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2001—2013年全国卷英语短文改错

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2001年（全国卷II）

Likemostofmyschoolmates,Ihaveeitherbrothersnorsisters.Inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.

MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.

Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkatfamily;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiesso

thatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,butwedo

notseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitoranda

guest.Dotheyreallyunderstandtheirowndaughter?

Whatthingsareinotherhomes,Iwonder.

2002年（全国卷II）

LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daytriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,

it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimal.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasabout

noonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthe

mountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayIwasbusytakingpicturesince

thescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightina

hotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatI

fellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.

2003年（全国卷II）

WhenIfirstlearnedwriteinEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatI

alwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeep

mydiary.Ifollowedherandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoy

talktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittle

storyandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasa

goodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.

2004年（全国卷II）

DearRalph,

I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemy

classmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingswellasthem.I’msuretheywilllaughtome

andseemeasfool.SoIfeelunhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon’tknowthatthey

don’tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswe

becomestrangeratonce.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.Canyoutell

meaboutwhatIshoulddo?

2005年（全国卷III）

DearMr.Brown,

Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp. Beforeyoucametoteachus,Ihadnotinterest

in English.Mypronunciationwasterribly.Icould onlyspeakafewwords.Butoneandahalfyear

later,InowthinkEnglishfuntolearn.Igotalotoffromyour encouragingwords.Iwillalways

rememberwhatyou said,“Ifyoutryto,youcanbeNo.1!

”Ihopeyou’ve hadpleasantjourneyhome

andwillcometoChina againsometimesinthefuture.Iwillwriteagain andsendyouthephotoswe

taketogether. 

2006年（全国卷II）

WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelago.Theydidnotwant

breakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsome

tea.Icameinthelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthe

light.Hewaslookingforaglassthecupboard.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijust

smiledtomeandthought,“WhatcanIdo?

Weareguestsafterall.”

2006年（全国卷III）

AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEngland

intheballoonin1784.Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebigger

andbigger.Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquickandtheballoon

wascomingup.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.

Itstartedtorisehigheragain.Soitwasstilltooclosetothewater.Finally,themen

threwawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.Thecrowdwaitingfortogreetthem

inEnglandwasverysurprisedseethiswhentheballoonlandedinfrontofthem.

2007年（全国卷II）

DearGrandpa,

Thankyouforyourletter.Myschoolisorganizingabasketballteamandthere’sjustachancewhichI

canjoinit.I’mlittleofcourse,butterriblyquickandbravely.Whiletheothersarejumpingaboutinthe

air,Icanrunundermylegsandgettheball.Itwillbelotsoffunforpracticingoutintheplayground

intheafternoonwiththetreearoundusallredandyellowandeverybodylaughingandshout.

ThesearethehappiergirlsI’veeverseenandI’mthehappiestinall!

Imeantto

writelongletterandtellyouallthethingsI’mdoingatschool,butthebellwasringing,

soIjusthavetostophere.

2008年（全国卷I）

DearAlice,

Ihavejustgotsomegoodmewstotelltoyou.Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.My

fatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.I’dliketostayingthere

forhalfamonth,visitingplaceofinterestorpracticingmyEnglishaswell.We’vebeen

writingtoeachfornearlyayearnow.Ihaveoftendreamedoftalkfacetofacewithyou.Iimagine

you’llbeatvacationyourselfbythattime.Perhapswecouldgooutdosomesightseeingtogether.

2008年（全国卷II）

IfIhavethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglish

sothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympics

asgoodasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfind

theirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureorshow

themtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.

2009年（全国卷II）

HiSusan,

I’msorrythatIwasn’tabletoreturntoyourbikeontimeyesterday.Imeantogiveitback

toyoubeforefourintheafternoon,andIwasholduponmywayback.JustbeforeI

turnedcornerofParkStreet,Ihappenedtoseeaaccident.Thelittlegirlwashurtandhermother

neededhelp.SoIhelpedthemgoingtothenearesthospital.Istayedhereforoneanda

halfhourandmadesurethatthegirlwasallright.WhenIgotback,itwerealready6pm.

Ihopeyouunderstand.

2010年（全国卷I）

Itwasachanceofalifetimetowinthefirst prizeontheStoryWritingShow.AllIhadtodo wasto

writeastoryorpresentit.Myteachers havebeentellingmehowgreatmywritingwas.  

Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachance ofwinningtheprize.Whatwerebetter,Ihad

useful help.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanliving nearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamous

writer. Heagreedtoreadingmystoryandgivemesome advicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter. 

2010年（全国卷II）

Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.Atthattime,weoftenspendtimetogether.

Thanktoherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.Lastyear,shedecidedtostudytoabroad.Inother

words,wewouldbeseparatedlongtime.Beforeherleavingoff,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybest

wishestohim.Shesaiditwasthebestgiftshehaseverhad.Fromthenon,we’ve

kepttouchwitheachotherthroughe-mails.Ilookforwardtoseeheragaininthenearfuture.

2011年（全国卷I）

Oneofmyunforgettablememoryofmyschoolin Xinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromour

homes. Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingto school.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.

Sincethelunch bellfinallyrang,myfriendsandmemetunderatalltree andhadourlunches.Mybest

friendAiguliewasused toshareherNangwithme.Nangisaspeciallykindof cakeinXinjiang.Ilike

themverymuch.Now Aigulieand Istudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachother duringthe

summervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImiss thefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.

2011年（全国卷II）

DearGeorge,

It’sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchfor

showingthemaroundyourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.Afterwesaidgoodbyeto

you,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,thatwestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthe

museumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayinganothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadto

returntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.Itwasreallyaniceexperience.If

you’dliketomaketriptoourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.

2012年（全国卷I）

Everyoneofuscanmakeagreateffortstocutofftheuseofenergyinourcountry.Tobeginwith,allof

uscanstartreducingtotheuseofoilbydrivingonlywhenwehavearealneed.Thatwon’teasy,I

know,butwehavetostartanywhere.What’smore,wecangotoworkbybikeonceandtwiceaweek,

andwecanalsobuysmallercarsthatburnlessoil.Otherwayistowatchoureverydayuseofwaterand

electricathome.Forexample,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsor

televisionwhennooneelsewasthere?

2012年（全国卷II）

DearEditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannot

livewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedwateris

becominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.Todealwitha

problem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no

drinkingwatershouldleftrunning.Third,weshouldfindwaystoreu