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商志四六级写作

第一节历年四级作文总览

2013年6月（注：

1.2013年6月的试题是多题多卷，共考了3个不同的图画作文题；2.新四级给出的样题就是下面的第一个图）

1.Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig。

Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

（Inthecartoonthereisafathertalkingwithherson.Havingheardhisson’swordsthat“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon.”Thefatherrepliesthat“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything”.）

2.Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoflearningbasicskills.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

3.Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofreadingliterature。

Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

2012年12月EducationPays

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow（weeklyearningsin2010）.Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

2012年6月OnExcessivePackaging

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象

2.出现这一现象的原因

3.我对这一现象的看法和建议

2011年12月NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,”Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes”.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

2011年6月OnlineShopping

1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3.我的建议

2010年12月HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……

2010年6月DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种现象的原因是……

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…

2009年12月CreatingaGreenCampus

1.建设绿色校园十分重要

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……

3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

2009年6月FreeAdmissionstoMuseums？

1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……

2.有人认为这样做会带来一些问题

3.在我看来……

2008年12月LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用

2.由此带来的问题

3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义

2008年6月RecreationalActivities

1.娱乐活动多种多样

2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能带来危害

3.作为大学生，我认为……

2007年12月WhatElectivestoChoose

1.各大学为学生开设多种多样的选修课

2.学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课

3.以我自己为例…

2007年6月通知WelcometoOurClub

1.本社团的主要活动内容

2.参加本社团的好处

3.如何加入本社团

第三节段落写作

第一段：

1.图画型

Asissubtlydepictedinthegivendrawing,afatheristalkingtohisdaughter,withthedialoguebetweenthemthought-provoking.Whatcanbeclearlyseeninitisthatwhenaskedhowherschoolwastoday,thedaughterrepliedtoherdadthatallaboutitwasinherblog.Howeversimplethisimagemayseematfirstglance,itsintendedmeaninggoesundoubtedlyfar-reaching:

theinternethasexertedsignificantinfluenceoninterpersonalcommunications.

2.表格型

Asisapparentlyillustratedinthestatisticsprovidedinthechart/graph/tableabove,theunemploymentrateisinoppositeproportiontothelevelofeducation-----thehigherthedegree,thelowertheunemploymentrate.Theunemploymentrateis1.9%forthosewithadoctoraldegree,whileitis14.9%forthosewithoutevenahighschooldiploma.

3.评论一个社会现象

Thepreviouscoupleofyearshaswitnessedtheprevalenceofawidespreadsocialphenomenon----anincreasingnumberofyoungstersarecrazyaboutparticipatinginmanyatests.Ithasalreadybeenbroughtintopublicconcernandwecaneasilyfindbulkofrelevantdiscussionsamongthemassmedia.Obviouslythisisanissuethatmostpeoplearenotonlyinterestedin,butalsoholdopinionabout.

Nowadays,peopleinmountingnumbersareverymuchconcernedabouttheproblemthat.Indeed,thepastfewyearshaswitnessedthegrowingincidenceofsuchhappenings.It’ssowidespreadthatagreatdealofattentionisbeingpaidtodaytosuchaTrend.

4.对引言评论型

WhenitcomestoAbrahamLincoln’sfamousobservation-----“Ittakesyearstobuildtrust,andafewsecondstodestroyit.”-----aheateddiscussionhascomeupamongthegeneralpublic.Thevastmajorityofpeopleareinstrongfavorofmaintainingtrustdeliberately,whilestillothersseemtocontendthatwedon’thavetospendtoomuchtimeontrustmaintenance.Iamstronglyconvincedthattrustisoneofthemostimportantrelationshipsamongpeopleandthusdeservessustainedattention.

5、观点对比型

Whenitcomestothepopulartrendoflongpublicholidays,aheateddiscussionhascomeupamongthegeneralpublic.Amajorityofpeopleareinstrongfavoroftakinglongholidays,whilestillothersseemtocontendthatthisholidaystyleisnotsuitableforadevelopingcountrylikeChina.Iamstronglyconvincedthatthebenefitsoflongholidaysoutnumberitsdisadvantagesinvariousways.

第二段：

1.不同观点

2.分析利弊

Isthisphenomenonablessingoracurse?

Themassmediaandthegeneralpublichavefocusedontheadvantagesofthisphenomenon,butfewhavelookedattheside-effect.Thefollowinglistofadvantagesanddisadvantagescanwellexplaineverything.Indeed,…………………Moreover,……………………….Givenallthesedisadvantages,itseemstohaveahostofstrengths.Tobeginwith,………………….Furthermore,………………………

3.分析原因

Whatmightaccountforthephenomenonmirroredbythechart/picture?

Itisnodifficultjobforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorsthatunderlietheabovecomplicatedphenomenon（event/changes）.Foronething,….…Foranother,…Besides,onemoreimportantfactorworthourconcernisthat…

或

Whyshouldthisphenomenontakeplace?

Therearegenerallythreefactorsaccountingforit.Initially,…………………………………What’smore,……………………………………………Finally,………………………………………………

第三段

1.发表自己的看法

Asanycoinhastwosides,theaboveissuecanalsobeapproachedfromadifferentperspective.Thereforeitisquitenormalforpeopletoholdratheroppositeopinions.However,it’smyfirmbeliefthat…Anyactionconcerningtheissueshouldbehighlyencouraged（discouraged）inthepresentcase.

2.提出建议

Confrontedwith，weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Initially,解决方法一。

Inthesecondplace,解决方法二。

或

Consideringthecurrentissue,weshouldcallforimmediateactionsimposedbytheauthorities（universities）.Inotherwords,ourgovernmentofvariouslevels（they）mustmakerelevantplansorrulestoguaranteeaproperorderandjustice.Besides,ascitizens,weshouldalsobeawarethatanypromptsolutionisofbenefittoall.Therefore,it’sthedutyofordinarypeopletoactivelyparticipateintheaction.

第四章篇章写作

（一）图画或漫画，就可以这样套写（以2012年6月6级的漫画为例）:

Asissubtlyportrayedinthegivendrawing,afatheristalkingtohisdaughter,withthetheimplicationsthought-provoking.Whatcanbeclearlyseeninitisthatwhenaskedhowherschoolwastoday,thedaughterrepliedtoherdadthatallaboutitwasinherblog.Howeversimplethisimagemayseematfirstglance,itsintendedmeaninggoesundoubtedlyfar-reaching:

theinternethasexertedsignificantinfluenceoninterpersonalcommunications.

Whatmightaccountforthephenomenonmirroredbythepicture?

Itisnodifficultjobforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorsthatunderlietheabovecomplicatedphenomenon.Foronething,…..Foranother,….Besides,onemoreimportantfactorworthourconcernisthat…

Consideringthecurrentissue,weshouldcallforimmediateactionsimposedbythewholesociety.Ourgovernmentofvariouslevelscouldmakerelevantplansorrulestoguaranteeaproperlife.Moreover,ascitizens,weshouldalsobeawarethatanypromptsolutionisofbenefittoall.Inotherwords,it’sthedutyofordinarypeopletoactivelyparticipateinthecampaigntocurbsimilarpractices.

（二）表格，就可以这样套写（以2012年12月4级的表格为例）:

Asisapparentlyillustratedinthestatisticsprovidedinthechart/graph/tableabove,theunemploymentrateisinoppositeproportiontothelevelofeducation-----thehigherthedegree,thelowertheunemploymentrate.Theunemploymentrateis1.9%forthosewithadoctoraldegree,whileitis14.9%forthosewithoutevenahighschooldiploma.

Whatmightaccountforthephenomenonmirroredbythechart/graph/table?

Itisnodifficultjobforustocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorsthatunderlietheabovecomplicatedphenomenon.Foronething,…..Foranother,….Besides,onemoreimportantfactorworthourconcernisthat…

Consideringthecurrentissue,weshouldcallforimmediateactionsimposedbythewholesociety.Ourgovernmentofvariouslevelscouldmakerelevantplansorrulestoguaranteeaproperlife.Moreover,ascitizens,weshouldalsobeawarethatanypromptactionisofbenefittoall.Inotherwords,it’sthedutyofordinarypeopletoactivelyparticipateinthecampaigntopromoteeducation.

（三）评论一个社会现象，可这样套写（2012年6月四级作文题、2011年6月以及之前的所有四级作文题都属这种类型；2011年6月及以前的所有6级作文题都属这种）:

Thepreviouscoupleofyearshaswitnessedthethegrowingincidenceofanupsettingsocialphenomenon----anincreasingnumberofpeoplearecrazyaboutparticipatinginmanyatests.It’ssowidespreadthatagreatdealofattentionisbeingpaidtodaytosuchatrendandwecaneasilyfindbulkofrelevantdiscussionsamongthemassmedia.Obviouslythisisanissuethatmostpeoplea