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Food\year

1986

1987

1988

1989

1990

grain

49%

47%

46.5%

45%

45%

milk

10%

11%

11%

12%

13%

meat

17%

20%

22.5%

23%

21%

Fruitandvegetables

34%

22%

20%

20%

21%

total

100%

100%

100%

100%

100%

ChangesinPeople’sdiet

Asisshowninthetable,theperiodof1986-1990witnessedgreatchangesinthedietoftheChinese.Grain,whichusedtobethemainfoodofmostpeopleinChina,isnowplayingalessimportantrole.Andthesamegoesforsuchasmilkandmeathasincreasedrapidly

Anumberoffactorscanaccountforthechangesindiet.First,peoplearemuchwealthierthanbefore.Withhigherincome,theycanaffordtobuygoodfood.Second,peoplehaverealizedtheimportanceofabalanceddiettotheirhealth.Lackofcertainamountofmeatormilk,forexample,willresultinpoorhealth.Finally,owingtotheeconomicreform,meatandmilk,whichwerescarceinthepast,areproducedinlargequantities.Forallthesereasons,whatwasformerlycalledthe“basketofvegetables”hasnowbecomethatofvariedfood

Tosumup,insignificantasthosechangesmayseem,theyarethesignsoftheimprovedeconomicconditionsinChina.Webelievethataslongastheeffortcontinuesinreformandopeningtotheoutsideworld,therewillbegreaterchangesinpeople’sdietinthefuture.

HealthGainsinDevelopingCountries

Fromthegraphwecanseethehealthgainsindevelopingcountries.In1960,theaveragelifespanwasonly40years.In1990,afterthirtyyears,lifeexpectanceroseto60.Atthesametime,withthelifeexpectancygoingup,theinfantmortalityiscomingdown.In1960,theinfantmortalitywas200deathsper1000birth.In1990,theinfantmortalitydeclinedto100deathsper1000births

Whatarethereasonsforthissituation?

Ithinktheylieinthreerespects.First,thankstotheadvancesinmedicaltechnology,peopleindevelopingcountriesarereceivingbettermedicalcarethanbefore.Second,withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,peoplearebetterofftoday.Sotheypaymoreattentiontothenutritionoftheirfood.Third,owingtotheincreasingawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,governmentsatetakingmoremeasurestodealwithproblemsofpollution.Alltheseimprovementsinturndogoodtopeople’shealthandcertainlyextendthelifeexpectancy.

That’swhyindevelopingcountrieslifeexpectancyisontheriseandinfantmortalityonthedecline.

CaraccidentsdeclininginWaltonCity

ThegraphshowsthechangingrateaccidentsinWaltoncityin1990.Thefirsttwomonthsof1990showedanincreasingtrend.Therateroseto32inMarchbutfellto26inJune.FromJuneontheratewasrisingagainandreachedthepeakpoint39inAugust.AfterAugusttheratebegantodecline,andeventuallydroppedtothelowestpoint16attheendoftheyear

ThehighestrateinAugustwasduetounfavorableweatherconditions.Humidityandhightemperaturemakedriversimpatient,whicheasilyleadstocaraccidents.Thehighrateinthefirsthalfof1990wasalsocausedbythebadweathercondition.InWaltonCity,theexcessiveraincomesatearlyspring.Therainmakestheroadsmuddyandslippery,whichoftenresultedincaraccidents.Butthankstothecompletionoftwonewroads,lastwintersawaremarkabledeclineofcaraccidentsinthecity

Thisyearthepatternisexpectedtochange.Themunicipalauthoritieshaveraisefundstofurtherimprovetheroadconditions.Newroadregulationrequiresthatinsummereverycarbeair-conditioned.Withalltheseprecautions,Waltoncitizensareconfidentthattherateofcaraccidentswillbemuchlowerthenextyear

06年12月

OnSpringFestivalGala

Asisknowntoall,SpringFestivalGala,aCCTVprogramontheeveofLunarNewYear,cameoutinthe1980s,andhasbeenpopularformorethan20years.Inmanypeople’seyes,itispartofourSpringFestivaltradition,withitsspecialculturalvalueandartisticcharm.Besides,itenablesfamiliestosharehappymomentstogetheronsuchaspecialevening

Ontheotherhand,othersholdtheviewthattheSpringFestivalGalashouldbestopped.Theyareobviouslydisappointedattheprogramsthatrepeatthemselvesyearbyyear,andsotheymayprefertoseeafilmoreventosurftheInternetratherthanwatchtheprograms

Ithinkthereissometruthinbotharguments.ItistruethattheGalafailtoliveuptotheviewers’ever-increasingexpectations.Forexample,thecross-talksseemtobegettingmeaninglesstheseyears,insteadofagoodreflectionofsocialissues.Butitmaynotbewisetofindareplacementthatgivesanequallygoodtimetofamiliesaroundthecountry.Let’sjusthopethattheSpringFestivalGalacanmakesomeimprovementstolivealongerlife

说明文：

TheSpringFestival

ThespringFestivalistheChineseLunarNewYear.It’sthemostimportantholidayinChina.PeopleusuallycelebrateandspendtheSpringFestivaltogetherwiththeirparentsandchildrenathome

WiththeNewYearroundthecorner,everyfamilyisbusygettingreadyforit.Allthehousewivesatthistimewouldgivetheirhousesanextracleaning,makeallthethingsclean,tidyandkeepeverythinginitsrightplace

OnNewYear’sEve,everyfamilymakesdumplingsandcooksmanydeliciousdishes.Allthemembersofthefamilygathertogetherandhaveafamilydinner.Afterthebigmeal,theywatchTVtoenjoytheprogramsspeciallypreparedfortheFestival.Thechildrenletofffireworks,menplayMahjongandcards.Theystayupverylate.Justatmidnight,whentheclockstrikestwelve,theyletoffvariousfirecrackersoutdoorstoseetheOldYearoffandtheNewYearin

RiskWorthTakinginLife

Thereisnodenyingthatlifeisfilledwithuncountableundesirablerisks.Toillustrate,adriverthrowshimselfintodangerwhendrivingtoofast,andaheavysmokerisrunningtheriskofsufferingformlungcancer.Stillinourlife,however,therearemanyrisksworthtaking,sincetheywillbringyousuccess,fameorpleasure

Therearemanyworthyandrewardingrisks.Acaseinpoint（佐证）isthatrecentlyZhangJianchallengedthephysicallimitationofmanandriskedhislifeincrossingtheBohaiStrait.However,hesucceededandishailedasahero.Anothercaseinpointisstaringone’sownbusiness,esp.foralaid-offworker.Althoughoneriskslosingallhissavingsorpropertyatthebeginning,hestandsagoodchanceofwinninganever-promisingfuture.Besides,buyingstocksisanotherriskworthtaking,ifyoucantoleratethedramaticchangesinthestockmarket,you’llbeawardedwithendlessopportunitiestogetrich.Ofcoursemeanwhilerisksaccompanyyoueveryminute,andifyouarenotluckyenough,you’llbecomepennilessovernight.Butonethingiscertain,luckandmisfortunewillaccompanyyouastwinbrothers

Tosumup,althoughundergoingriskscanmakeyoumoreexperiencedandenableyoutoweatheranycrisisinlife,it’sadvisabletotakeonlytherewardingriskswhoseopportunitiesfaroutweightheirrisks

中国春节常用词语的英语表达

   过年celebratethespringfestival

　　春联springfestivalcouplets

　　剪纸paper-cuts

　　年画newyearpaintings

　　买年货doshoppingforthespringfestival;dospringfestivalshopping

　　敬酒proposeatoast

　　灯笼lantern

　　烟花fireworks

　　爆竹firecrackers（peoplescareoffevilspiritsandghostswiththeloudpop.）

　　红包redpackets（cashwrappedupinredpaper,symbolizefortuneandwealthinthecomingyear.）

　　舞狮liondance（thelionisbelievedtobeabletodispelevilandbringgoodluck.）

　　舞龙dragondance（toexpectgoodweatherandgoodharvests）

　　戏曲traditionalopera

　　杂耍varietyshow

　　灯谜riddleswrittenonlanterns

　　灯会exhibitoflanterns

　　守岁staying-up

　　拜年paynewyear'scall;givenewyear'sgreetings;paynewyear'svisit

　　禁忌taboo

　　去晦气getridoftheill-fortune

　　祭祖宗offersacrificestoone'sancestors

　　压岁钱giftmoney;moneygiventochildrenasalunarnewyeargift

　　culturenote:

intheolddays,newyear'smoneywasgivenintheformofonehundredcoppercoinsstrungtogetheronaredstringandsymbolizedthehopethatonewouldlivetobeahundredyearsold.today,moneyisplacedinsideredenvelopesindenominationsconsideredauspiciousandgiventorepresentluckandwealth

　　辞旧岁bidfarewelltotheoldyear

　　扫房springcleaning;generalhouse-cleaning

　　年糕nian-gao;risecake;newyearcake

　　团圆饭familyreuniondinner

　　年夜饭thedinneronnewyear'seve