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Lesson2
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Lesson3LettersforVariousOccasions
LookingAheaC
Approachinq
ReadytoWrite
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FurtherPractice
Self-assessment
theTopic
LookingAhead(AimsandContents)
♦Furtherpracticeorganizingletters.♦Learntowritelettersofinvitation.
♦Learntowritelettersofapology.
♦Learntowritelettersofthanks.
♦Learntowritelettersofcongratulations.
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EnglsihPracticalWriting
ApproachingtheTopic
FinishExercise1onPage28:
Readthefollowingsituationsandthendiscussingroupswhatkindoflettersshouldbewrittenforeachofthem・
1)Youwanttoholdabirthdaypartywithyourfriends.
aletterofinvitation
2)YourfriendhasbeenadmittedbyPekingUniversity.
aletterofcongratulation
3)Youhavebeenunabletokeepanappointmentor
promise.aletterofapology
4)Youhavereceivedabirthdaygiftfromyouraunt.
aletterofthanks
5)YouwanttospendyourholidayinHainannextmonth,andyouarenotsurewhetheryoucangetandbookinaroomwithaseaviewinahotel.aletterofinquiry
6)Yourfriendfailedanimportantexamandisinalowspirit.aletterofconsolation
7)Youhavereceivedyourfriendsinvitationforthewedding・However,willbeonabusinesstriponthatveryday・aletterofansweringtheinvitation
8)Yousawapart-timejobadvertisementofinthenewspaper,andyouwanttoapply.aletterofapplication
9)Youboughtanewradio,anditmalfunctionedthenextday,andworstofall,yourrequestforrepairingwasrejectedrudely.aletterofcomplaints
FinishExercise2onPage29-30:
Comparethefollowingtwoinvitationlettersandanswerthequestions.
Conclusion:
相比较而言,第一封信显得冗长罗唆,写了很长一段话都没有进入主题,内容不确切,很容易让读者感到费解和厌烦,到最后一段才匆匆提到写信的目的,显得杂乱和没有重点。
而第二封信简洁、清楚、明了,一开始就直入主题,发出邀请,给出细节,结尾又再次点题;整封信层次清晰,重点突岀。
ReadytoWrite
1.Thefirstandthelastsentencesofthefollowinglettersaremissing.Readthelettersandworkoutthepurposeofeachofthem.
LetterOne:
Aletterofthanks
LetterTwo:
Aletterofcongratulation
LetterThree:
Aletterofapology
LetterFour:
alettertoanswertheinvitation
2.ReadthesentencesandthenputthemintheblanksofthelettersinExercise1.
LetterOne:
1)C
2)G
LetterTwo:
3)B
4)F
LetterThree:
5)A
6)E
LetterFour:
7)D
8)H
MyWriting
YouweresupposedtohaveajobinterviewinGlobalTravelAgencyin34,MarbleStreetat3p.m.yesterday・ButonyourwaytotheAgency,youmetalittlegirlwhowashelplesslycryingforhavinglostherway.Youhelpedherfindapoliceman.However,youwerelatefortheinterviewandthereforelastthechanceofapplyingforthejob.PleasewritealettertothePersonnelManagerofthatcompanytoapologizeforbeinglate,explainthereasonandaskforanotherchanceforaninterview・
Step1
Beforeyouwrite,askyourselftowhomandforwhatpurposeyouwerewriting.Thendecidethetoneofyourletter.
Step2
Writetheletter.
Step3
CheckyourdraftaccordingtothechecklistonPage32.Andcorrectthemistakes・
Step4
Writethefinaldraft.
MyWriting参考答案
56theNewsRoad
Chengdu
ThePersonnelManager
TheGlobalTravelAgency
34MarbleStreet
Chengdu
DearSir,
Iamwritingtoexpressmyapologyfornotbeingabletotakethejobinterviewontimeyesterday.
MyWriting参考答案
IrealizethatpunctualityisoneofthemostimportantvirtuesinyourbusinessandIunderstandyourdecisionofcancelingmyinterview.IknowIshouldnothavemadesuchabigmistake.ButonmywaytotheinterviewImetalittlegirlcryinghelplesslyforhavinglostherway.AndonseeingthisIhelpedherfindapolicemanwithouthesitation.AfterhelpingherIfoundIwasseveralminuteslatefortheinterview.Iknowbeinglateisbothimpoliteandirresponsible^butIstillhopethatyoucangrandmeasecondchanceforinterview.Ifyoucould,Iwouldbemostgrateful^-/
MyWriting参考答案
Apologyagainformybeinglateandhopeyoucangivemeanotherchancetoshowyoumyqualifications.
Yoursfaithfully,AliceLee
FurtherPractice
1.PleasewritealettertoyourfriendDiana,expressingyourthanksforherhospitalityduringyourstayinherfamily・
2・Pleasewritealettertoyourparents,congratulatingthemontheir20thweddinganniversary・
3・Pleasewritealettertoyourteacher,apologizingforyourimpolitebehaviorintheclassroom・
FurtherPractice参考答案
1.
May14,2005
DearDiana,
Thankyouforallowingmetostayinyourfamilylastweek.Ireallyappreciateyourkindhospitality.
Ihadawonderfultime.Theconversationswithyourfamilywerepleasantandthefoodsdelicious.Andifsverythoughtfulofyoutoshowmearoundyourcityandaccompanymetosomanyplacesofinterest.Theyareveryworthwhiletrips.AndIguessIhavealotthingtowriteinmycompositionclass.
Thanksalot.Itwaslovelytoseeyouall.AndIreallylookforwardtoournextmeetinginmycity.Seeyouagainsoon!
Love,
FurtherPractice参考答案
2.
July7,2004
MydearestDaddyandMummy,
Congratulationsonyourtwenty-fifthweddinganniversary!
Youjustcan%imaginehowhappy,excitedandgratefulIamnowwhenthinkingaboutthelovebetweenyouandtheloveIreceivedfromyou.Thankyouforgivingmeahappyfamily.AlltheseyearsIhave
seenalotofchangesinyoulikethecolorofyourhairandthewrinklesinyourface,butonethinghasiftchangeatall一thespecialloveyouhaveforthefamily.I
amproudtohaveparentslikeyou.AndIcanonlywishyoumoreofthesameahead.
__Happyweddi瞬僦础9DaddyandMum
Love,
FurtherPractice参考答案
3・
Oct.30,2004
DearMissClark,
Iamverysorryformyimpolitebehaviorinyourclassyesterday.
Ididn^tmeantoberudetoyou.Iwas,infact,inverylowspiritatthattimebecauseIjustfoundmymp3whichisabirthdaygiftfrommymumwasstolen.Sowhenyouaskedmequestion,Iyelledatyou.AfterthatIrealizedhowrudeIamtospeaktoyouthatway.
Againmyregretformybehavior.Dopleaseforgiveme.
Yourssincerely,
Tom
Self-assessment
Reflectyourself,encourageyourselfzandimproveyourself!