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雅思写作65分学习笔记

7.14

雅思作文：

小作文：

三分之一分数150-180字

大作文：

三分之二分数250-280字

如何1+1>2？

1、记笔记：

速记自查

2、看参考书

写作胜经：

P11533篇非常重要，看内容不看结构

00-12年写作机经：

每天四道，P2808.1.10至最后

读话题，找考点

看题型，定结构

划核心词，定同义、近义词

T2解题步骤：

1、审题：

话题题型核心词

2、思路：

必须一分为二

3、结构：

4/5段，prefer4段

4、表达：

话题考点

话题：

教育

社会

科技传媒

国家政策

题型：

1、让步反驳3-7douagreeordisagree

2、平衡写5-5discuss

3、问题解决（PRS）

4、组合题

评分标准：

Content：

whatwhyhow

Organization：

衔接词

Vocabulary

Grammar：

18-22句话，7种不同句型

EX:

studyinanothercountry

1、论点-7分-一心一意

Agreatmanyadvantagescanbeseenfrom…

Firstofall,thesedevelopedcountriesarehometosomeofthemostprestigiousuniversitiesintheworld,suchasCambridgeandOxford.

Inthissense,XXXcannotonlyofferthebestacademicenvironmentbutalsoadvancededucationalfacilitiestoXXX,which,bycontrast,mightnotbeeasilyobtainedfromtheirdomesticstudy.

2、衔接完善

Secondly,XXXcouldhighlybroadenXXhorizon,thisismostlybecause,XXXwouldgainknowledgeofanotherculture,lifestyle,value,evenattitudeoflife,leadingtoXXX.

衔接词：

大S顺序：

Tostart/beginwith,second,whatismore

Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inaddition

小S表因：

Thisispossibly/partly/mostly/mainlybecause

Dueto/owingtothefactthat

小S表果：

Leadto,asaresult

Bringabout,resultin

Trigger,generate

3、词汇

①近义互换：

Benefit/drawback

Advantage/disadvantage

Strength/weakness

Positive/negative

Merit/demerit

Blessing/curse

②词性转换

Consider

Afteraconsidereddiscussionofbothviews

Lackofconsiderationofothers

Howconsiderateyouare!

Aconsiderablenumberoffindingsshowthat

③形副出没

Solveproblem

Thetough/urgent/pressingquestion/challengecanbeeffectivelytackledby

“极其非常”：

Highly

Extremely

Definitely

Absolutely

Vital

Essential

Significant

“仅仅，只是”：

Simply

Merely

Nothingmorethan

4、语法：

①Therebe表状态、趋势

Thereisanabundanceofevidencetosupporttheideathat…

②itis强调句

Itiswidelyacceptedthat…

Itisundeniedthat…

Itisanundeniablefactthat…

③被动

Shouldneverbeneglected/denied/underestimated

④虚拟语气

Financialaidcouldbeoneofthemostpractical/reasonable/usefulmethodsto

⑤名词+插入语+morelikelytodo

Studyingabroad,asfarasI’mconcerned,islikelytobeanextremelysignificant…

Reading,generallyspeaking,wouldbemorelikelytocultivatechildren’screativityandimagination.

插入语：

Although

Indeed/surely/certainly

Needlesstosay

Tomyknowledge

⑥the+比较级，the+比较级

Themorepassionwehave,themorehappinesswearelikelytoexperience.

⑦and连接两个简单句

Possiblereasonsleadingtothismatterwillbecarefullyexploredandeffectivesolutionswillbeobtainedaccordingly.

题型一：

辩论型

让步反驳3-7Agreeordisagree

背景+作者观点

让步

反驳

重申作者观点

平衡写5-5胜经P30

背景+双方观点+作者目的

观点A

观点B

亮明作者观点

题型二：

PRS

背景+作者目的

原因1

原因2

提出解决方式

题型三：

组合题

背景+目的

分析原因

给出观点

提建议

先问观点，再问其他无关紧要问题：

背景+目的

让步

反驳

回答第二问

T2文章分布：

全文250字，18-22句

1、首段2-3句话

题目改写：

Inrecentyears/Overtherecentdecades,aheateddebateaboutXXXhasdrawnthepublic’sattention.

PublicattentionhasbeenledtoXXX.

Inthepastdecades,XXXhasbecomeoneofthemostheatedfocusesofdiscussionanddisputesacrossthewholecountry.

双方观点（平衡写时才有）：

Somepeoplewelcometheideathat…

Whileothersholdaratherdifferentopinion

作者目的：

Inthisessay,bothviewswillbetakenintocarefulconsiderationandmyownconclusionwillbedrawnattheend.

Thisessaywillcompareandcontrastitscontroversy.

开头举例：

11.1.8

Theeffectsofusingrobotshavedrawnmanypeople’sattentioninrecentyears,

Somepeoplefirmlybelievethatit’svitalforhumanbeing

Whileotherholdanoppositeidea.

10.11.6

Nowadays,thereisaperceptionheldbyincreasinglymorepeoplethatit’sdefinitelyvitalforstudent’stostudyatschooluntiltheybecomeadult.

Formypart,Ifindmyselfincompleteagreementwiththisidea.

However,Iholdoppositeattitudetowardthisview.

11.2.26

Thereareagreatnumberofpeopleproposingcurrentlythatit’sdefinitelysignificantforcentralauthoritytoprovidefoodforitscitizensratherthanimportingfromothercountry.

2、尾端2-3句

重申总论点+强调作者观点

提建议或解决方法

3-7

Allinall,basedontheabovediscussion,I’mfirmlyconvincedthattheideaof…ismorerationalthan…especiallywhenXXXhasbeentakenintoconsideration.

5-5

Tosumup,theissueofXX,frommyownperspective,depends/reliesontheactualsituationinvolvedifXXXwould/should/might

尾段举例：

11.2.7

Allinall,theissueofhowtotravel,frommypersonalview,dependsontheactualsituationinvolved,

Ifpeoplehavetimeandmoney,goingtothedestinationinpersonwouldbeabetterchoicewhenXXisconcerned.

7.17

3-7让步论点：

诚然：

Certainly,thereareseveralobviousreasonsforpeopletosupporttheviewthat…

It’snotdenyingthatthosewhoopposetotheideaalsohavetheirreasonstosomeextent.

反驳：

Bycontrast,peopleholdingtheoppositeideaareoversimplifyingthesituation.

Conversely,it’snotcompletelytruetosaythisviewisalwaysgoodorbeneficial/badorharmful.

5-5论点：

Ontheonehand,it’sunderstandableforpeopletobelievethat

Ontheotherhand,it’salsoreasonableforpeopletosuggestthat

It’sdefinitely/completelytruetosayXXtosomeextent.

小S论据：

解释：

见“原因”

递进：

近义词互换

Thatistosay

Inotherwords

BythatImean

Thereis,firstofall,aclearlinkbetweenhumanandenvironmentalproblems.

Thatistosay,wheneverhumanlives,theydamagetheenvironmentinsomeway.

举例子：

Toillustrate

Todemonstrate

Acaseinpointthat

Wecanfindplentyofevidence,frommyownschool/work/lifeexperience,tosupporttheviewthat…

完整主体段框架：

Foronething,foranother

TS:

theideaofXXiscomprehensive.

大S:

firstandforemost,

小S:

Putitinanotherway

大S:

moreimportantlyandpractically

小S:

XXcouldserveasaperfectexample.

Hence/thereby,thereasonsofXXareeasiesttonote.

第三节：

教育类话题

考点：

1教育的目的和方式

2选课

3老师的不可替代性

08.9.6

有两件事情的题目：

首段2句背景+观点

让步4句父母好

反驳3句父母差

反驳5-7句老师全好

结尾2句再次表明观点+提出意见

Genesdemonstrateapowerfulinfluenceon…

Thelatestsurvey,relatingtoXX,hashighlightedthatXX

Thetraitsweinheritedfromparents,applyaconstantaswellasrepetitiveandprofoundimpacton…

Aconsiderablenumberoffindingsshowthat

XXspendgreataboutoftimelivingwithXX,whenlifestyle,custom,attitudeandvalueoflifeareformed.

老师——传道：

1、了解教育心理学

Haveabetterknowledge/understandingofeducationalpsychology

Exploitone’snaturalresourceswithoutdestroyingthem

2、专业教育方式

Possessexpertiseinteachingmethod

Continuedteachingandguidedpractice

老师——授业

1、吸收-传递-促进

Stimulateone’sinterestsinasmarterway

Passonaseriesofsocialskills

Promoteteamworkspiritvia

2、教导-培养

Educatevalueandattitude,rightandwrong,goodandevil

CultivateXXtobecomesociable,outgoing,optimisticandtolerant

老师——解惑

1、教育者+父母

Adualroleisinevitablycarriedoutby…

XXXshouldertheresponsibilityofnotonlyaneducator,butalsoamentorintakingcareof…

2、心理辅导师

Canbegroupedinto

09.10.8P118

自学的好处

Easefinancialburdenimposedby…

Learnhowtoexploitanddeveloptheirtalentattheirownpace

Developfastersocially

第四节：

社会类话题

考点：

1、家庭；老人P119、P129

老龄化人数增多

好处：

Experienced

Socialharmony

坏处：

Laborforcesshortage

Army/military/policeforce

Financialpressureforyoungsters

3、抽象

①Whatishappiness?

具体问题具体分析

11.11.26

Spiritual—permanent,eternal,ever-lasting

Material--temporary

②过去现在将来

Unpredictable

Practical

③竞争

好处：

Motivation=drivingfactor

Progress

坏处：

Frustrated

Twistedvalue

4环保

⑤犯罪

⑥择业

手掌原则：

个人家庭学校（单位）媒体政府

犯罪考点：

犯罪原因

解决措施

1.PRS首段：

2-3句话

TherecentissueofXXhastriggeredseriousproblems

Thereareprobablyseveraldirectreasonsleadingtothissituations

Thefollowingcontentrepresentsmyviewonwhythecaseisandhowtotackleit.

2.PRS主体段——分析原因

Chiefamongthecausesisthat

Anothercontributingfactoristhat

3.PRS尾段——解决措施

Allinall,wehavenochoicebuttotakesomefeasibleactionsasfollows

Onetobetakenisthat

AnotheronecouldbeadoptedisthatXX

犯罪原因:

Crime

手掌原则应用：

个人：

Lackingofself-controlability,canbeeasilyinfluencedbynegativeeffectsfromoutsideworld,tobemorespecific,

家庭：

Unsuitable/improper/inappropriateparenting

Domesticviolence

Physicalpunishment

Psychologicalnegligence

学校：

Focustoomuchonacademicachievement

Qualitiestobearesponsiblepersonarenotvaluedatall

媒体：

Violent/pornographicscenes

Poisonone’sminds

Triggerviolentimpulse

政府：

Gapbetweentherichandthepoorisincreasinglywide

Itisnoeasytasktoadapttotherapidlychangingworld

7.19

08.1.12

监狱、刑期正面作用

维护-补偿-预防

Maintainthelaw

Ensurevictimsandtheirrelativessomecompensation

Furtherdeterpotentialcrimes

择业考点：

①男女

男女性别描述：

女性：

Bettercommunicator

Considerateandendurant

Patientandgentle

Subtlenessandempathy

男性：

Physicaladvantage

Borntobeadventurous

Haveinstinctofbeingactivelyaggressive

②老少

③收入高低

④长期vs.临时

第五节：

科技传媒类话题

1、总体影响

2、传媒力量

Profit-driven

Exaggerate

Conceal

3、现代/传统

TS:

Thereareagreatnumberofbenefitsof…

Thecomfortableuseof…undoubtedly/surelybringsnumerousunprecedented/exceptional/extraordinarybenefitsto

大S：

铁路的优点——改变生活

Inthepastdecades,manypeople,suchasbusinessman,commutersandevenpoliticiansrealizedthatrailways,withtheirpowerandspeed,weretransforminglives

Putitinanotherway,youcouldbatheintheseaatBrightoninthemorning,andyoucouldhavelunchinLondon.AndyoumightbeinNewmarketforaracemeetingintheafternoon.

小S：

铁路的优点——便捷

Andallthesehavebeenensuredwiththeprevailinguseof…,whichenables…tomaximizetheirsocialopportunities.

Overcomegeographicalbarriers

科技的缺点

TS：

Conversely,XXalsoresultsinso