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英语四六级写作文章结构与思路点拨

英语四六级写作文章结构与思路点拨

第一段：

引语引用+简单评论段

　　1文章第一句话：

直接引用引语

　　1.1.第一句的第一种写法：

　名人名言

　　1"."Sb.oncesaid.

　　2Sb.oncesaid，"."

　　3Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwiththewordsofsb.,whooncesaid,"."

　　我想你应该熟悉sb.说过的一句话，他曾经说过：

"."

　　1.2第一句的第二种写法：

　俗语/常言/习语/成语/谚语

　　1Asthecommonly-heardsaying/idiom/proverbgoes，"."

　　2Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwithsaying,whichiscommonly-heard,"."

　　我想你应该熟悉一句耳熟能详的俗语/常言习语/谚语，是这么说的：

"."

　　2文章第二句话：

简化引语+表层评论

　　2.1用自己的语言说明、解释抽象和凝练的引语，保持原意的同时，使之简洁易懂；

　　本句根据题目引语内容，自由发挥

　　2.2对引语的表层含义进行评论：

就引语的"事"说"事"，不要上升到人生哲理高度

　　Itisobviousthat…

　　文章第二句话写法真题举例：

　　（1.2.1）Althoughfour-hourseemstobequitealongtime,itcanhelppeoplechopdownthetreemoresmoothlyandlesslaboriouslyintheresttwohours.（1.2.2）Itisobviousthatafullpreparationcanhelppeopleenhancetheefficiencyoftrees-chopping.[2011-12月CET6]

　　（1.2.1）Quittingsmokingissoeasyaslongasyoukeepawayfromcigarettes.However,manypeoplecanhardlyresistthetemptationofcigaretteandthengiveuptheirattempttoquitsmoking.（1.2.2）Itisobviousthatnoonecanquitsmokingwitheasewithoutstrongwillanddetermination.[2011-12月CET4]

　　第二段：

意义阐述段

　　3.文章第三句话：

由表及里，提炼挖掘引语的深层含义

　　3.1Thesaying/proverb/sb'sremarkaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofA.

　　3.2Simpleasthesentencemaysound,itcontainsabundantlifephilosophyandinformsusofthesignificanceofA.

　　4.文章第四句话：

强调A的重要性

　　4.1ThereisnodenyingthatwecannotemphasizetheimportanceofAtoomuch.

　　4.2whydoesA.playanindispensableroleinourlife/work/pursuitofsuccess?

　　5.文章第五句话：

论述A的重要性

　　5.1Awillenableustoachieveourobjectivesmoresmoothlyandrealizetheirdreamsmorerapidly.ThemoreCommunicative/Modest/Honest/Cooperative/Inclusiveweare,themorelikelywearetobuildharmoniousrelationshipsandmastermoreresourceswhichisadvantageoustotheirsuccess.

　　两个衍生体：

action&plan

　　Actionwillenableustoachieveourobjectivesmoresmoothlyandrealizetheirdreamsmorerapidly.Themoreactionwetake,themorelikelywearetoaccumulateexperience,masterskillsandgetclosetoourdestination.

　　Makingplanwillenableustoachieveourobjectivesmoresmoothlyandrealizetheirdreamsmorerapidly.Themoredetailedplanwemake,themorelikelywearetomakefulluseoftime,enhanceourworkefficiencymakefullpreparationforunexpectedcases/

　　5.2Aiscrucialforeveryindividual.Withitsseeminglymagicpower,Acannotonlybetteraccelerateindividuals'development,butserveasanefficientinstrumentforindividualstochangetheworld.[Theconsciousnessofinnovation/Confidence/Dream/Objective/Diligence]

5.3ThosewhopossessAarealwaysadmiredandrespected,becauseAmayendowthemwithmorecompetence,chances,self-confidencetoovercomedifficultiesandapproachchallenges.Thosepeopleappeartopossessaspecialcharm,bringingtoothershope,passionandsurprise,and,thuswinningothers'favorandtrust.[Astrongwill/Persistence/Perseverance/Optimism/Ppassion/Enthusiasm/Hope/Courage/Patience]

　　6.文章第六句话：

举例论述A的重要性

　　6.1QuiteafewexamplescanbegiventoprovetheimportanceofA.However,Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone:

　　6.2TofurtherdemonstratetheimportanceofA,Iwouldliketotakesb.asacaseinpoint.

　　举例公式：

Sb.,插入语，howcouldhe/shedosth.withoutA?

OnStudents'InterpersonalRelationship

　　1.目前许多大学生处理不好人际关系

　　2.出现这种现象的原因

　　3.我的看法

　　预测范文：

　　OnStudents'InterpersonalRelationship

　　Positiveinterpersonalrelationshipsarevitalforoptimalhumsitgrowthanddevelopment.However,inrecentyears,educatorshaveexpressedtheirconcernabouttheabilityofinterpersonalrelationshipamongstudentsininstitutionsofhighereducation.AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyHebeiUniversity,many

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　　college-agestudentsregardinterpersonalrelationshipasthebiggestheadache.Increasingdiversityandrapidchangesmoursocietymakeinteractingwithothersmoreandmorecomplexanddifficult.With1unitedlifeexperiencesandsocialskills,collegestudentsfacemorechallengesindealingwithinterpersonalrelationship.Thisisespeciallytrueforstudentscomingfromruralareas.Becauseofthelackofsocialskills,theyareoftenrejectedbyothers_andrejectiongivesthemevenfewerchancestoleamhowtointeractwithothers.

　　Inmyopinion,nowthatinterpersonalrelationshipisimportanttostudents*devclopmentjcollegesshouldoffercoursesaboutcomprehensiveinterpersonalrelationships.Thecourseshouldaddresstheknowledge，skills,attitudesandbehaviorsinvolvedinparticipatinginpositiverelationshipsinthefamilyandwithindividualsatschool,mtheconununityandintheworkplace.

　　OntheLosingofTraditionalCulture

　　1.现在许多传统文化正慢慢消失

　　2.传统文化消失的原因

　　3.我的看法

　　预测范文：

　　OntheLosingofTyaditionalCulture

　　Itiswidelynotedthatlotsoftraditionalcultureisdis^ppeBriitgalotigwiththedevelopmentoftechnology*Manyaucientarchitecturesandtraditionalwaysoflivinghavebeendeserted.Itseemsthatthetraditionalcultureandcraftmanshipwillbereplacedinthismodemera.

　　Thefollowingreasonscanaccountfortheabovephenomenon.Firstly,traditionaltechnologiesarealwaysconsideredineffectivewhilethenewsciencesarealwayshighlyefficient.Secondly,itiscostlytoprotectthetraditionalculture.

　　thefundusedtoprotecttheancientculturewasinsteaddeliveredtothepoor,itwillbehelpfultotheimprovementoftheirlivingstandard.Thirdly，modeniscienceandtechnologyfacilitatebothourdaiJyandacademiclifeatot.Forinstance,collegestudentsalwayscollecttheirthesismaterialsbysurfingtheInternetinsteadofborrowingbooksfromthelibrary.

　　Inmyopinion,althoughtraditionalcultureisanancientheritage,itcouldn'tkeeppacewiththedevelopmentofsociety.Itisthetideofhistorythatthetraditionalcultureandtechnologywillnodoubtbeeliminatedintheend.

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledAbilitiesandGoodLooksbycommentingontheoldsaying,“Neverjudgeapersonbyhisappearance.”Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

　　预测范文：

　　AbilitiesandGoodLooks（能力与外貌）

　　Weareoftentoldnottojudgepeoplebytheirappearance,becauseforaperson,abilitiesarefarmoreimportantthanappearance.Throughouthistory,therearenumerousexamplesofoutstandingpeoplewithremarkableachievementswhoarejustplainornotgood-lookingatall.

　　However,nowadayssomepeopleholdthebeliefthatappearanceoutweighsabilities,partlybecausesomebeautifulpeopleseemtohaveadvantagesincompetitivesituationslikejobinterviewsandhavebeengivenmoreopportunitiesthanothers.

　　Nevertheless,IstillfirmlybelievethatabilitiesaremoreimportantForonething,althoughgoodlooksareeasyontheeye,itisalwaysone’sabilitiesthatcreatevaluesthatreallymatter.Foranother,whilepeople’sgoodlookswereborntothem,abilitieshavetobegainedthroughdeliberateself-cultivationandyearsofhardworkingwhichspeakmoreofpeople’struecolors.Lastbutnotleast,abilitiesgrowovertimewhilegoodlooksonlyfade.Eventually,itistheabilitiesthathelppeoplesucceed,soitissafetosaythatabilitieswillalwaysbringmoretolifethangoodlooks.

OnAdversity

　　1.每个人都会碰到逆境

　　2.人们对逆境的看法不同

　　3.我的看法

　　预测范文：

　　OnAdversity

　　EveryonemeetssetbacksandfiustratiansInlife,andeachtrieshardtoavoidthem,onlytofindtbatthey’rejustlikeyourownshadowaccompanyingyouallyourlives.Thetruthis，adversitycanexertgreatinfluenceonyou,dependingonhowyoudealwithit.

　　Whenconfrontedwithadversity,differentpeoplemakedifferentresponse.Somepeopleconsideritastumblingblockontheroadtosuccess,andgetdepressedandevensinkintodespair;othersconsiderittlbestairwaytogreataccomplishmentsandtrytoovercomeitwithconstantstruggle.Thelatter,therefore,willrecognizetheirdisadvantagesfromtheirtemporarydefeat,drawlessonsfromit,andgrowstrongereachtimetheyhavecopedwitbadifficulty.

　　Inmyopinion,adversityoftenleadstoprosperity.Painfulanddepressingasitis,overcomingadversityendowsuswithgreatconfidencethatiscrucialtoachievesuccess.Greatpeoplearenotbornsuccessful,theyaregreatonlybecausetheyhavetemperedtheirpersonalityandremediedtheirdeficienciesthroughexperiencingcountlessadversityanddefeat,whichisactuallyagoddessofblessingindisguise.

ConductingMoralEducationinColleges

　　1.许多大学开展道德教育

　　2.开展道德教育的意义

　　3.如何在大学开展道德教育

　　预测范文：

　　Inthecurrentworld,collegestudentsbecomemorallymoretoleranttothephenomenasuchasexam—cheating,academicdishonestyanddefaultonloans.Inthiscase,it’surgentlyimportantthatweconductmoraleducationincollege.

　　Moraleducationisbeneficialinthefollowingaspects.Tobeginwith,itmakesusawareofourpersonalresponsibility.Wemustcomplywithsocialmoralstandardsandlearntobehaveandconductourselvesinsociety.Secondly,moraleducationteachesustoshunevilanddogood,turningtheuncivilizedtothecivilized.Thirdly,withhighermoralstandards,wewillbemoreconsideratetowardsothersandavoidquarrelsorconflicts,whichcontributestomaintainingaharmonioussociety.

　　Asforhowtoconductmoraleducationincollege,ononehand,theoreticalmoraleducationshouldbeintegratedintoallaspectsofcampuslife,includingclassroomteachingandextracurricularactivities.Ontheotherhand,weshouldencouragestudentstotakepartinmoralpracticessuchasvolunteeractivities.Throu