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江苏省各地中考英语满分作文汇总
2019年南京市中考英语满分作文
假如你是李华,在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件(app)征集网友建议.请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件.
IDEASNEEDED
BritechisnowdesigninganappthathelpslearnerswiththeirEnglishwriting.Theappistohelplearnersexploreideas,organizethemandwritethemdown.Yourideasareneeded!
Here'swhattodo:
Writetoshareyourideas!
Feelfreetobecreative!
Pleaseletusknow:
What'sthenameoftheapp?
Whatproblemdoestheappsolve?
Whatdoestheappdo?
Contactusatappdesign@Britechcom
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥.
2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数).
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等.
DearSirorMadam,
ThanksfordesigninganappforEnglishwriting.
___________________________________
Yours
LiHua
满分作文:
【分析】高分句型一:
Manyofushavedifficultyinwriting.我们中的许多人写作困难.
havedifficultydoing干某事有困难.
高分句型二:
Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking.我希望我的建议值得采纳.
beworthdoing值得干某事.
【解答】DearSirorMadam,
ThanksfordoinganAPPforEnglishwriting.I'dliketosharemyideashere.Coulditsnamebe"rightmadeeasy"?
【APP的名字】
Manyofushavedifficultyinwriting.【高分句型一】Wedon'tknowhowtoorganizeideas,useproperwords,andsoon.Ihopeitcansolvetheseproblems.【APP要解决的问题】
HereismyadviceonwhattheAPPdoes.First,itshouldprovidesomereadingmaterials.Themoreweread,thebetterwewrite.Second.TheAPPshouldhaveanonlinecoursesothatwecandevelopourwritingskills.Third,thereshouldbeane﹣teacherwhocancorrectmistakesandoffersuggestions.【APP能做什么】
Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking.【高分句型二】
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年江苏省无锡市中考英语满分作文
假设你叫李文,是无锡阳光中学(WuxiSunshineMiddleSchool)的一名学生.今天暑期,你将代表你校赴瑞士参加"模拟联合国"会议并发言,此次会议的主题是AGreenWorld.你草拟了发言流程图,请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿.
注意事项:
1.发言稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.流程图中包括部分非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在90个左右,发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总数.
4.发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息.
5.发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上.
________.
【分析】高分句型一:
Letmeintroducemyselftoyoufirst.
introducesbtosb把某人介绍给某人.这句话意为:
首先我介绍下自己.
高分句型二:
What'smore.Wecanusebagsmadeofclothinthesupermarket.
what'smore而且,madeofcloth由布料制成的.这句话意为:
而且,我们在超市可以用布料的袋子.
【解答】Goodmoring,Everyone!
It'smygreathonourtogiveaspeech.Letmeintroducemyselftoyoufirst(高分句型一).(开篇打招呼说明来意)
MynameisLiWen.I'mfromWuxi,China.IstudyinWuxiSunshineMiddleSchool.Iam14yearsold.Weallhopewewillhaveagreenworld.SoasforourChina,Wehavedonesomethingtomaketheworld.Forexample,Wetooksomeactionsforsomefactories.Wehaveclosedsomefactorieswhichdogreatharmtoourenvironment.Besides,Wearealsostudyingnewenergy.includingcarswithnewenergy.Wehopewecandomoreforthebeautifulworld.(介绍自己并介绍中国为绿色世界做的事情)
Asastudent,Wealsocandoalotofthings.Wecanturnofflightsonceweleavetheroom.Andweshouldsavethewaterespeciallywhenwetakeashower.What'smore.Wecanusebagsmadeofclothinthesupermarket(高分句型二).Hopewehaveagreenworldinthenearfuture.Thankyou!
(介绍作为学生该如何为绿色世界做事情)
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年江苏省连云港市中考英语满分作文
减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间.某校英语角就"如何让课余生活更有意义?
"展开了讨论,大家各抒己见.请你根据如图提示,以"HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?
"为题,用英语写一篇短文.
注意:
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息.
(4)参考词汇:
提升素养promoteliteracy
HowTomakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?
Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeourspare
timemoremeaningful?
.
【分析】【高分句型一】
First,it'sgoodtohelpourparentshouseworktoshowourlove.首先,帮助父母做家务来表达我们的爱是很好的.
it'sgoodtodo…做某事是很好的.
【高分句型二】
What'smore,wecantakeanactivepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthoseinneed.更重要的是,我们可以作为志愿者积极参加一些社会活动来帮助那些需要帮助的人.
takeanactivepartin积极参加
【解答】Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomaketimemoremeaningful?
(点题,引起下文)
Myschoolmatesgivethefollowingsuggestions.First,it'sgoodtohelpourparentshouseworktoshowourlove.【高分句型一】Second,wewillknowmoreabouttheworldbyreading.Third,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.(学生的三个观点)
Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.What'smore,wecantakeanactivepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthoseinneed.【高分句型二】(我的建议)
Inaword,let'smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年江苏省镇江市中考英语满分作文
假如你是阳光中学的李华,每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(requiredcourse)与选修课(electivecourse),请介绍必修课TravelofScience,根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由;同时,对你的选择的课程提出建议.
Requiredcourse
ElectiveCourse
Subject
Travelofscience
•introducingscientists
andinventions
Subject
Photography
•takingphotos
Gardening
•growingflowers
Teacher
aprofessor
Teacher
ayoungreporter
anoldgardener
Time&Place
•2:
30p.m.﹣3:
15p.m.
•schoolhall
Time&Place
•4:
00p.m.﹣4:
45p.m.
•CityPark
•4:
00p.m.﹣4:
45p.m.
•School'sgarden
Tip
takenotebooksandpens
Tip
Takecameras
toolsofferedbyschool
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息;
2.对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由,并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息.
_________.
【分析】高分句型一:
LetmeintroducearequiredcourseandmyelectivecoursePhotographytoyou.
letsbdosth让某人做某事,introducesthtosb把某物介绍给某人.这句话意为:
让我来介绍下一门必修课和我的选修课摄影给你吧.
高分句型二:
Ifthetimelastslonger,Itwillbebetter.
If引导的条件状语从句,遵循"主将从现"原则,即主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时态.这句话意为:
如果时间能够延续更长,那将会更好.
【解答】OurschoolhasrequiredcourseandelectivecourseonFridayafternoons.LetmeintroducearequiredcourseandmyelectivecoursePhotographytoyou(高分句型一).(开篇点明题意)
Asforrequiredcourse,It'sTravelofscience.Itwillintroducescientistsandinventions.It'sveryimportantforus.Sopleasetakenotebooksandpenswhenyouhaveit.Theteacherisaprofessor.Youcangotoschoolhalltohavethisclass,Itstartsfrom2:
30p.m.to3:
15p.m.DoyouwanttoknowmoreaboutmyelectivecoursePhotography?
Ithinkit'sveryinterestingandpractical.Itwillteachushowtotakephotos.Theteacherisayoungreporter.YoucangototheCityParktohavethisclass.Itstartsfrom4:
00p.m.to4:
45p.m.Remembertotakecameras.Inmyeyes.Ifthetimelastslonger,Itwillbebetter(高分句型二).(介绍必修课,对一门选修课进行介绍与说明原因,给出建议)
Doyoulikethesecourses?
Pleasetellme.(结尾提出问题)
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年江苏省泰州市中考英语满分作文
为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动.请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想.活动内容:
1.上午游览人民公园:
欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;
2.下午参观市民广场:
观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变.
你的感想:
1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;
2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;
3.……(考生自己发挥)
要求:
1.词数100左右.开头已给出,不计人总词数.
2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥.
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息.
参考词汇:
市民广场CivicSquare
InordertoenrichJunior3students'after﹣schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.
______________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
Wewatchedthephotoexhibitiontounderstandthegreatchangesinourmotherlandandhometowninthepast70years.
我们观看了摄影展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变.tounderstandthegreatchanges动词不定式作目的状语
【高分句型二】
IwassoinspiredthatIwasdeterminedtostudyhardandservethemotherland.
我受到鼓舞,决心努力学习,报效祖国.so…that如此……以至于,bedeterminedtodosth决定做某事
【解答】InordertoenrichJunior3students'after﹣schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.WevisitedthePeople'sParkinthemorning.Weenjoyedthebeautifulscenery,sanganddancedtogetherthere.Wetooksomephotosthere.(上午游览人民公园:
欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念)WevisitedtheCivicSquareintheafternoon.Wewatchedthephotoexhibitiontounderstandthegreatchangesinourmotherlandandhometowninthepast70years.【高分句型一】(下午参观市民广场:
观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变)Wedeepenedthefeelingsbetweenourclassmatesandteachersthroughthisactivity.IwassoinspiredthatIwasdeterminedtostudyhardandservethemotherland.【高分句型二】IdecidedtospreadtheachievementsofChinatotheoutsideworld.(感想)Whatameaningfulactivityitwas!
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年江苏省淮安市中考英语满分作文
为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日,学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动,如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等;请围绕该话题写一篇短文,内容包括以下要点:
1.你看到或参加过一次活动(包括时间、地点、经过);
2.你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情;
3.你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量.
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2.词数在80~100,已给出的文字不计入总词数.
Tocelebratethe70thbirthdayofourmotherland(祖国),________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
StudentsofGradeSevenworkedasguideswhotookvisitorstodifferentrooms.七年级的学生做导游,带游客去不同的房间.
who引导定语从句.
【高分句型二】
Itisagoodchanceforusstudentstodevelopasenseofresponsibilityaswellasourworkability.
aswellasA和B一样
it在此处为形式主语,真正的主语为后面的不定式todevelopasenseofresponsibilityaswellasourworkability.
【解答】Tocelebratethe70thbirthdayofourmotherland.IwenttotheGuangdongMuseumwithmyschoolmatestodosomevoluntaryworktoday.Studentsfromthreegradestookpartinitandworkedasdifferentroles.StudentsofGradeSevenworkedasguideswhotookvisitorstodifferentrooms.【高分句型一】AndthoseofGradeEightplayedashortopera,introducingGuangzhouhistorytotourists.AsforstudentsofGradeNine,theymadebeautifulposterswhichhelpedpeopleknowLingnanCulturebetter.(活动内容)
Inmyopinion,itisofgreathelptoholdsuchactivities.Ononehand,itisagoodchanceforusstudentstodevelopasenseofresponsibilityaswellasourworkability.【高分句型二】Ontheotherhand,thehistoryandculturecanbepassedonfromonegenerationtoanother.(对活动的感受)Iplantostudyha