新东方必背作文.docx

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新东方必背作文

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DIRECTIONS:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.

B.YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyontheANSWERSHEETII.

C.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

1.effectofthecountry’sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

各档次分数段例文

（15——13分）

Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.

Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?

Ithinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewenvironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.

Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovethenatureandprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.

[评语]内容符合要求，包括了图中说明“effect”的有关信息。

语言流畅，层次分明，句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确，文章长度符合要求。

但还有少数错误出现。

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2000

Directions:

Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessayto

A.Describethepictures.

B.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures,and

C.Suggestcounter-measures.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEETII.

ABriefHistoryofWorldCommercialFishing

各档次分数段例文

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Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.

Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtoover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviouslydecreased.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,wewon’tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.

Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.Also,Ibelievethatwehumanbeingscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.

[给分]14分

[评语]内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。

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Whenweusetheword“love”,wedonotsimplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,whichisaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelowillustratestherealmeaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.

Asanexampleofthepoweroflove,weshouldrememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalitiesrespondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowbyinternationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonothesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan——beitmoneyorgoods——tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.

Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelppeoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomaketheworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,thedarkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightlythelampofloveshines.（232）

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ThepicturevividlydepictsalovelyAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostumewithasweetsmileonherface.Shewearsribbons,necklacesandotheraccessoriesthatarecharacteristicoftheclothesofacertainChineseminoritygroup.Undoubtedly,thecostumehasaddedorientalcharmtoherbeautifullook/appearance/features.

Whatthepictureconveysgoesfarbeyondonlyanewfashiontrend.Instead,itcarriesculturalmeanings.ThefactthatpeoplefromdifferentcountriesareattractedtomysteriousChinesecultureindicatesthattosomeextentaculturecanbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandsharedinternationally.Inotherwords,anation’suniqueculturecanbecomeinternationalthroughworldwideeconomicandculturalexchanges.Sincethetrendofglobalizationbecomeirresistible,culturalcommunicationcaneffectivelyimprovemutualunderstandingandfriendship.

Itismyviewthatnationalcultureaspricelessspiritualtreasureshouldbepreservedandcherished.Meanwhile,therearegoodreasonstoadvocateinternationalcultureforthoseideasfromtheothercultures,controversialorevenabsurdatfirstsight,canprovideadifferentperspectiveforustoobservetheworldinthelongrun.Nevertheless,whenweareconfrontedwithadifferentculture,weshouldbesensibleenoughtoabsorbitsessenceandtoresistitsdarkside.Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous.（220）

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Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictsthedestinyofaflowerindifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflowerisplacedinacomfortablegreenhousethatsheltersitfromthethreateninglighteningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureandfertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflowersoonfadesandwithers,withthepetalscastaboutonthegrounds.

Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobespecific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouseepitomizesparents’dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcanshieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoungpeoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromtherealworld,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceofdifficulties.

Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyusethemtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheotherhand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmorefreedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.（272）

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Itisvividlydepictedinthecartoonthataboyisrunningalongtheracetrackwithpainstakingefforts,sweatpouringdownhisface.Afteralongjourney,heismakingthefinalspurttowardthefinishingline,withstrongdeterminationtobecomethechampion.

Undoubtedlythecartoonconveysthemeaningthatlifeisliketheprocessofrunninginwhichoneshouldmakeconstanteffortsandneverstopmakingprogress.Owingtothequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,stimulatingeveryonetopursueonegoalafteranother.Onceapersonstopsmakingprogress,hecanhardlymaintainhispastgloryandsurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.Generallyspeaking,neitheracountrynorapersoncanremainstagnant.

Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof“ShenzhouVSpacecraft”whichsetschinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepassthistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“destinationisanotherstartingpoint.”（216）

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Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoon,fourchildrenareplayinga“footballmatch”oftakingcareoftheiragedfather.Eachofthemstandsinadifferentcornerofafootballfield.Theeldestsonkickedoutthefatherwiththeotherthreechildrenguardingtheirgoals.

Thepurposeofthedrawingistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothemistreatmentofseniorcitizens.Firstandforemost,somepeopleshirktheirdutyoffinanciallysupportingtheiroldandhelplessparentsduetotheirowninterests.Furthermore,someelderlypeopleareoftenill-treatedbytheirownchildrenandcannotleadanormallife.Lastbutnotleast,whilesomeyoungpeopleenjoyacomfortablelife,theirparentsareneglectedandreducedtoutterpoverty.

Itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoun