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C.Mysentencessoundboring!
D.Itendtodotranslationswhilewriting.
E.HowmanywordscanIwritein30minutes?
Let’stakealookattheproblems:
a.被迫做翻译例:
HowIFinanceMycollegeEducation
Manypeoplesinordertheirsonordaughtertolearnmoreknowledgeatcollegehavetoworkhard.Ofcourse,westudentscanhavedifferentwaystogettuitionandfees.Wecanborrowmoneyfrombank,findapart-timejoboraskourrelatives.
Ihaveagoodfamily.Ibelievemyparentscansupportmystudy.Ihaveideatodoeverything.SoIthinkthetuitionsandfeespaidbymyparentsIfeelit’sthebestwayforme.IbelieveafterIleavecollegeIwillearnbigmoneytodoalotofthings.Certainly,Iwilllendtomyparents.
b.时态混杂例:
TheFirstDayIWenttoCollege
IalwaysrememberthefirstdayIwenttocollege.ItwasasunnydayandIwasveryexcited.Ihavearrivedatthecollegeintheafternoon.Everythinghadseemedfreshtome.Thecampuswasbeautiful.ThecollegeislocatedatthefootofaMountainandwassurroundedwithtrees.Totheeastofitwecanseeablueriver.
c.干脆写不出例:
FailureIsTheMotherofSuccess
Becauseweoftenfail.Nofailurenosuccess.Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardfailure.Failureisnatural.Ifwearenotafraidoffailure,itwillbecomethemotherofsuccess.Failureisveryimportant.Nopainsnogains.Failurecanleadtosuccess.
TheInfluenceofTV
Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,moreandmorepeoplewouldliketowatchTV.FromTVtheylearnalotofinformationandthefunnyprogramswillmakethemhappy.Needlesstosay,TVhasbecomepartofourlifeandithasagreatinfluenceoverpeople.
SometimesIwonderifIshouldwatchTV,withallitsshowsthatmakemewonderwhetherIexerciseenough,whetherIamslimenough,orwhetherItreatmypetswiththecaretheydeserve.NottomentionthehundredsofcommercialsthattrytomakemebelieveIneedthewaterpurifiertoremainalivesincethewaterIamcurrentlydrinkingisheavilypolluted!
Anditseemsthatweneedtotowatchshowsandfilmstoknowwhattosay,howtobe,howtoact.Wearesoaddictedtoallthisthatitalmostseemsthat,iftherewerenoTV,wecouldnotthinkonourown.
d.套近乎:
Traveling
1）Ithinktravelingisreallygoodtoeveryoneofus.Doyouagreewithme,mydearfriend?
2）Doyouliketraveling?
Probablyyouwillsay“Yes,Ilikeitverymuch!
”That’sright.
e.主题模糊。
例:
…AsIwasverytiredfromthejourneytothecollege,Iwenttobedearlierthanusual.Atmidnight,Isuddenlywokeup.Ifoundthattherewasnogateinthecollege.
f.乱用句型例:
1.Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentoftheeconomy…
2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Needlesstosay…
3.Firstandforemost…Lastbutnotleast…
4.Aseverycoinhastwosides…
5.Asweallknow…Asisknowtoall…
6.Wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat…
7.Themostobviousreasonforthisphenomenonisthat…
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（2）有用的句型
记熟一些有用的句型并多加操练，无疑有助于意思的表达和写作速度的提高。
一篇150至200字的考试作文约二十或三十多个句子。
而恰恰就是这些句子，成为作文扣分的重点。
有的作文虽内容较丰富，却因为句式表达失误，结果让人越读越糊涂。
有的因为随意乱打标点符号，叫人看半天也不知句子应从哪儿开始，哪儿完结。
还有的则句式呆板，从头到尾几乎一律是主语＋谓语＋宾语的结构，把人看得脖子发直。
例如：
IstillrememberthefirstdaywhenIwenttocollege.Itwasasunnyday.Ifoundthateverythingwasfreshtome.Allthefreshmenwereexcited,andIwasveryexcited,too.WhenIwasstudyingathighschool,Idreamedofbecomingacollegestudent.WhenIlookedartthemodernteachingbuildingsandthegrandlibrary,Icouldhardlybelievethatmydreamhadcometrue.
Thiswasagoodopportunity.Iwouldusetheopportunitytolearnagreatdealofknowledge.IbelievedthattheknowledgeIwasgoingtolearnwouldbeusefulformyfuturecareerandthesociety.ButIknewthatIwouldcomeacrossgreatchallengesincomingdays.Ihadtolearnhowtoovercomethedifficultiesinmystudyandlifeatcollege.
Thiswasreallyaturningpointinmylife.Iknewthatthestudyatcollegewouldbeoneofthemostvaluableexperiencesforaperson.Iwasdeterminedtoseizeeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofthethingswhichtheuniversitywouldoffertome.Iwouldprovemyselfaworthycollegestudent.Iwouldsurelyliveuptotheexpectationofmyparentsandourgreatcountry.
IstillrememberthefirstdaywhenIwenttocollege.Itwasasunnyday.Everythingseemedfreshtome.Liketheotherfreshmen,Iwasveryexcited.Whenstudyingathighschool,Idreamedofbecomingacollegestudent.Lookingatthemodernteachingbuildingsandthegrandlibrary,Icouldhardlybelievethatmydreamhadcometrue.
Thiswasagoodopportunity,anopportunityformetolearnagreatdealofknowledgeusefulformyfuturecareerandthesociety.ButincomingdaysIwouldalsocomeacrossgreatchallenges.Ihadtolearnhowtoovercomethedifficultiesinmystudyandlifeatcollege.
Thiswasaturningpointinmylife.Studyingatcollegewouldbeoneofthemostvaluableexperiencesforaperson.IfIcouldseizeeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofwhattheuniversitywouldoffertome,Iwouldprovemyselfaworthycollegestudentandliveuptotheexpectationsofmyparentsandourgreatcountry.
实用句型：
1.众所周知，地球上的生物正受到日益增长的工业污染的严重威胁。
2.我们不能忽视的是，一个人的孩提时代将对将来具有较大的影响。
3.人们普遍认为互联网在社会发展中将发挥更重要的作用。
4.现在，随着互联网的普及，越来越多的喜欢在网上交友。
5.不过，也有人认为网上交友坏处多于益处。
6.说到春节晚会，人们可能会有不同的看法。
7.当然，必要的营养对人体是有益的。
但营养过度却可能导致疾病。
8.无论技术如何迅猛发展，人的作用仍是第一位的。
9.我认为，电视和电影对人们的影响极大。
10.常识告诉我们，地球上的自然资源是不可再生的。
11.毋容置疑，我们在作任何结论之前都必须进行一番调查。
12.有人想当然地认为电话会取代人们的书信往来。
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16.有迹象表明，人们的购买能力正的提高。
17.不用说，经常参加体育运动，可使一个人具有强壮的体魄，良好的胃口，并延缓衰老。
18.总而言之，掌握一定数量的句型对写好作文会有很大的帮助。
SentencePatterns
1.Allthelivingcreaturesonearth,asweallknow,areunderthethreatoftheever-increasingindustrialpollution.
Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatallthelivingcreaturesonearthareunderthethreatoftheever-increasingindustrialpollution.
2.Whatwecan’tignoreisthataperson’schildhoodwillhavegreateffectonhisfuturedevelopment.
3.ThereisapopularbeliefamongpeoplethattheInternetwillplayanincreasinglyimportantroleinsocialdevelopment.
4.Atpresent（Currently）,withthepopularityoftheInternet,anincreasingnumyerofpeoplechoseto（preferto）makefriendson-line.
5.However,somepeopleargue（insist/hold）thatthedisadvantagesoffriendson-lineoutrweightheadvantages.
6.WhenitcomestotheGather-togetherofSpringFestival,peoplemayhavedifferentopinions.
7.Surely,//Admittedly,//Obviosly,Itistruethatadequatenutritionisbeneficialtoourhealth,butitisalsotruethatexcessivenutritionwillresultinillness.
8.Inspiteofthe
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