雅思写作段落展开思路印刷版.docx

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I.雅思写作段落展开思路

影响（好处，弊端，作用85%）；原因；解决；

II.辩论类题型：

题型A：

双方观点Somepeoplebelievethat…whileothersholdthat…Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion./Whichonedoyouagree?

题型B：

利弊分析Nowadays,moreandmore…Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?

/Isitapositiveoranegativedevelopment?

题型C：

一方观点Somepeoplebelievethat…Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

●四段平衡式写作

●四段一边倒

●五段一边倒

开头段：

背景；点题；表态；

主体段1：

“毫无疑问，…”写出对方理由；

主体段2：

“然而，…”写出我方理由；

结论段：

直接回答问题；复述要点；提出建议；

2006年4月22日发展传统与现代利弊类双方观点Somepeoplebelievethathistoryislittleornothingtopeople.Othersthinkthatpeoplemuststudyhistorytounderstandthepresent.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutlearninghistory.Manyindividualsfinditlittleornothingtopeoplewhileothersconsideritadvisableforpeopletolearnhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer.

Indeed,therearereasonsforpeopletosupporthistoricaleducation（forpeopletobelievethatitisnecessarytolearnhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent）.Foronething,itimprovespeople’sculturalandnationalidentity.Accordingtoresearch,forinstance,thenationalintegrityinacountrywherethereisalonghistoryismuchstrongerthanthosewhichdonothavethis.Foranother,learninghistoryhelpspeopletohandletheproblemsatpresent.Tobespecific,peoplecandrawlessonsfromthepastand,therefore,avoidrepeatingthemistake.

However,theopinionfromtheothersideoftheargumentsoundsmorereasonabletome.Firstofall,unlikewhattheproponentsareboastingof,theexperienceinthehistorydoesnothelppeopleinpresentsociety.Whathappenedinthepastwasinitsownspecificconditions.Withtheseconditionschanged,itisuselessandevendangerousforpeopletocopywhatwasdonebefore.Besides,somehistoricalrecordsareunreliablethemselves.Justasthesayinggoes,thehistoryiswrittenbythewinner.Therefore,itisinevitablybiasedandmanipulated.Forexample,peoplecanseequitedifferentversionsofhistoryofthesameperiodandeventsfromtheinvadersandthosewhowereconquered.Lastbutnotleast,toomuchemphasisonthepastmightslowdownpeople’spaceofinnovations.Itcouldcausethepublictobetoomuchindulgedinthegloryinthepastwhileignoringmakingthegloryoftheirowntimes.

Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethattoomuchimportancehasbeenattachedtolearninghistory.Theexperienceinthepastmightbeobsoleteandmightbewrongandmisleading.Whatismore,toomuchattentiontohistoryisunfavorabletopeople’sinnovativeefforts.

i.开头段：

背景；话题；观点；

●交待背景：

用一句话提出本题的关键词或题目所属类别；把考题中的原因修改后作为背景句；

交待背景的明显误区：

“过大”，“过细”

Sincethepolicyofreformandopeningtotheoutside,lifeinChinahasbeenchangingrapidly.

Humansocietyisundergoingoverwhelmingchanges.

Whethertogivestudentstherighttoevaluateandevencriticizetheirteachersisahighlydebatableissue.Somepeopleholdthatstudentsshouldhavetherighttoevaluateandcriticizetheirteacherswhileothersdonotagree.Personally,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.

Whetherstudentsshouldbegiventherighttoevaluateandevencriticizetheirteachersisahighlydebatableissue.Somepeopleconsiderthispracticeadvisablewhileothersthinktheopposite.Personally,Iagreewiththeformeridea/Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouteducation.Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldbegrantedtherighttocriticizeandassesstheirteacherswhileothersdonotagree.Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformeridea.

Althoughtherearesomedisagreements,Istillbelievethatstudentsshouldhavetherighttoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.

常用背景句：

●Topicsof…neverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.

Topicsofeducationneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.

Topicsofchildren’sdoingpaidworkneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.

Topicsoftheroleofthegovernmentneverfailtodrawpeople’sinterest.

Thefuelpriceshouldbeincreasedtoprotectenvironment.

Topicsofthefuelprice/environmentneverfailtoarousepeople’sattention.

●Nowadays,theprevalence/worseningsituation/rampancyof…arouses/draws/attractswidepublicconcern/attention.（尤其适用问题解决办法类）

Nowadays,theprevalenceofenvironmentalproblemsarouseswidepublicconcern.

Atpresent,theworseningenvironmentalsituationarouseswidepublicattention.

Atpresent,theworseningsituationofpublicsecuritydrawswidepeople’sconcern.

Atpresent,therampancyofcrimedrawswidepublicconcern.

现在汽车的普及引起了广泛的公众关注。

现在，不断恶化的环境形势引起了广泛公众关注。

现在，盗猎行为（poaching）的猖獗引起广泛公众关注。

●Therehaslongbeenheated/spiritualdebateabout…

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutsendingtheelderlytonursinghomes.

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouthowtoraisechildrentobegoodsocietymembers.

Therehaslongbeenspiritualdiscussionaboutraisingthefuelpricetoprotectenvironment.

长期以来，关于实施更加严厉的惩罚（harsherpunishment）以减少犯罪存在一个激烈的辩论。

长期以来，关于教孩子们使用电脑有激烈的辩论。

Individualshavesplit/differentideasabout…

Individualshavemixedfeelingstowards…

Individualshavesplitideasaboutairplanes.

Individualshavemixedfeelingstowardsprivatecars.

Individualshavedifferentopinionsaboutadvertisementstowardschildren.

…refersto…

Tele-educationreferstothepracticethatstudentslearnathomewithmoderninformationtechnologieswithoutgoingtothecampus.

Nowadays,theinfluenceof…canbefeltateverycornerofoursociety.

Ourlifeandsocietyhavebeensignificantlychangedby…

Nowadays,theinfluenceofscienceandtechnologycanbefeltateverycornerofoursociety.

Atpresent,…isgainingprevalence/popularityatastaggeringrate.

Nowadays,…isadvancing/developingatanalarmingrate.

Atpresent,internetisgainingpopularityatastaggeringrate.

Nowadays,fashionisadvancingatanamazingrate.

Theissueof…isnotanewone.

Theissueoffightingcrimeisnotanewone.

省略号部分可以填入题干中的关键名词或题目所属类别；

常见题目类别：

education,scienceandtechnology,environment,family,theroleofthegovernment,health,themassmedia,thelaw,publicsecurity,culture,internationaltrade,internationalrelations,theeconomicgrowth,theworldofworking,traveling…

●改题目：

1.替换词：

Somepeoplebelievethat…

Manyindividuals

认为：

believe,think,consider,find,

deem,reckon,assert,argue,suggest,claim,

beconvinced,beconfident,holdthebelief…

Planersnowoftenputbuildingsofthesamefunctionssuchasschools,homesandofficesinseparateareaswhicharefarawayfromeachother.Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?

Inmoderncities,peopleoftenhavetoliveinoneplacebutgotoworkinanotherdistantplace.

2.宾语从句——宾补

从句——分词短语；

去掉连接词；动词+ing；being；

Somepeoplebelievethatprotectingwildanimalsisawasteofthegovernment’smoney.

Manyindividualsfindprotectingwildanimalsawasteofthepublicfund/taxmoney.

情态动词：

Sb.should/would/mustdo…=Itis…forsb.todo…

Somepeoplebelievethat…shoulddo…

Sb.shoulddo…——Itisagoodideaforsb.todo…

Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshoulddopart-timejobs.

Manyindividualsconsiderthatitisagoodideaforstudentstodopart-timejobs.

Manyindividualsconsideritagoodideaforstudentstodopart-timejobs.

Agoodidea/reasonable/fair/advisable/wise/right

Somepeoplebelievethatoldpeopleshouldliveinnursinghouses.

Manyindividualsfindthatitisadvisableforelderlycitizenstoliveinnursinghouses.

Manyindividualsfinditadvisableforelderlycitizenstoliveinnursinghouses.

Ex1.Somepeoplebelievethatschoolsshouldteachthestudentstojudgerightandwrongbutotherssaythatparentsshouldteachit.

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateaboutparentingandschooling.Manyindividualsfindthatitisagoodideaforschoolstoteachthemorallessonwhileothersconsideritabetterideaforparentstoteachit.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer.

Sb.will/woulddo…——Itispossible/likelyforsb.todo…

Somepeoplebelievethatcomputerswillreplacethepublicmuseums.

Manyindividualsfindthatitislikelyforpublicmuseumstobereplacedbycomputers.

Manyindividualsfinditlikelyforpublicmuseumstobereplacedbycomputers.

Sb.mustdo...——Itisnecessaryforsb.todo...

Somepeoplebelievethatwemuststudyhistorytounderstandnow.

Manyindividualsthinkthatitisnecessaryforustostudyhistoryinordertounderstandthepresent.

3.主动——被动

Somepeoplebelievethatthegovernmentshouldspendmoneyprotectingwildanimals.

Manyindividualsholdthatthetaxmoneyshouldbespentprotectingwildanimals.

Manyindividualsfinditreasonablefortaxmoneytobespentprotectingwildanimals.

双方观点：

Ex1.Somepeoplebelievethatparentsshouldencouragechildrentodosomepaidworkbutotherssaythatchildrenshouldconcentrateonstudy.…

Children’sdoingpaidworkisahighlydebatableissue.Manyindividualsconsideritadvisableforkidstobeencouragedtodosowhileothersfinditabetterideaforthemtofocusonstudy.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformer/latter.

Therehaslongbeenheateddebateabouteducation.Manyindividualsholdthebeliefthatchildrenshouldbeencouragedtodosomepaidworkwhileothersconsideritabetterideaforkidstofocusonstudy.Personally,Iagreewiththeformer/latter.

Itiscommonlyacceptedthatchildrenshouldfocusonstudy.However,thisassertionisbeingchallengedbyanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhoarguethatthekidsshouldbeencouragedtodosomepaidwork.Asforme,thereismoretruthintheformerstatement.

Althoughdoingpaidworkmaybringsomebenefitstochildren,Istillbelie