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高考英语短文改错集训四

2019-2020年高考英语短文改错集训（四）

【专项突破】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

TodayIcanstillrememberhowIbecamegoodtabletennisplayer.

ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmateplayingtabletennis.

Amazingathowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearnourtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticingwhileIbecameconfidentlyenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersofmyclass.

Ireallytakeproudinthisexperience,becauseithelpedmerealizethatweallcanfulfillour

potentialandachievetoourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb"Practicemakesperfect.”

Passage2

Howcanapersonrecoverfromemotionalproblems?

Apopularopinionsuggeststhathewatcheshumorousfilms.Andarecentstudyprovesthistobewrong.Thestudyalsoshowsthatwatchingatsadfilmscanmakegettingoveranegativemoodaeasierjob.Emotionalexperiencesisimportanttopeople’swell-being.Peoplearelesslikelytosharetheirfeelingswiththesewhohavehadsimilarexperiences.Similar,peopleprefermoviesthatreflecttheirmood.That’sthereason^asadfilmcancontributetofortasadpersonmorethanapleasantone.

Passage3

Iusedtobeaveryself-centeredperson,butinthepasttwoyearsIreallychanged.IhavestartedtothinkaboutotherpeopleafterIthinkaboutmyself.IamhappythatIambeingthedifferentperson.

IthinkmychangestartedwhenIwasatPalomarCollege.Atfirst,Ijustwanttogetmydegreeandbeleftalone.IthoughtIwassmarterthaneveryoneelse,soIhardlyevertalkedtoanyoneinmyclasses.Bytheendofmyfirstsemester,Iwasreallylonely.Thatseemedasifeveryonebesidesmehadmadefriendandwashavingfun.SoItriedanexperiment.Istartedaskingpeoplearoundmehowtheyweredoing,andwhethertheywerehavingtrouble,Iofferedtohelp.Thatwasrealabigstepforme.Bytheendoftheyear,Ihadseveralnewfriends,twoofthemarestillmybestfriendstoday.

Passage4

MyfriendDaviskeptbirds.Heaskedmetofeedthemforhiminonedaybecausehewouldbeawayforaweek.Hesaidthathehaveleftthekeyinhismailbox.Unfortunately,IforgotallaboutbirdsuntilthenightbeforeDavisweretoreturn.Whatwasworse,itwasalreadydarkwhenIarrivedathishouse.IsoonfoundthekeyleftbyDaviscan’tunlockeitherthefrontdoornorthebackdoor.Iwasgettingworrying.IwasjustabouttogiveupwhileInoticedthatonebedroomwindowwasslightlyopen.Iclimbedupandopenedthewindow.JustthenapolicemanandoneofDavis’neighborarrived.Ifeltlikeapletelyfoolatthattime.

Passage5

Ioftengotoaweekendschool.Sodidmanyofmyclassmates.Thisseemspopularamongstudents.Goodweekendschoolshaveexcellentteacherswhichhelpusimproveourstudies.Besides,wegettoknowstudentsfromanotherschoolsandlearnabouttheircampusoflife.

Soeverycoinhastwosides.Ourschoolworkisalreadyaheavyburden.Extralessonoftentakeuptoomuchofourtime.Inaddition,paylotsofattentiontotheextralessonswillaffecttheirschoolsubjects.WemayalsofindourselvesverytiredonMondaystoconcentrateonthelessonsinourownschool..Weshouldthinkseriouslyaboutthisissueandmakebestuseofourtime.

Passage6

Inrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.Manystudentsaretryinghisbesttogoabroad.TherearemanyLadiesandgentlemen,

Itisspecialpleasuretoweleournewstaffmember,MrTonyWhite,whohaseheretoAmerica.

MrWhitehasrecentlygraduatedfromtheUniversityofChicagowherehehasmajoredinEnglishLiteratureandminoredinTeachingEnglishastheSecondLanguage.Hewillworkingwithushereforatleasttwoyears.

Oneofthegoalsofourschoolaretopromoteunderstandingandcooperationbetweentheyoungpeopleofourtwocountries.ByhaveMrWhite,whoiswillingtosacrificethefortofhisfriendsandfamilytoetoastrangecountry,wefeelweareveryluckyandourgoalswillbeeasilyrealized.

Onbehalfofthewholeschool,I’dliketoextendtoyou,MrWhite,yoursincerestwele.Weareindeedhappytohaveyouhere,andwewishyouallthebetterduringyourstayinChina.

Thankyou.

Passage7

DearSir，

ThankyouforinvitemetothesummerEnglishcourseinyourschool.Asforyourchoicebetweenthetwocourses,Ipreferthefour-weekcoursebecauseofthiswillallowmemoretimetodosometravelingbutmakeafewnewfriends.OfallthesubjectI’mlearningatschool,IlikeEnglishbest.IhadbeenlearningEnglishforelevenyearsbutmyspokenEnglishremainspoorly.SoIreallyhopetotakethischanceimproveit.Ifpossible,I’dliketostaywithafamilyforacoupleofdaysinorderthatIcanknowsomecustomsinEngland,thatI’mparticularlyinterestedin.IbelieveIwillhavewonderfultimethissummer.

　　Yourstruly,

　　LiHua

xx高考英语-短文改错集训（四）答案

Passage1

TodayIcanstillrememberhowIbecame（加a）goodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmate（classmates）playingtabletennis.

Amazing（Amazed）athowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearnour（their）techniques.ThenIkeptpracticingwhile（until）Ibecameconfidently（confident）enoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersof（in）myclass.

Ireallytakeproud（pride）inthisexperience,becauseithelped（helps）merealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveto（去掉to）ourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb"Practicemakesperfect.”

Passage2

Howcanapersonrecoverfromemotionalproblems?

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Passage3

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Passage4

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Passage5

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Passage6

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Passage7

DearSir，

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invitingmy

choicebetweenthetwocourses,Ipreferthefour-weekcoursebecauseofthiswillallow

去掉of

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