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英语四级经典范文

1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

　　2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

　　3.我的建议

　OnlineShopping

　　Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.Manyindividualsfavorthiskindofshoppingbecauseofitsease.Butlikeanyothernewborndevice,peoplemayunconsciouslyexposethemselvestothethreatfromitbyincaution.

　　Forthosewhoworkforlengthyhours,theinternetoffersthemmuchconvenience.Firstofall,theydonothavetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersallowsorderstwenty-fourhoursaday.Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesoftheproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.Inmostoccasions,theitemsarecheaperthanonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.

　　Whiletherearenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregardingthiswayofshopping.Informationsecurityisthekeyconcern.Onlinepaymentmaynotbesosecurebecauseofidentitytheft.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.

　　Inmyviewpoint,onlineshoppingisadouble-edgedsword.Buyingonreputedonlinestoresisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.

电影和电视对公众的影响力

　　【题目】

　　Howdomoviesortelevisioninfluencepeople’sbehavior?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

　　【范文】TheInfluenceofTelevisionandMovies

　　Thereisnodoubtthatwatchingtelevisionandmoviescaninfluencethewaythatpeoplebehave.Moreover，itseemsthatpeoplearespendingmoreandmoretimewatchingsomesortofvisualentertainment，whetheritistelevision，avideotapeoraDVD.Therefore，theeffectsofvisualmediacannotbeignored.

　　Oneobviouseffectofthesemediaisthatwatchingtheminducespeopletobuycertainproducts.Televisionadvertisingiswidespreadand，nowadays，evenmovietheaterspermitadvertisements.AnotherwayTVandthemoviesaffectpeopleisthattheygivepeopleeitherabroaderviewoftheworldoradistortedone，dependingonwhattypeofprogramtheywatch.Thosewhowatchnewsandeducationalprogramcanlearnmanynewthingswhilethosewhowatchprimarilyentertainmentshowsmaycometobelievethatmostpeopleintheworldpossessgreatwealthandgoodlooks.Itmaymakethembecomedissatisfiedwiththeirownlives.Finally，perhapsthemostsusceptibleviewersarechildren，whomaybeunabletotellfactfromfictionandmaytrytoimitateactsthattheyseeonTVorinthemovies.

　　Withtheever-increasingpopularityofvideoentertainment，societymustpayattentiontotheseeffects.Televisionandmovies，whileentertainingandinformative，cannottaketheplaceofrealexperience.

（一）FirePreventiononCampus

1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失

2.分析火灾发生的原因

3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生

●审题概述●

这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。

开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。

第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。

【范文】

FirePreventiononCampus

Peoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampusfiresinrecentyears.Ineachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported–houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?

”

Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents’useofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhighshouldthewaterinthebottleboildrywhilenooneisaroundtoturnoffthepower.Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc.

Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:

First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher.Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.

◇第一段思路点评：

概述并引入下文

◇语言点提示：

（1）此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?

常可作为过渡句，引出下文

（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如arealarmedby，werereported，wereburneddown，weredamaged，Facedwith。

◇第二段思路点评：

论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂◇语言点提示：

electricwater-heaters电热水器

◇第三段思路点评：

详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。

◇语言点提示：

takeprecautions采取预防措施

fireextinguisher灭火器

（二）EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts

1.校园盗窃案件时有发生

2.物品被盗的原因

3.学生如何加强防盗意识

●审题概述●

这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。

第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。

第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。

第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】

EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts

“Ifyoudon’twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you’dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangingwidelyfrombikes,cellphones,purses,pre-paidICcardstosunglasses,bags,andevenunderwear.Inshort,anythingthatworthadimeislikelytobestolen.

Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?

Thereasonsarenothardtofind.ButIbelieveofallthesereasons,thelackofanti-theftalertnessisthemostimportant.Forlackofalertness,thestudentstendtoleavethedoorsandwindowswideopenduringsleepatnoonoratnightinsummer.Forthesamereason,they’llalsoleavetheirbikesunlockedbeforeastoreorbyaroad,orforgettotakeawaytheirpersonalstuffbeforetheygooutoftheclassroomtomakeaphonecall.Theseactsundoubtedlyhaveincreasedtheirexposuretothelight-fingeredmonsters.

Inordertominimizepossiblelosses,thestudentsmuststayonguardinthefirstplace,asawarenessofthetheftsaroundoftenmakesabigdifference.Tobemorespecific,thestudentsshouldnothideanytemptingamountofcashinthedorm.Putitinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleaveanyvaluableitemsunattended.Takethemwhereveryougo.Inaddition,it’sadvisabletodevelopaneighbourhoodwatchprogrammewithotherstudentsinthedormandneighbouringdorms.

◇第一段思路点评：

陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

◇语言点提示：

itseemsthat此句型表示一种可能性

◇第二段思路点评：

说明被盗原因

◇语言点提示：

（1）Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?

此句引出下文

（2）anti-theftalertness防盗意识

（3）lackofalertness缺乏警惕

（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

◇第三段思路点评：

阐述如何加强防盗意识

◇语言点提示：

注意关联词语inthefirstplace，Besides，Inaddition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

（三）HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?

1.网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

2.很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

3.你对网络依赖症的看法

●审题概述●

本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。

第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。

第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。

第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。

【范文一】

HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?

IfaskedwhethertheInternetisthegreatestdiscoveryofthe20thcentury,myanswerwouldbeyes.TheInternethasdrawntheworldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife.

Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainwiderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetifthey’dseekinternationalcooperationorfunding.Commonfolkslikeusalsorelyonthecyberworldinvariousways,forcommunication,entertainment,bankingandshopping.

True,thepoweroftheInternetisallpervasiveanditsmanynegativeeffectsarealreadyvisible.Forexample,Internetaddictstendtowithdrawtotheirownfantasyworldratherthancommunicatewitharealperson.Childrenareexposedtoonlinepornographyandviolence.Internetfraudsareaneverydayoccurrence.Inviewofallthis,youareadvisedtousetheInternetwithwisdom.Keepitatasafedistanceandneverloseyourself.

◇第一段思路点评：

综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。

两个长句足矣。

第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。

◇语言点提示：

hasdrawn…,realized,andprovided此为谓语连动式的运用。

◇第二段思路点评：

详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。

◇语言点提示：

resortto借助、诉诸、求助于

◇第三段思路点评：

先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。

◇语言点提示：

（1）negativeeffects副作用、反面作用

（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者

（3）fantasyworld虚拟世界、虚幻世界

（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品

（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗

【范文二】

Asaprimarysourceofinformationaswellasanefficientmeansofcommunication,theInternetofferspeopleacolourfulandconvenientlife.Justbyclickingthemouse,wecanenjoyabrilliantandeasylifethatcouldnotbeachievedeverbefore:

shopping,makingfriends,contactingrelatives,lookingforjobs,downloadingmusicandmovies,conductingbusinessdeals,andfreelyairingouropinions.

Foritsconvenience,theInternethasattractedpeoplelikemagnetsandsomepeopleevenclaimthatitisindispensable.Tothem,lifecan’tgoonwithoutit.EverydaymillionsofpeoplespendhoursonendsurfingtheInternet.Theyareobsessedwithitsomuchsothattheyforgetmanyotherimportantmatters.

Asforme,Idon’tapproveofunrestrainedInternetreliance.AlthoughtheInternetisagiftofthetechnologicalrevolutionandablessingofthisinformationage,weshouldneverletitcontrolourlife.TheInternetabsolutelydoesn’tmeanthewholeworldtous.Instead,weshouldguardagainstitsnegativeeffects.TothoseInternetaddicts,Iwouldadd:

“Self-controlcanmakeorbreakyourlife.Withproperuse,theInternetservesyou;otherwise,itkillsyou.”

（四）CrazeforCivilServiceExaminations

1.现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务