新大学英语四六级写作范文赏析18篇.docx

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新大学英语四六级写作范文赏析18篇

范文赏析

（一）

MyViewonFakeCommodities

　　1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。

　　2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

MyViewonFakeCommodities

　　Nowadaysfakecommoditieshavefloodedalmosteveryinchofthemarket.Whereveryouare,whateveryoudo,itseemsthatyoucanhardlyhavefallenpreytothem.Inotherwords,itishighlyprobablethatyouhaveboughtsomeofthosefakegoodsorproductsofinferiorquality。

　　Needlesstosay,fakecommoditieshavealreadydonegreatharmtooursociety.Ontheonehand,theywillruinthegoodreputationofgenuineproductsanddisturbthebalanceofthemarket.Ontheotherhand,theprevalenceofsuchproductshashinderedinterpersonalrelationshipandresultedinthedeclineofpublicmorality.Asaconsequence,theyhavewastedexhaustibleresources,endangeredpeople’spreciouslifeandhealth,andinthelongrunerodedpublictrust。

Then,whatshouldbedonetodoawaywithfakecommodities?

Tostartwith,thegovernmentneedstotightenitsinspectionprogramandstrengthenitsenforcementpolicies.Secondly,honestbusinessmenshouldmodifysomelong-acceptedpracticesattheprotectionoftheirintellectualpropertyright.Mostimportantofall,weconsumerswillhavetodoabetterjoboflearninghowtodistinguishbetweenthegenuineandthephoneyanddefinitelysaynotothefakeones.Inoneword,thecoordinatedeffortofthewholesocietywillputanendtofakecommodities.

范文赏析

（二）

KnowledgeandDiploma

1.目前社会上存在这样一种说法：

文凭越高越吃香;

2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识;你的观点

KnowledgeandDiploma

Itisgenerallybelievedthatahighdiplomaguaranteesapromisingfuture.Somepeopleidentifyhighdiplomaswithprofoundknowledgeandexceptionalcompetence.Companiesalsotendtoemphasizetheacademicachievementofajobcandidate.Likeitornot,theredoesexistasocialreality–thehigherdiplomasonegets,themorepopularhebecomes.

Onthecontrary,otherpeopleclaimthatahighdiplomadoesn’tautomaticallytranslateintoknowledge.Adiploma,intheireyes,isonlytheacknowledgmentofone’seducationalexperienceratherthanaguaranteeofone’sability.Therefore,wecannevermeasurethedepthofone’sknowledgebythegradeofone’sdiploma.Besides,manyknowledgeablepeopledon’thaveahighdiploma.TakeBillGatesforexample.Hisdroppingoutofcollegecannotdenythefactthatheisoneoftheworld’smostlearnedmen.

SoImustsaynooneshouldeverequateadiplomawithknowledge,becauseadiplomaisnothingbutaproofofashort-termstudywhilegenuineknowledgeneedsone’slifelongdevotion.

范文赏析（三）

TheRiseofShanzhaiCulture

1.最近兴起了一股“山寨热”;

2.你如何看待山寨现象

●审题概述●本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。

第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨热。

第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。

第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。

TheRiseofShanzhaiCulture

Thevastarrayofknockoffname-brandproducts,suchascellphones,DVDs,MP3players,havemade“shanzhai”thehottestwordoftheyear.Nowwewearshanzhaiwatches,talkthroughshanzhaicellphones,playshanzhaivideogames,useshanzhaicomputers,evenwatchshanzhaiTVshows.Onceatermusedbeforesomeelectronicproductstosuggestacopycatversionofinferiorquality,shanzhainowsuggeststomanyChinesecreativityandtrendiness.Withthemediaallovertheriseofshanzhaiculture,publicopinionsareclearlydivided.

Advocatesinvariablyassociateitwithinnovation,stylishness,theDIYspirit,open-mindednessandpracticality,asshanzhaiproductsoftenmiximitationwithinnovation—asimilarskinbutadifferentheart.Theendproductsareusuallymorefunctionalandmuchcheaperthantheoriginal.Besides,theyrespondtothemarketmoreswiftlyandtheyaremoreconsiderateindesign.Thankstothem,morepeopleatthegrassrootslevelcanenjoythebenefitofmoderntechnology.

However,otherpeople,includingmyself,holdmorereservedattitudestowardstheshanzhaifever.Forallthepopularityithaswon,acopycatisacopycat.Themockeryoftheprestigeproductsnotonlystealstheirprofitsbutalsoupsetsmarketcompetition.Moreover,shanzhaiproductsthriveonthecurrentlegalloopholes.Underthedisguiseofanti-dominanceslogans,theymakeillegalprofitsbyviolatingintellectualpropertyrightsandevadingtaxes.Andtotopitoff,theso-calledinnovationisonlysenselesstalkastrueinnovationalwaysfaceshugecostsandpotentialfailures,whileplagiarismsimplybuildssuccessonotherpeople’srisks.

范文赏析（四）

It’sTimetoStopSoftwarePiracy

1.盗版软件比比皆是;

2.盗版软件猖獗的原因;

3.如何打击盗版软件

●审题概述●这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。

第一段，概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况。

第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。

第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。

It’sTimetoStopSoftwarePiracy

Chinahasoftenbeencriticizedfortherampantpracticeofsoftwarepiracy.Takealookaround.WeoperateonpiratedWindowssystems,defendPCsecuritywithpiratedKasperskyanti-virusprogrammes,processfileswithpiratedMicrosoftOffice,draft3DdesignswithpiratedAutoCAD,refinepictureswithpiratedAdobePhotoshop,andstudyEnglishwithpiratedKingsoft’selectronicdictionariesandtranslators.It’snoexaggerationthatpiratedsoftwareiseverywhere.

Thelogicbehindthephenomenonissimpleandclear:

ifapiratedcopyisavailableforjustatinyfractionofthenormalprice,nottospeakofmanyofthefreedownloadsonline,whowouldpayforanauthenticcopy?

Cheaperpricesaside,easyaccessisanotherimportantfactor.Withsuchalargegatheringofpiratedupgradesaround,whowouldbothertospendtimeandmoneysearchingthestoresforanauthorizedyetoutdatedversion?

Despitetheseapparentbenefits,thepracticeofsoftwarepiracyshouldbebanned,becauseitrepresentsunfaircompetitionandbynatureit’sano-winsituation.Buthow?

Twoapproachesaretobetakenatthesametime:

Technically,softwaredevelopersshouldenhancetheirantipiracyengineering,sothatcrackingthesoftwareshouldbevirtuallyimpossible.Andlegally,thegovernmentshouldalsotightenitsantipiracylawsandtoughenupthepenalties,sothatviolationsshouldbecostly.

范文赏析（五）

金融危机

1.金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响;

2.金融危机对大学生造成何种影响;

3.作为大学生，应怎样应对这种影响.

●审题概述●这是一篇主要论述金融危机与大学生关系的文章。

第一段，概述金融危机给世界造成的影响。

第二段，论述金融危机给大学生带来的就业、经济等影响。

第三段，阐述大学生面对金融危机带来的影响应提高专业技能等。

EffectsofFinancialCrisisonCollegeStudents

Sincethefinancialcrisisswepttheworld,theglobaleconomyhassunkintoasevererecession.It’shardtogetthroughadaywithouthearingorreadingnewsaboutthedevastatingeffectsofthecrisis:

Aworldofcompaniesgobankrupt,millionsofemployeesarelaidoff,high-returninvestmentbubblesburst,andhugesumsofloanscanneverberetrieved.Itsimpactonourdailylifecanbefeltinallwalksoflife.

Collegestudentsinevitablyfallvictimtothispervasiveslumpaswell.Ontopofthat,internshipsandjobvacanciesarereducedtotheminimumascompanieskeepshrinking.Newgraduatesfindthemselveshardtogetajob,nottospeakofasatisfactoryone.Whatcomesnext?

Poorstudentswillbehard-pressediftheyfindstudentloansunavailableanymore.Asaresult,someevencannotaffordtocontinuetheirstudies.Lastly,morestudentsareprobablyoutthereanxiouslylookingforpart-timejobsnowthattheyhavetohelpcovertheirexpensesinthisgloomyeconomy.Theirinnocenceandeagernessmightbetakenadvantageofbysomemaliciousbusinesspeople,orevencriminalgang.

Inresponsetothesethreats,westudentsmustactpromptlyandwisely.Sincewedefinitelywillbefacingacompetitivejobmarket,it’scrucialthatwesubmithighqualityresumes.Therefore,wemustcommitmoretoourprofessionalstudies.Evendobetter,mastermorerelevantjobskillsasadoublesecurity.Furthermore,applyforscholarshipsandgrants,asthesearestillavailableandwedon’thavetopaythemback.Asforthesafetyissues,trustourinstinct—there’snofreelunchinthisworld.Anythingthatpromisesquickreturnswithoutmuchworkisasuretrap.Stayalertandprotectourselves.

范文赏析（六）

志愿者活动

1.越来越多的人从事志愿者工作;　　

2.志愿者工作的社会意义;　　

3.作为大学生，应该怎么做

Volunteeringactions

　　Inrecentyears,thevolunteeringspirithasspreadamongtheChinesepeople,especiallyamongyoungsters.Accordingtoasurvey,in2008,therewereabout1,700,000volunteerswhoofferedserviceforOlympicGames.Actually,anincreasingnumberofpeoplebecomevolunteerseveryyearinChina。

　　Volunteeringactionsareoftremendousbenefitstoboththoseinneedandthesociety.OlympicGamesareagoodexample.Asisknowntoall,volunteersplayedanactiveroleinBeijingOlympicGames.Withoutthem,itwouldbeatoughtasktoholdthisun-precedentOlympicGames.Therefore,wecansaythatitwasthosevolunteerswhoensuredthesuccessofthesegames。

　　Asmoderncollegestudents,weshouldgetactivelyinvolvedinvolunteeringactivities.Byparticipating,wecanlearnhowtoworkwellinateam,howtoimproveourinterpersonalskillsandorganizationalability.Undoubtedly,allofthesearecriticalforourpersongrowth.So,weshouldtakethischancetolearnandtogrow.

范文赏析（七）

大城市就业还是小城镇

1.很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作；　

2.也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯；

3.结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。

　　Wanttobeasmallfishinabigpondortheotherwayround?

Everygraduatefacesthisquestionwhenstartinghiscareer.Alargenumberofcollegegraduatesprefertostayinbigcities,whichmeanmoreexperiences,moreopportunitiestoseethebigworldandmorespaceforcareerdevelopment.Atthesametime,highersalaryisanothertemptation。

　　Butsomeothergraduatesintendtostartinsmalltowns.Eventhoughtheremaynotbemanybigcompanies,theycanhaveaquieterandlesscompetitivelife.Anotherreasonisthattheycanbeabigfishinasmallpond.Theycaneasilygetthemanagement’sattentionandmaywinpromotionearlier。

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iprefertostartinametropolisl