基础差作文一步到位万用模板写作文.docx

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基础差作文一步到位万用模板写作文

基础差作文一步到位,万用模板写作文

第一节四级作文评分标准

四级考试对写作的要求并不是高不可攀。

同学们如果只要能够达到结构清晰，就能得到8分；达到句型多变，就能得到11分；进一步达到词汇丰富，14分甚至满分就是你的了！

根据我们以上进行的分析和讲解，来给四级作文写作核心要求做个小结：

1.内容切题，领会题目的中心含义，将其作为文章的重点，在相应段落中进行详细地描述或阐述。

2.根据提纲概括出每一段的Topicsentence,注意语言要精炼，最好放在段首。

3.在每一段落中，依据Topicsentence进行发挥，解释原因，给出例子、事实或引文。

注意各种连接词及短语的使用，使语义连贯，文章醒目易读。

4.正确使用适当的引导词和连接词,使文章的结构和条理清晰,语势紧凑有力。

5.如有必要的话,在段落的结尾用一个结论性的句子来结束该段。

如果你能做到以上的前三条，你一定可以得到11分。

如果想获得更多分甚至满分的话，就要努力做到后两条。

第二节五大题型十大模板锁定四级作文

一、第一种题型（对比观点选择题）

（一）题型特点：

1、大多为三点提纲，提纲模式一般为：

有一些人……；还有人……；我的看法或观点；

2、少数时候也会出现两点提纲的情况，此时可以补充成三点提纲来写作。

（二）Example:

1.Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?

Thefirstsentencehasalreadybeenwrittenforyou.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:

1.很多认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是……2.也有人持不同意见，……3.我的看法和打算

2.Direction:

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyoucompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below:

1.有人认为读书要有选择。

2.有人认为应当博览群书。

3.我的看法。

3.Directions:

ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonJob-Hopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:

1.有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为…2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作，因为…3.我的看法。

（三）文章分析：

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法

①8分

Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechosen.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohumanbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.

Somepeoplethinkthatmenshouldreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.

Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.Wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.

失分原因：

结构失调，表述方式单一

②5分

Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimited.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.

失分原因：

分段太少，语法错误太多

③2分

Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselective.Butothersbelievedreadingextensivelywascorrection.

Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?

Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweinterested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.

Onanotherhand.Someone’sinterestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn’treadingatonlyonelevel.

Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren’twise.

Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don’ttreatthesebookswithrecklessabandon.

Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.

失分原因：

分段太多，语法错误太多

优秀文章学习：

14分

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?

Everyonehashisownview.（启）

注：

1.第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.（承）

注：

1.本段总分总结构2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat

3.withthedevelopmentof...4.what'smore递进关系，moreover

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.（转）

注：

1.But转折词2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat

3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比

4.许多知识awiderangeof/alargescopeof/much；获取知识acquire/getknowledge

5.knowsnothing→little；hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.（合）

11分

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.

注：

1.“people,who”应去掉逗号，改为非限制定语从句。

2.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat

3.touch碰，闪光点词汇

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.

（四）对立观点模式1：

A.有人认为X是好事，赞成X，为什么？

B.有人认为X是坏事，反对X，为什么？

C.我的看法。

Para.1SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X的第一个原因。

Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一个原因。

Para.2However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X的第一个理由。

Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:

Para.3

①Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionedpositiveeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的一个好处。

②AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,论据1.Foranother,论据2.Lastbutnottheleast,论据3.Toconclude,总结观点.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表决心.

（四）对立观点模式2：

WheretoLive---intheCityorintheCountry

A.有人喜欢A为什么？

B.有人却喜欢B，为什么？

C.我的看法。

Para.1InrecentyearsmoreandmorepeopletendtodoA.manypeopleappreciatetheconvenienceofA.Theyenjoy---Theyalsopreferto---

Para.2Onthecontrary,othersareattractedbyB.theylike---

Para.3However,bothAandBhavetheirdisadvantages.Withtheimprovementof---Awillenjoygreatsuperiority/advantagesoverB.

（四）评论某一事物利与弊：

IsTVaplusoraMinus?

①Para.1Weareawarethateverythinghasitstwosides.Xisnoexception.Initsdevelopment,Xhasbroughtbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

Para.2Xhasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.Firstofall---Also---Mostimportantly---

Para.3However,Xhasalsobroughtabout/givenriseto/ledto/resultedin/caused/createdalotofproblems.Foronething---foranother---Finally---

②Para.1X,acontroversialquestionintheworld,hasarousedstrongargumentsinChina.Somepeoplebelieve/holdtheopinionthat---Theypointout---

Para.2Otherpeople,onthecontrary/however,claim/arguethat---Theycriticize/complainthat---

Para.3Inshort,Xdoesmoregoodthanharmto---WemusttakeacorrectattitudetowardX.Weshouldtakefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantage.扬长避短

二、第二种题型（社会热点话题）

（一）题型特点：

1、应该为三点提纲，但是通常以两点提纲出现的题目居多，所涉及主题为当时社会热点；

2、如果是两点提纲，则补充成三点提纲写作。

3、通常模式为：

现象概述--细节（原因、危害、方式等）--自我评论

（二）Example:

1.Directions:

Writeacompositionabout120/150wordsbasedonthefollowingoutline:

1）当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2）诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实

2.Direction:

Writeacompositionabout120/150wordsbasedonthefollowingoutline:

1.上大学的费用（tuitionandfees）可以通过多种途径解决2.哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）

（三）优秀文章欣赏：

HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation

14分：

PreviouslyinChina,auniversityeducationwasfundedbythegovernment.Thissituationischangingandstudentsmustnowfinancetheirowneducation.Asaresult,studentsarenowfacedwiththequestion“howtopayformycollegeeducation”?

注：

This指代前文

Thereareseveralpossiblewaystoraisethemoneytopayforfeesandtuitions.Parentsareasourceforcollegefunding,asisthecasewithmoststudents.Scholarshipsarealsoavailableforstudentswithoutstandingacademicperformance.Becausescholarshipsarecompetitive,theyarenotavailabletoeveryone.Studentscanalsotakeoutaloanfromthebank.Bankscanprovideloanstostudentswithoutcollateralforthosewhoneedthem.And,manystudentscantakeonpart-timejobstohelpfinancetheireducation.IncitiessuchasBeijing,ShanghaiandGuangzhou,therearemanypart-timejobopportunitiesforstudentsbothonandoffcampus.

注：

1.source来源，TVprogramismainsourceofmypleasure电视是我欢乐的主要来源

2.available重要词汇，Areyoustillavailable?

你还单身吗？

3.takepart-timejob打工，还可以用dooutjob\temporaryjob4.onandoff校园内外

Personally,Ibelieveascholarshipisthe