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英语四级作文模版
对比选择型:
观点对比选择/利弊说明
文章逻辑结构:
ParagraphI:
(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;
(2)简明扼要的提出人们的两种不同看法;
ParagraphII:
(1)提出一种观点或优点;
(2)本段的支持性分论点;
ParagraphIII:
(1)承上启下的过渡句;
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;(3)本段的支持性分论点;
(合)ParagraphIV:
(1)平衡两种看法;
(2)给出自己的观点。
例1、ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?
Outline:
1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
例2(变体形式一)Wheretolive-inthecityorinthecountryside
(1)Whenaskedwhetherlivinginthecityisbetterthanlivinginthecountryside,peoplemaygivedifferentanswers.(提出比较事物)
(2)Somepeopleappreciatetheconveniencesofcitylife.(概括城市生活的优点)(3)Foronething,livinginthecity,peoplecanenjoygoodeducation,variouskindsofentertainmentandfirst-ratehealthservices.(优点一)Foranotherthing,citypeoplehavemoreopportunitiestogetgoodeducationandwell-paidjobs.(优点二)
(5)Butthecountrysidehasitsownattractions.(概括乡村生活的优点)(6)Tobeginwith,itofferspeopleaquieterandcleanerlifebecauseofitsclosenesstonatureandgreatdistancestonoisycities.(优点一)(7)Furthermore,itisobviousthattheexpensesofcountrymenaremuchlessthanthoseofcitydwellers.(优点二)
(8)Howevereachhasitsowndisadvantages.(二者均有弊端)(9)Peoplelivinginthecityarealwaysannoyedbycityproblemssuchascrowdedness,trafficjams,increasinglypollutedenvironment,crimesandcompetitivepressure.(城市生活的弊端)(10)Andpeopleinthecountrysidealwayscomplainthemonotonousnessoflifebecauseofthescarcityofentertainments.(乡村生活的弊端)
(11)Itiseasytoseethatboththecityandthecountrysidehavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages,(结论)(12)AsfarasIamconcerned,IprefertoliveinthecityforIliketoenjoycolorfulmodernlifeandtofeelthemodernatmosphere.(作者的选择)
Outline:
1.Conveniencesofthecity
2.Attractionofthecountryside
3.Disadvantagesofboth
4.Mypreference
模板
第一段:
描写现状,提出要比较的事物及一种事物A的优点
(1)WhenaskedthequestionwhetherAisbetterthanB,(被比较的事物)peoplemaygivedifferentanswers.
(2)Somepeopleappreciatethe_ofA.(A的优点)(3)Foronething,it_.(细节,说明A的优点)(4)Foranotherthing,it_.(细节,说明A的优点)
第二段:
阐述另一事物B的优点
(5)ButBisalsoattractive/important/good.(B的优点)(6)Tobeginwith,itoffers_.(细节,说明B的优点)(7)Furthermore,it_.(细节,说明B的优点)
第三段:
提出双方的缺点(这部分可取舍)
(8)However,eachhasitsowndisadvantages.(A,B均有缺点)(9)Ahassomeproblemssuchas_and_.(A的缺点)(10)Balsohassomeproblemssuchas_and_(B的缺点)
第四段:
作者的选择(非常重要)
(11)ItiseasytoseethatbothAandBhavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.(12)AsfarasIamconcerned,IwouldpreferAforIenjoythe_and_ofA.(作者的选择)
例3(变体形式二)
1人们围绕广告展开了激烈的争论,然而,我认为广告发展对青少年有不良影响
2不良影响的体现
3解决这一问题
Althoughadvertisinghasexistedforthousandsofyearsandiscertainlynotarecentinvention,itisonlyinourmodernsocietythatthegreatinfluenceandimportanceofwidespreadadvertisingisbroughtintofullplay.However,inmyopinion,manyadvertisementsareharmfultoyoungpeople’smentaldevelopmentand,therefore,shouldbebannedinthatmassmedia.
Asmanysocialissuecriticshavepointedout,thecurrenttrendinadvertisingexertsacorruptinginfluenceonyoungpeople’smindsbecausetherearealwaysalotofunwholesomeandindecentcontentsinmodernadvertisements.Forexample,productssuchaswines,lingerie,andcosmeticstendtousethefemalebodyandamorousscenesasthemainattractionoftheiradvertisements.Whatisworse,asubcultureofsexualsuggestivenessandpermissivenessseemstopermeatetheentireadvertisingindustry.Youngpeople,especiallythoseadolescents,areoftenluredawayfromtheirstudiesandindulgethemselvesineroticfantasies.
Insummary,theprevalenceofadvertisinginourmodernsocietyanditsinimicaleffectsontheyouthoftodaymustbecurbed,otherwisepublicmoralityandtraditionalculturesandvaluesandeventhefutureoftheworldwillbecaughtinaprecarioussituation.
问题解决型/社会热点话题(问题解决+社会热点两类)
题型特点:
1)应该为三点提纲,但是通常以两点提纲出现的题目居多,所涉及主题为当时社会热点;
2)如果是两点提纲,则补充成三点提纲写作。
3)通常模式为:
现象概述--细节(原因、危害、方式等)--自我评论(解决办法)
☆ParagraphI:
Withthedevelopment/improvementof(铺垫),(某一问题).Itisnecessarythat(关注解决现象引出的问题很必要).
ParagraphII:
Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisargument(总述原因).Ontheonehand,(原因一).Ontheotherhand,(原因二).Besides,(原因三)
ParagraphIII:
Therefore,howto(承上启下句,要解决的问题)isworthpayingattentionto.Firstly,(办法一).Secondly,(办法二).Thirdly,(办法三).Inotherwords,(阐明解决办法三).Onlybydoingso,(用倒装句式总结解决方法)
ParagraphIV:
Infact,thewaysto(解决问题的办法多种多样)arecountless.It’stimethat(强调解决问题时不可待).
例1.10年06月作文题目DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling
作文:
1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2.出现这种情况的原因
3.这种现象导致的结果
Withthedevelopment/improvementofmodernscienceandtechnology,Englishisbecomingincreasinglyimportant,however,manypeoplefailtohighlighttheimportanceofEnglishspelling./Thepastdecadeshavewitnessedanever-increasingphenomenonthat…Itisnecessarythatdueattentionbegiventospelling.(34words)
Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisargument.Ontheonehand,thewideuseofnetworklanguagewithshort-formedwordsandno-standardspellingsshouldberesponsible.Ontheotherhand,thetimeandeffortdevotedtodifferentaspectsofEnglishlearninghavealottodowithit.Besides,itisthestudentsthemselvesthatignoretheimportanceofcorrectspelling.(63)
Therefore,howtoreversethetrendisworthpayingattentionto.Firstly,teachersneedtoemphasizespellinginclass.Secondly,itishightimethatstudentsrecognizedthesignificanceofspellingandtriedtoavoidspellingmistakes.Onlybydoingso,correctspellingwillbeguaranteedinthenearfuture.(39words)(共136words)
例2(变体一)1吸烟带来很大危害2人们无法戒烟的原因3我认为……
(二)模板
第一段:
描述问题段
主题句+扩展句一(具体表现一)+扩展句二(具体表现二)
第二段:
说明原因/危害段
主题句+扩展句一(原因一)+扩展句二(原因二)+结尾句
第三段:
说明方法段
主题句+扩展句一(方法一)+扩展句二(方法二)+扩展句三(方法三)+结尾句
Itisalmostknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.Smokingcanleadtoheartdisease,cancerandotherproblems.TheWHOsaysdiseasescausedbysmokingkillatleasttwomillionandfivehundredthousandpersonseachyear.
However,stillmanypeoplefinditdifficulttostopsmoking,whichisduetothefollowingreasons.Foronething,itisbecausetheeffectofnicotinemakesithardforsmokerstoquitit.Foranother,manyofthemhavenodeterminationtogiveupthebadhabit.Therefore,itishightimethatmoreattentionwaspaidtohowtogiveupsmokingsuccessfully.
Someeffectivemeasureshavebeentakentohelppeoplekeepawayfromtheharmofsmoking.Firstly,nowadays,smokingisforbiddeninpublicplacesandinadvertisementsofanykind.Inaddition,theworld“NoTobaccoDay”isobservedeveryyearasthebiggestcampaigntoraisepeople’sawareness.Ifwefollowthemeasuresmentionedabove,theimpactfromsmokingcouldbeminimizedgreatly.
例3、ReduceWasteonCampus
Outline:
1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重2.浪费的危害3.杜绝浪费,从我做起
(问题解决)
Asisknowntoall,wasteoncampushasbecomeamoreandmoreseriousproblem.Wecaneasilyseemanystudentsdumpalotoffoodinthegarbagecan.Somestudentsspendalargesumofmoneybuyingfashionableclothesandsoon.
Thenegativeeffectsofwastecanbeshowninthefollowingaspects.Inthefirstplace,itmakessomestudentsdependentontheirparentsformoney,whichisharmfultotheirdevelopment.Inthesecondplace,itisnoteasyforourparentstoarrangeforourschooling.Lastbutnottheleastimportant,thereisnodenyingthefactthatourcountryisstillpoor.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Ishouldsetagoodexampletoreducewasteoncampus.Firstofall,Iwillrefrainfromwastinganything,fromfoodtostationery.Whatismore,I’mdeterminedtocallonmoreschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.Onlythroughthesemeasurescanwehopetoreducewasteoncampus.
观点论证型
三段:
1.提出观点段2论证观点段3总结观点段
结构模板
(1)Itiswellknownthat论点。
(2)Thetruthofitisself-evident.(3)Noonecandenythat正确性的表现。
(4)Therefore,without…,itwouldbeimpossible…总结论点
(5)Manyremarkablefactorsaccountforthisargument.(6)Tobeginwith,论据一。
(7)Inaddition,论据二.(8)Lastbutnottheleast,论据三。
(9)Allmentionedabovetellusthat重申观点。
(10)Therefore,thereisnodenyingthat正确态度或做法。
(11)Insummary,总结全文
例一题目WorkIsaNecessity
1工作的必要性2分析原因3我的看法
Itiswellknownthatworkisbecomingmoreandmoreindispensabletoman’sexistence.Thetruthofitisself-evident.Noonecandenythatworkisameansofmakingaliving.Therefore,withoutwork,itwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletolive.
Manyremarkablefactorsaccountforthisargument.Tobeginwith,factsprovethatmoreoneuseshisbrain,themoreactiveandefficientheisinthinking.Inaddition,formostpeople,workisthesourceofhappinessandcreativity.Lastbutnottheleast,workoffersambitiouspeoplechancestorealizetheirdreams.
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