示不满的信件,一般分三个部分:
1.提出投诉内容; 2.说明具体情况; 3.提出解决办法。
Supposeyouboughtawoolenscarf(围巾)bymailorderbutlaterfoundaholeinit.Writealetterofcomplainttodescribethatmatterandrequiresettlement.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,using“LiMing”instead.
Towhomitmayconcern,
ThewoolenscarfIboughtbymailorderfromyourcompanyarrivedontimethedaybeforeyesterday.ButwhenIcheckedit,Ifoundaholeinthemiddle.IwasastonishedbecausetheholewasobviousandIdidnotthinkyoushouldneglectthisdeficiencywhenyoudeliveredit.Ihavedialedyourservicenumberforseveraltimesanditwasalwaysbusy.
Nowthisproblemkeepsworryingme.Canyouchangeanewoneformeassoonaspossible?
HowshallIsendthisscarfbacktoyou?
Thanksforyourconsideration.
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yoursfaithfully,
LiMing
语言注意点投诉信应重点表明投诉的原因,叙事应客观、准确、简洁。
最后提出的解决方法应切实可行。
在表达自己的不满时,语言要把握分寸,不失风度。
Writealettertocomplainaboutanunhappyexperienceinabout100wordstodescribethematterandaskforthemistaketobecorrected.Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,using“LiMing”instead.
DearSir,
Iamwritingtoyouaboutamostunhappyexperience.LastTuesdaymorning,wetookalongroutebusofyourcompanyfromDukoutoLijiang.ThebuswasscheduledtoarriveinLijiangat7o’clockintheevening,butitstoppedmidwayatfourp.m.formechanicalproblems.Thedriverandtheticketsellercouldneithersolvetheproblembythemselvesnorseekhelpfromothers.
Wherewestoppedwasnowherenearavillage.Upuntil8o’clock,anotherbusfinallycarriedustoashabbyruralmotel.Wehadtopayforouraccommodation.Theroomwastoosmallandthequiltwassodirty.Tooursurprise,whenwejustmanagedtosleepataround2a.m.,thedrivercametowakeusup—thebushadbeenfixed!
Isuggestthatyoulookintothismatterimmediatelyanddealwithitquicklyandproperly.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiMing
[Directions]:
Supposethatyouorderedarefrigeratorbutlaterfoundaworryingproblem.Writealetterofcomplainttodescribethematterandrequiresettlement,Donotsignyourownnameattheendofyourletter,using“LiMing”instead.
DearSir,
Iamhappythattherefrigeratorweorderedlastweekhasarrivedontime.Butitisagreatpitythatwefindthereissomethingwrongwiththerefrigerationfacilities.
Afterweuseditforseveraldays.wefoundthatfoodstoredintherefrigeratingcompartmentturnedbadquickly.Whenwefinallydecidedtotakethetemperatureinit,weweresurprisedtofinditwasaround15℃,farfromthestandardtemperturerangefrom0℃to9℃.
Thisproblemhasaffectedournormallife.Wouldyoupleaseletmeknowwhetherornotyoucansendarepairmanassoonaspossible?
Ihopethatmyproblemwillgetyourkindconsideration.
Yoursfaithfully,
LiMing
这封投诉信可以说写得非常好,结构很清晰,第一段首先肯定对方按时送货上门的做法,随后简述冰箱出了问题。
第二段说明具体问题,第三段提出要求。
DearSir:
WithreferencetoourorderNo.W98,the120computersetssuppliestotheaboveorderweredeliveredthedaybeforeyesterday,butweregretthat20setswerebadlydamaged.
Thepackagescontainingthecomputersetsappearedtobeingoodconditionandweacceptedandsignedforthemwithoutquestion.Weunpackedthecomputersetswithcareandcanonlyassumethatdamagemustbeduetocarelesshandlingatsomestagepriortopacking.
Weshallbegladifyouwillreplaceall20setsassoonaspossible.Meanwhile,wehaveputthedamagedcomputerset