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英语基础作文
英语作文笔记
一、考试形式
1.小作文(应用文写作)
书信写作、告示写作
100字左右,用时20分钟。
2.图画作文(英语一)、图表作文(英语二)
实际要求160-200字;但是考场作文最好220字左右,时间所用时约35-40分钟。
3处修改扣1分,不许使用涂改液,胶带等。
作文一般分3段。
有话可说,避免跑题。
二、模板
1.Thefortitudeinthefaceoftheadversityandperseveranceonyourdreamsarethegoldenrulestothesuccess.
2.NelsonMandela,agiantandagreathero,tellswithhislifestorythat…
3.NelsonMandela,agiantandagreathero,tellswithhislifestorythatthefortitudeinthefaceoftheadversityandperseveranceonyourdreamsarethegoldenrulestothesuccess.
三、语言
(一)谚语和名人名言
Itpaystobehonest.
背诵5个老外的名字。
(二)修辞手法
比喻:
…as…adj…as+n
(三)句式复杂多变
复杂:
1.可以在名词前或动词前加形容词或副词;
2.可以在名词后加同位语;
3.可以加介词短语作状语;
4.可以加非限定性定语从句修饰句子;
5.可以用现在分词短语、过去分词短语、独立主格结构将多个句子写成一个句子;
一般在考研作文中,一般使用现在完成时和一般现在时。
(1)Thetopicofsmogorhazehasconstantlycapturedwidemediaattention.
(2)Thetopicofhazeorsmogoccupiesthenewspaperheadlines.
(3)Thetopicofsmogorhazesparksheateddiscussionontheweb.
(4)Thetopicofsmogorhazewreakshorroramongpeople.
合:
Thesedays,thetopicofsmogorhazehasconstantlycapturedwidemediaattention,occupyingthenewspaperheadlines,sparkingheateddiscussiononthewebandwreakinghorroramongpeople.
多变:
1.长短结合;
2.倒装句;
(1)部分倒装
定义:
Be,助动词,情态动词被置于名词前;
Only,否定状语被置于句首会引起部分倒装。
(2)完全倒装
定义:
主系表—>表系主
Herecomesabus.
Inthesunshinestandsayoungtree.
系动词:
come,go,lie,stand,run,walk,fly,float,crouch
Ontheplaygroundwalksateenager.
3.虚拟语气;
用于表达观点
(1)Itishightimethat…动词(过去时)…
●Thecurrentstateofaffairsissosorry.
●Itishightimethatwetooksomeinitiativestosolvetheproblem.
合:
Withthecurrentstateofaffairsbeingsosorry,itishightimethatwetooksomeinitiativestosolvetheproblem.
(2)Itis必须that…(should)+动词原形…
Itisimperativethatcorrespondinglawsandregulationsbeintroducedandenforcedtocurbandharnesstheurgentsituation/problem.
(3)虚拟条件句省略IF,引起had/were提前
Iftherewerenoreformandopening-uppolicy,wewoundnevertasteKFCorMcDonald’s.
省略句:
Weretherenoreformandopening-uppolicy,wewoundnevertasteKFCorMcDonald’s.
Weretherenosomething,somebodywouldneverdosomething.
Weretherenoculturalcommunication,wewouldnevertastethewonderofwesterncultures.
Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,ourfuturegenerationswouldnotbothertothinkofexcusesforus.
4.并列-省略句;
5.一些短语;Otherthan;infavorof
Iamthebestteacher.
Noone,otherthanI,isthebesttheteacher.
TheproblemofenvironmentisthemostseriousinChina.
InnocountryotherthanChina,ithasbeensaidthat(accordingtoasurvey),istheproblemofenvironmentmoreserious.
划线处可替换。
(四)用词多样性
1.积累一些替换词;
2.学会使用上下义词增加语言多样性;
Themobilephone…
Thephone…
Theinvention…
Thistinymachine…
Themagicdevice…
MyHTC…
3.用andthelike表达陌生词汇;
4.用拼音+同位语(上下义词)表达陌生词汇;
Inthemiddleofthepicturestandsa“huoguo”,atraditionalChinesecookingtool.
5.可用代词:
one/counterpart
四、考研写作分段讲解
第一段:
描述图画;
第二段:
阐述寓意;
第三段:
给出评论/例子;
(一)第一段的写法
1.第一句:
图画描述句;
Asisshownabove,
Step1:
用完全倒装描述中心对象所在的位置。
位置(介词短语)+系动词+中心对象
Notes1:
可以多个位置并列;
Notes2:
可以在系动词前加副词;
Notes3:
可以在中心词前加形容词;
Notes4:
中心对象;
年轻人:
theyoungster;theteenager;theindividual(人、物)
Notes5:
万能位置;
Inthemiddleofthepicture,
Inthesunshine,
Inthedarkness,
Asisshownabove,inthesunshinehappilystandsalovelygirl.
Step2:
用现在分词短语/过去分词短语/定语从句进一步描述中心对象的动作与状态;
Note:
可以多个动作并列;
Step3:
可以用独立主格结构对周围事物或中心对象的某一部分进行描述;
对于配图文字的处理:
A:
可以不描述;
B:
如果要描述,可以:
a:
用言语的形式,独立成句
JustasanoldChinese/Englishproverbsays,(可以改变谚语)
b:
withalinegoinglikethis:
withthecaptionreadingthat:
Asisshownabove,onthethickpileofpapers,proudlystandsanoldprofessor,seemingsatisfiedwithhissuccessinacademicresearch,neglectingthedemandofstudents.
Asisshownabove,intheriverdangerouslyfloatsapaperboat,symbolizingthemoraltraining,containingsomebreadandfruit,whichissymbolicoffoodsafety.
Asisshownabove,inthemiddleofthepictureandonthecomputerscreenstandsaso-calledfamousandinfluentialstar,hawkingamedicine,boastingitsmagicfunctionandexaggeratingthatitcancurealldiseases,withacaptionreadingthat:
celebrityendorsement.
Asisshownabove,inthemiddleofthepicturewalksaman,failingtodetectwaterforseveraltimesduetolackofadequateeffortstodigadeepenoughwell.
Asisshownabove,inthemiddleofthepicturestandsacollegestudent,carryingadesk,holdingapen,whichsymbolizesthatheisoccupyingaseatinthereadingroomforhimself.
2.第二句:
图画影响句;
Therehasbeenaheateddiscussioninthenewspaperaboutthispicturerecently.
Thetopicillustratedinthepicturewillmakegoodcopy(成为好的新闻素材)inthenewspaper.
IfpostedontheWeibo,theinfluentialsocialmediainourcountry,thispicturewillarousemuchconcernandsetinmotionadiscussion.
Reportedly,thegreatconcernamongthepublichasbeenarousedbythispicture.
ThispicturehasstimulatedaheateddiscussionontheWechat,themostinfluentialsocialnetwork,thesedays.
3.第三句:
图画意义句;
Simpleasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningbehinditisasdeepasocean.
P53
Thispicturecarriesaprofoundmessagethatdemandsourdevotedattentionandinstantaction.
(二)第二段的写法(展开)
<1>展开段落的方法:
1.科学论据法
根据一项调查表明...
Accordingtoasurvey
Accordingtooneofthelatestsurveysconductedbyacertaininternationalorganization,…
Accordingtothelatestsurvey,moneyspentonthepetsinthecityofBeijingisasmuchas1.73billiondollars,whichcanfeedalltheJapaneseintheworldforawholeyear.
Moneyspentonsomethingisasmuchas…
Moneyspentonsomethinghasreachedasmuchas…
Moneyearned/collected/raisedisasmuchas…
2.举例法(考场下准备好例子)
举例句型+万能例子
●…,forexample,…
●Oursocietyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesconcerning+(主题),withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.(=themostconvincing)
●Amongallthetouchingfactsrelatingto+(主题)thatIhaveheard,noticedandexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis+人名
●Somebody(+人物信息)tellswithhislifestorythat(观点),
●Somebody/something(+人物信息)servesasashiningandfittingexample,
Havingbeenbrutallyimprisonedfor27yearsforhisunwaveringbeliefinhumanequality,NelsonMandela,agiantandagreathero,oneofthemostinspiringexamplesofstrongwill,whofinallytransformshismothernationintoanopensociety,tellswithhislifestorythatthefortitudeinthefaceofadversityandtheperseveranceonyourdream,however,wheneverandwhereverarethegoldenrulestothesuccess.
Google,thestarinternetcompanyattainingastringofprominentfeatswithsomeunrivalledproducts,servesasashiningandfittingexample.Itistheadventurespiritthathelpsthisfirmcreateenormousvaluetobothitsshareholdersandthegeneralpublic.Putittheotherwayaround,itisimpossiblethataGooglewithoutthecreativespiritcaneverachievethesephenomenaldeeds.
3.虚拟语气法
●Weretherenosomething,somebodywouldnotdosomething.(正例)
●Werethistrendtocontinueasitis,wewouldpayhighprice/ourfuturegenerationswouldnotbothertothinkofexcusesforus.(反例)
2001年第二段的写作:
关于“爱心是一盏灯”的例子
Oursocietyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesconcerninglove,withtheHopeProjectbeingtheforemost.InthewestofChinaexistsomefamilies,beingsopoorthathardlycantheysupporttheirchildren’seducation.Patheticastheyare,peoplefromallwalksoflifeprovidethemwithnotonlyfinancialaids,materialsupporthutalsomentalcomfort,whichiswellknownastheHopeProject.Moneyraisedbytheproject,accordingtothelatestsurvey,hasreachedasmuchas16.8billion,which…Weretherenosuchprecioushelp,thosechildrenwouldnevertastetheknowledgeorreceiveeducationandbevulnerabletocontrolandexploitationduetolackofabilitytounderstandothers’ideasandtodefendtheirownopinions.
<2>论点+论据
A.论点的写法(结论的写法)
主+系+表
1.Education
Thestakesinvolvingeducationhaveneverbeenhigherinanyeraofournationthannow.
Neverinanyeraofournation,accordingtoasurvey(观点主体),havethestakesinvolvingeducationbeenhigherthannow.划线处可替换。
观点主体:
Anyperceptiveobserverwouldnothesitatetobeoftheideathat…
nothinkingmanwouldrefusetoaccepttheideathat,
2.Honesty
Honestyisthesteelthatforgesthesupportingstructureofthesociety,andthesocietycannotgrowsteady,ifthisinvaluableassetiseverneglectedinanypossiblemanner.
3.Success
Ayoungsterwhoaspirestoembracethegloriousfuturemustcommitthetimeandenergywithoutanyhesitation.
AspiretoinspireuntilIexpire.(生命不息,奋斗不止)
Hemustbeapersonwhoispositiveandbraveenoughtomakeshorttermsacrificeforlongtermsuccess.
Thefuturehasarrived.Itcommencesnow.(未来她已经到来,她始于足下)
(三)第三段的写法(评论)
<1>正面话题
第一句:
取其精华
Itisimperativethattheessencebeabsorbedanddrawbacksbeneglectedduringthisprocess,especiallyinthetimesofglobalization.
第二句:
提升意识
Thegeneralpublicaresupposedtoenhanceandpromotetheirawarenessthat+主题观点
第三句:
多角度考虑
Inviewoftheimportanceandcomplexityofsuchaphenomenon,wemusttreatitsocially,economicallyandculturally.
第四句:
展望未来
Onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthyatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.
<2>负面话题
第一句:
情况危急
Withthecurrentstateofaffairsbeingsosorry,itishightimethatwetookeffectiveinitiativestoputthesituationonhold.
第二句:
建议
●制定法律
Itisimperativethatcorrespondinglawsandregulationsbeintroducedandenforcedtocurbandharnesstheurgentsituation/problem.
●专家意见
Researcher,scholarsandexpertsintherelatingareasareexp