届二轮复习 专题十九短文改错.docx

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届二轮复习专题十九短文改错

2016届二轮复习专题十九短文改错学案（安徽专用）

　　高考精萃

（一）

（2014·辽宁卷）

DearJeremyandAlice，

Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.

We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.

Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.

Sincerely，

JackandRose

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（二）

（2014·陕西卷）

MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.

Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!

Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.

ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!

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（三）

（2014·四川卷）

Hello,boysandgirls!

Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.

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（四）

（2014·课标全国卷Ⅰ）

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore，andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!

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（五）

（2014·课标全国卷Ⅱ）

Mydreamschoolstartsat8：

30a．m.andendsat3：

30p．m..Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafterschoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.

Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

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（六）

（2014·浙江卷）

IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.

Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.

Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticketownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.

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（七）

（2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ）

Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.

Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.

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（八）

（2013·课标全国卷Ⅱ）

ThebookI'mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.

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（九）

（2013·辽宁卷）

Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.

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（十）

（2013·陕西卷）

MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.

OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.

Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.

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（十一）

（2013·浙江卷）

DearDiary，

HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?

Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI'llneverfallsleep.

Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

Yours，

Rosemary

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（十二）

（2013·四川卷）

Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher'soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunishme?

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　　模拟精选

（一）

（2014·太原一模）

MoreandmoreforeignersliketocometoChina.LastFridayourschoolwasinvitedaforeignteacherinourcitygiveaclasstothestudentsofSeniorGradeTwo.Wefoundhisclassinterested.Ilearnedalotfromhim.TheteacherhadafreetalktouswitheasyEnglish.Hespokeslowsothatwecouldunderstandhimwell.Sometimesherepeatedwhatwedon'tunderstand.Myclassmateswereallactiveintheclass.Tohisjoy,Iunderstoodeverythingtheteachersaid.AndIwasabletoaskquestioninEnglish.Thisclassencouragedmeverymuch.I'msurethatuntilwekeeponpracticing,itwillbeeasyforustolearnspeakingEnglishwell.

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（二）

（2014·陕西宝鸡质检二）

Mr.Wilsonlikesfreshairmorethananybodyelse's.Helikesnearlyalltheothergamesinthefreshair.Healwayssleepswithhiswindowsfullyopen.Hehasanopencarwithnoroof,buthedrivesitmadlythroughthefreshair.Wheneverheentersaroomwherethewindowswereshut,hewillimmediatelyopenit.Hedoesthisevenwhensnowisfallenoutside.Ifsomeoneshutthewindowsagain,hewillwalkouttheroomangrilyatonce.Onceonthefreezingnight,afterhefailedtoopenthewindowsatahotel,hebecamesoangrythathebroketheglasseswithhisshoe.

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（三）

（2014·成都二诊）

Wearewhatweeat.Soitislessimportanttoformgoodeatinghabits.However,badeatinghabitsexistedamongstudents.Someofusoftengotoschoolwithoutbreakfast,andsomeareparticularlyaboutfood,forexample.Tokeephealthy,wesbouldhavehealthydiet,whichgenerallyincludeproperamountsoffish,meat,fruitaswellasthemainfood.Besides,we'dbetterhavemealregularly.Weshouldtrydevelopgoodeatinghabitstobuildourselves,preparingourselvesforwhichourfuturemayrequire.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughofenergytostudyorlivebetter.

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（四）

（2014·河南洛阳统考）

I'mverygratefultomyparents.Theynotonlygavemelife,butalsobroughtmeupwithendlessloveandsupport,feelsoproudofmyeveryimprovements.IstillrememberedonceIwasseriouslyill,theyweresoworryingandalmostkeptmecompanythewholenight.NowI'mGrade3.Luckyforme，myparentscanunderstandmystressfulconditionbutoftencommunicatewithmewithencouragingwords.Furthermore,theygivemeenoughpersonalspace，whichIappreciateitsomuch.

WhatIshoulddonowarestudyhard.WhenIgrowup,Iwillbecomeanusefulpersonandmakemyparentsliveahappylife.

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