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审稿人意见及回复模板

审稿人意见及回复,模板

　　篇一：

SCI审稿意见回复范文

　　论文题目：

PharmacokineticandpharmacodynamicstudiesontheantiviruseffectsofA（一种中草药）againstvirusB（一种病毒）

　　所投杂志：

LifeSciences

　　投稿结果：

这次大修后又经过一次小修，被接受发表

　　编辑信内容（注：

有删节）：

　　DearMr.XXX,

　　Yourmanuscripthasbeenexaminedbytheeditorsandqualifiedreferee.WethinkthemanuscripthasmeritbutrequiresrevisionbeforewecanacceptitforpublicationintheJournal.Carefulconsiderationmustbegiventothepointsraisedinthereviewercomments,whichareenclosedbelow.

　　Ifyouchoosetosubmitarevisionofyourmanuscript,pleaseincorporateresponsestothereviewercommentsintotherevisedpaper.Acompleterebuttalwithnomanuscriptalterationsisusuallyconsideredinadequateandmayresultinlengthyre-reviewprocedures.

　　Aletterdetailingyourrevisionspoint-by-pointmustaccompanytheresubmission.

　　YouwillberequestedtouploadthisResponsetoReviewersasaseparatefileintheAttachFilesarea.

　　Weaskthatyouresubmityourmanuscriptwithin45days.Afterthistime,yourfilewillbeplacedoninactivestatusandafurthersubmissionwillbeconsideredanewmanuscript.

　　Tosubmitarevision,gotoandloginasanAuthor.YouwillseeamenuitemcalledSubmissionNeedingRevision.Youwillfindyoursubmissionrecordthere.

　　Yourssincerely,

　　JosephJ.Bahl,PhD

　　Editor

　　LifeSciences

　　FormatSuggestion:

PleaseaccesstheGuidetoAuthorsatourwebsitetochecktheformatofyourarticle.PayparticularattentiontoourReferencesstyle.

　　Reviewers'comments:

　　Reviewer#1:

　　XXXXX（略）

　　Reviewer#2:

　　XXXXX（略）

　　Editorsnoteandsuggestions:

（注：

编辑的建议）

　　Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontemporaryEnglish>>>

　　PharmacokineticandpharmacodynamicstudiesoftheantiviraleffectsofAagainstvirusB.

　　Abstract:

Re-writetheabstracttoreadmoresmoothly.

　　A,analkaloidisolatedfromC（注：

一种中草药）,wastestedforantiviralactivityagainstvirusB.BothinvitroandinvivoassaysalongwithserumpharmacologicalexperimentsshowedAtohavepotentantiviralactivity.ThepharmacokineticprofileofAinSprague/DawleyratplasmaafteroraladministrationwasmeasuredbyHPLC.Bloodsamplestakenatselectedtimepointswereanalyzedtostudypotentialchangesinantiviralpharmacodynamicsasmeasuredbyinfectivityofviruses.FromthesimilarityoftheserumconcentrationprofilesandantiviralactivityprofilesitisconcludedthatAitself,ratherthanametabolite,exertedtheeffectagainsttheviruspriortobioinactivation.TheneedforeffectiveclinicalagentsagainstvirusBandtheseresultssuggestthepossibilityofbenefitfromfurtherexperimentswithA.

　　Theauthorsshouldchecktobesurethatthetermsbloodsamples,plasmaandserumarealwaysusedappropriatelythroughouttheabstractandtext.

　　Introduction:

somesentencescanbemadelesspassive.example1stparagraph>>>>Aappearstobethemostimportantalkaloidisolatedfromtheplant,itsstructuralformulaisshowninFig1....Whileitproducedageneralinhibitionofantibodyproductionlymphocyteproliferationwasstimulated（XiaandWang,1997）.ThesepharmacologicalpropertiessuggestapotentialuseinthetreatmentofviralmyocarditisagainstvirusBthatcouldbestudiedinexperimentsincellcultureandanimals.

　　>>>Theauthorsshouldchecktheentiremanuscriptforspellingerrors（examplegiven:

inyourtextalkaloidisincorrectlyspelledalkaloid）

　　>>>Theauthorsshouldreadtheguidelinestotheauthorsandnotincludethefirstnameoftheauthorsbeingcitedinthetext.Inthereferencesectionthefirstnameshouldbeabbreviatedasshownintheguidelinetoauthors（thustheearliertextreferenceshouldbe（Liuetal.,XX）andtheremainingoneshouldbe（Chenetal.,XX）

　　>>>>>Theauthorsinsteadofdirectlyansweringthefirstcomplexquestionofreviewer#1mayincludethethreequestionsasfutureresearchaiminthediscussionsection.

　　>>>>>>Ratherthanredrawingfiguretheauthorsmaychoosetoamendthe

　　wordingofthestatisticalanalysissectiontostatethattheresultoftablesaremeans+-SEMandforfiguresare+-SD.

　　>>>>>reviewer#1commentnumber8andreviewer#2comment3mightbesatisfiedbyinclusionofarepresentativephotoofcellsandheartshowingCPE.Remembermostreadersofthejournalhaveneverseenwhatyouaretryingtodescribe.

　　BecauseIthinkthatyoucandealwithallofthepointsraisedIamhopingtoseearevisedmanuscriptthatyouhavecarefullycheckedforerrors.Ifyouhavequestionsordonotknowhowtorespondtoanyofthepointsraisedpleasecontactmeatbahl@JosephBahl,PhDEditor2LifeSciences

　　作者回复信原稿：

　　DearDr.Bahl,

　　I’m（注：

正式信函不要简写）veryappreciate（注：

不适合作为给编辑回信的开始，同时有语法错误）foryourcommentsandsuggestions.

　　I（注：

实际上是学生做的）haveconductedinvivoantivirusexperimentsagain（注：

要表明是应审稿人或编辑建议而作）.Miceweresacrificedon15daysand30daysafterinfection.Deathrate,heartweighttobodyweightratio（HW/BW）,virustitersandpathologicslices（注：

用词错误）werecalculated（注：

用词不当）.ProductionofmRNAofIL-10,IFN-γandTNF-αwere（注：

语法错误）measuredbyRT-PCR.

　　Ihaverevisedthismanuscriptandespeciallypaidmuchattentiontoyourcommentsandsuggestions.Iwouldliketore-submitittoLIFESCIENCE.Titleofmanuscripthasbeenchangedto“TheantiviruseffectsofAagainstvirusBanditspharmacokineticbehaviourinSDratsserum”tomakeitmoreclearandsmooth.

　　AnswerstoReviewers’questionswereasfollows:

（注：

可附在给编辑的回复信后）

　　Reviewer#1:

　　XXXXX

　　Reviewer#2:

　　XXXXX

　　Editorsnoteandsuggestions:

　　Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontemporaryEnglish

　　Answer:

Ihaverewritethetitleto“TheantiviruseffectsofAagainstvirusBanditspharmacokineticbehaviourinSDratsserum”tomakeitmoreclearandsmooth（注：

多处语法错误）.

　　Abstract:

Re-writetheabstracttoreadmoresmoothly.

　　Answer:

Ihaverevisetheabstractcarefullytomakeitmoresmoothandinformative（注：

语法错误）.

　　Theauthorsshouldchecktobesurethatthetermsbloodsamples,plasmaandserumarealwaysusedappropriatelythroughouttheabstractandtext.

　　Answer:

Ihavepaidattentiontothisquestionanditisclearer（注：

不具体）.Introduction:

　　somesentencescanbemadelesspassive.

　　Answer:

IhaverevisethewholepapertomakesentenceslesspassiveandobtainedhelpofmycolleagueproficientinEnglish（注：

语法错误，句子不通顺）.

　　Theauthorsshouldchecktheentiremanuscriptforspellingerrors

　　Answer:

I’mverysorrytogiveyousomuchtroubleforthosespellingerrors（注：

不必道歉，按建议修改即可）.Ihavecarefullycorrectedthem.

　　Theauthorsshouldreadtheguidelinestotheauthorsandnotincludethefirstnameoftheauthorsbeingcitedinthetext.Inthereferencesectionthefirstnameshouldbeabbreviatedasshownintheguidelinetoauthors（thustheearliertextreferenceshouldbe（Liuetal.,XX）andtheremainingoneshouldbe（Chenetal.,XX）

　　Answer:

Ichangedthestyleofreferences.

　　Ratherthanredrawingfiguretheauthorsmaychoosetoamendthewordingofthestatisticalanalysissectiontostatethattheresultoftablesaremeans+-SEMandforfiguresare+-SD.

　　Answer:

（注：

作者请编辑公司帮回答）

　　reviewer#1commentnumber8andreviewer#2comment3mightbesatisfiedbyinclusionofarepresentativephotoofcellsandheartshowingCPE.Remember:

mostreadersofthejournalhaveneverseenwhatyouaretryingtodescribe.

　　Answer:

Thankyouforyoursuggestions.Ihavesupplementedpicturesofcardiacpathologicslicesinthepaper（Fig2）.

　　Ihavetoapologizeforgivingyousomuchtroublebecauseofthosemisspellingandconfusingstatements（注：

一般不是延误或人为失误，不必轻易道歉，按建议修改即可）.Yourcommentsandsuggestionsreallyhelpedmealot.Ihaveputgreateffortstothisreview.Iwishitcanbesatisfactory.

　　Ifthere’s（注：

正式信函不要简写）anyinformationIcanprovide,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.

　　Thankyouagainforyourtimeandpatience.Lookforwardtohear（注：

语法错

　　误）fromyou.

　　YoursSincerely

　　XxxxXxxx（通讯作者名）

　　建议修改稿：

　　DearDr.Bahl,

　　Thanksyouverymuchforyourcommentsandsuggestions.

　　Assuggested,wehaveconductedinvivoantivirusexperiments.Miceweresacrificedon15daysand30daysafterinfectionwithvirusB.Mortality,heartweighttobodyweightratio（HW/BW）,virustitersandpathologicscoresweredetermined.Inaddition,mRNAexpressionofIL-10,IFN-γandTNF-αweremeasuredbyRT-PCR.

　　Wehaverevisedthemanuscript,accordingtothecommentsandsuggestionsofreviewersandeditor,andresponded,pointbypointto,thecommentsaslistedbelow.Sincethepaperhasbeenrevisedsignificantlythroughoutthetext,wefeelitisbetternottohighlighttheamendmentsintherevisedmanuscript（正常情况最好表明修改处）.

　　TherevisedmanuscripthasbeeneditedandproofreadbyamedicaleditingcompanyinHongKong.

　　Iwouldliketore-submitthisrevisedmanuscripttoLifeSciences,andhopeitisacceptableforpublicationinthejournal.

　　Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

　　Withkindestregards,

　　YoursSincerely

　　XxxxXxxx（通讯作者名）

　　RepliestoReviewersandEditor

　　Firstofall,wethankbothreviewersandeditorfortheirpositiveandconstructivecommentsandsuggestions.

　　RepliestoReviewer#1:

　　Xxxxx（略）

　　RepliestoReviewer#2:

　　Xxxxx（略）

　　RepliestotheEditorsnoteandsuggestions:

　　Title:

Re-writethetitletoreadmoresmoothlyincontmeporaryEnglish

　　Answer:

Ihaverewritethetitleto“TheantiviruseffectsofSophoridineagainstCoxsackievirusB3anditspharmacokineticsinrats”tomakeitmoreclearandreadmor