bec高级写作指导.docx
《bec高级写作指导.docx》由会员分享,可在线阅读,更多相关《bec高级写作指导.docx(19页珍藏版)》请在冰豆网上搜索。
![bec高级写作指导.docx](https://file1.bdocx.com/fileroot1/2023-5/23/bfd6c118-0837-4867-b9bd-5b81294ae499/bfd6c118-0837-4867-b9bd-5b81294ae4991.gif)
bec高级写作指导
bec高级写作指导
篇一:
BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文
图表作文写作要领
(1)注意总-分结构的使用。
中心句概括总趋势。
总增长:
典型数据/区间:
therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneraltrend;
Withinthisgeneraltrend,therearesomefluctuations,for
example…
(2)注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。
(3)注意语言的多样化,多用同义词替代,避免重复用词。
(4)注意数据的内部逻辑关系,确定描写线索。
即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。
图表作文句型总结:
1.基本功:
叙述表格/图表
组成:
consistof..,bemadeupof..,becomposedof..,
比例:
accountfor%,represent%,make/takeup%..,或者直接说%of….
上升,增加,提高:
a.普通:
increase,grow,rise,expand
b.渐渐上升:
climb,edgeup,ascend,trendup.
c.猛增,激增:
jump,surge,soar,proliferate,leap,shotup
d.词组:
achieveanincreasein….by…to…
Continueitsupwardstrend;trendup
Ontherise,ontheincrease.
Onconsecutiverise:
保持连续增长
n.名词:
increase,rise,growth,expansion,
ascendance渐渐增加,
slightincrease,rise,growthin..
bump-up,proliferation,jump,leap,surge,boom
减少,下降,减缓
a.普通:
decrease,fall,drop,reduce,shrink,
b.逐渐变少:
slide,dwindle,decline,edgedown
c.骤减:
collapse,slump,plummet,plunge
d.经济衰退,停顿:
slump,collapse,stagnate,stagnant,stagnation,
sluggish,sluggishness,slack,
crisis,recession,slowdown,downturn,
e.词组:
falloff,dropoff,godown,continueitsdownwardtrend,trenddown,
onthedecline,onthedownturn.
保持平稳,不变:
Remainstable,/steady,/unchanged
Leveloffvi上升,或减退至平稳水平
Subsidevi减退至平稳水平standstilln/adj停滞不前
起伏波动:
Riseandfall,
fluctuateslightly/dramatically,
fluctuatebetween….and…,aminorfluctuation,
smallrisesandfalls/fluctuations.
形容趋势程度
a.剧烈,显著,明显
Dramatically,sharply,considerably,rapidly,suddenly,greatly,alarmingly,
significantly,enormously,steeply,massively,incredibly,hugely,amazingly,
substantially;atanalarmingrate;byawidemargin.
b.缓慢/逐渐
Gradually,steadily,slightly,gently,marginally,slowly,moderately,ina
moderateway,bytheleastamount.
表示倍数:
a.增几倍于:
double,triple,quadruple’kw?
drupl,
b.几倍的,几倍地:
fivefold,sixfold,sevenfold….
c.ad.几倍:
twice,three/four/fivetimes….
e.几分之几:
2/3:
two-thirds,etc.
比较数据as…as…
a.three/fourtimesasmany.做主语或定语成分
Eg.%morepeoplepreferredthedietcherryversionandnearlythree
timesasmanypreferredthedietstrawberryversion.
b.―A+be+XXtimes+as+adj+as+B‖。
eg.Thistreeisthreetimesastallasthatone.
Eg.Hisfatheristwiceasoldashe.
c.―A+be+XXtimes+计量形容词比较级+than+B‖
eg.TheYangtzeRiverisalmosttwicelongerthanthePearlRiver.
=TheYangtzeRiverisalmostthreetimesaslongasPearlRiver.
Eg.Thedictionaryisexactlyfivetimesmoreexpensivethanthatone.
d..―A+be+倍数+the+计量名词+of+B‖
eg.Thenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthesizeofthepreviousone.新扩建的广场是未扩建时的四倍大。
e.―The+计量名词+of+A+be+倍数+that+of+B‖
eg.Thesizeofthenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthatoftheprevious
one.
从不同方面分析数据;inviewoftheturnover….,Intermsofgrowth,…就营业额
方面来说。
。
。
,就增长方面来说;
2.描述时间点或时间段
(1)时期泛指:
overtheperiodXXXtoXXX,overtheyearsXXXtoXXX,fromXXtoxx;over/duringthepastXXyears;inthelastXXyears,overthelast15to20years.inthenextXXyears,duringaXX-year/month/weekperiod,throughout..,allthewaythrough,fortheyear..XXX.
时期特指:
duringthesameperiod,overtheperiodinquestion,over/duringtheperiodstudied,fortherestoftheperiodsstudied,inthetwosubsequentperiods,inthefollowingperiod,allthewaythrough,
连续下降/上升的某个时期:
itisthesecond/third/fourthconsecutivequarter/year/month/weekthatXXXhasfallen
时间点:
until,bytheyearXXX,since,fromtheyearXXX,uptonow,ata
givenmoment,overtheperiodendedonxx/endedinXX
年代:
duringthe1980s;duringthe70sand80s.,
3.开头:
thisgraph/reportdescribes/outlines/shows/compare…with…/suggests,
4.总趋势句型
Ifwelookatthegrowthin…,wecanseethereisasteadyincreaseinXXfrom..to…/ariseinXXofXXX…
fromthegraph,wecanseethereis…./ifwetakingtheXXfirst,wecanseethatthereis…
XXwasonconsecutivegrowthonthewholeovertheperiodinquestion
XXshowsarelativelysteady/upward/downwardtrendinthelastXXyears.
XXshowsatrajectoryofgrowth/fall….
xx,ontheotherhand,showsadifferenttrend.
XXXhasbeengrowingconsistentlywithXXinthepastXXyears.
XXXwitnessed/sawsomeriseandfall/fluctuationsovertheperiod…
duringthesameperiod,XXalsorose,butfluctuatedgreatly.
XXdidn‘tvarymuchandremainedjustover/belowxxOrbetween..and..
XXshowsthesameperformance/trendalthoughatlevel4bnhigherthanimports.
5.增长幅度、增长额
..,thereisariseinXXofXX/byxx%/from..to…
ThefigureshowsariseofXXwithinthewholeperiodandnofluctuationsare
toberemarked.
XXrosefrom…to…,sufferingminorfluctuationsallthewaythrough.
XXincreasedslightly/rosesteadily.etc,endingtheperiodaroundXXover
theirstartinglevel.
6.最大涨/跌幅,最高点,最低点
XXXwiththebiggestincrease/decreasecomingbetween…and…,
Itwentuptothepeakat….in…./
TheXXXpeakedat..in…./reached/hitapeakin…./peakingat…
TheXXrosetothehighest,climbedtoaseven-monthhigh,advancedtoarecord$1000on….,
theXXrose/surge/climbtoXXX,thehighestsince….
骤升shot-up,surge,rocket,upsurge,uplift,proliferationsoar,boom骤降:
slump,plunge,plummet,nose-divevi
5.起始点
startingoffat…./from,saleswillincreaseto..during…,andremainstableat
during…,onlytodecreaseto…during.
DuringXXX,itstartedaroundXXinthefirstquarter…
6.典型数据/区间
Profitswillshopupdramaticallyto2,000in2004,fromwhichitwillgoupsteadilyfromyeartoyear…
Itwillgodowntothelowestat…in…whereitwillbegintopickup/rebound/
From1985to1997,XXXwerebetweenXXandXXX.
After…theXXincreased/decreasedsignificantly.
thexxxroseupsteadilyuntil….
however,therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneral/withinthisgeneraltrend,forexample….
7.描写fluctuations
from/startingoffat…,XXXincreasedto..during..andremainstableat..during..,onlytodecreaseto..during…
XXXincreased/soaredfromxxtoXXXin…followedbyasharpdropto…in…
soaragain,fallbackto,dropbackto…andthenmaintainedthispositionthroughout….
itstartedaroundXXinxx,increasedslowlytoXXin..,andthenfelltoXXattheendoftheyear.
ItstayedstableataroundXXduringxxxandxxx,thendecreasedtoXXXin…,beforerecoveringat/toXXXattheendof…
8.对比,比例的描写
倍数关系描写(见1);
分数关系:
one/afifthof,8outof10,atafractionof…
组成:
consistof,bemadeupof…,becomposedof…
比例:
accountfor..,represent,takeup..,
对比:
comparedto,incomparisonwith…,relativeto…,theratiois….
Eg.Femaleexecutivesdominateintheagegroupbetween24and39,wheretheratiois42to10..Eg.Itdecreaseshalfingroup60to69where10womenholdtoppositionincomparisonto/with21men.
Eg.Thegraphsshowsthenumberofcarsper100peopleovertheperiod1980to2020relativetothegrowthoftheworld‘spopulation.
9.大小的比较
差:
spread,margin,split,difference,
差额为正/负:
xxxremainedpositive/negative
占多数,a.XXXdominateintheXXgroup/amongst….
b.Intheagerangeabove…,XXXarein/sliding/majority.
超过:
a.XXXexceeded/outstrippedXXXbutnotbythesamemargin,b.XXXexceededXXbyXXpercent,outnumberxxxbyXXX.
c.exceedXX-level.WiththeearningsexceedingXXX.
比例相等:
a.anequalnumberofboth…and…
b.XXXtakeanequalproportionin….
从小到大描述数据:
followedby
Eg.44%ofoursalesincomecamefromUS,followedbyEurope,and
southAmerica
排序的描写:
ranked/2;Thesecond/thirdlargest…;beinthe
first/second/thirdplace.
10.表示预测的句子;belikelyto…/isexpectedto…./issupposedto…/isestimated
to../isprojectedto…/will/willbe
11.叙述受访者态度
XXXreceivedXXpositiveresponsesandXXnegativeresponses..
XXpeoplegaveapositiveresponse/commenton..
Askedabout….,XXpeoplerespondedpositively/negativelywhereasXX
peoplesaysthnegativeaboutit.
XXofxxrespondentscomplainedabout….whileXXthoughitpositively,
/thoughtittobesatisfactory
12.Distribution
xx%,morethanhalfXX,XXoutofXX…
therespondentsarealmostequallydividedbetweenXXXandXX
XXandxxxtakeasimilarproportioninXXgroup/range
13.dataandcompare的中心句
Thecompanyemploysalmostanequalnumberofexecutivesofbothsexes.However,thereareremarkabledifferencesdependingontheagerangeconsidered.
TheoverallresultofthisinternationalsurveyonplannedITexpenditureforthenextyearshowssignificantdifferencesbetweenEuropeandAisa.
ThesituationinXX,however,isquitedifferent.
however,theXXvarygreatlyontheXX…
篇二:
BEC高级作文指导
商务英语BEC高级写作部分综合指导
写作部分
BECHIGHER写作部分主要涉及商业信函和图表写作两部分的内容,现具体介绍如下:
商业信函
第一章格式问题
1.格式问题:
请同学们在BEC的写作中采用平头式的写法。
收信人的姓名和地址置于信纸的左上方
地址、称呼和结束礼词后没有标点符号
日期在右上方
段落从定格开始,段落之间的行距为两行(但在考试中由于受答题卡限制,请同学们酌情考虑)
写信人的名字和头衔在签名下方
2.称呼和结束礼词的注意事项:
称呼的写法遵循下列原则:
DearSirorMadam写信给某一公司,不确定具体的收信人
DearSir对男士,但是你不知道他的具体姓名DearMadam对女士,但是你不知道他的具体姓名
DearMrSmith对男士
DearMsSmith对已婚或未婚的女士
DearMrsSmith对已婚女士
DearMissSmith对未婚女士
DearJohn对朋友或你比较熟悉的人(通常为多年生意伙伴)
称呼与结束礼词存在对应的关系,请同学们特别注意:
DearSirorMadamYoursfaithfully
DearMr/Ms/Mrs/MissSmithYourssincerely
DearJohnBestwishes
以下均为错误用法:
DearMrJohn
DearMrJohnSmith
3.