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满分文展示1：
The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.
Theopinionsonthistopicvaryfrompersontoperson.Oneinfourthinkthereissomuchofproductplacementthatlotsofpeoplefeelunsatisfiedwhentheywatchtheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeoplethinkproductplacementintheprogrammesgreatlyruinstheimageofCCTV,beauseitwillleaveabadimpressiononaudienceinandoutsideChina.Besides,nearlyonethirdofthepeopleholdtheopinionthatit’shardtorelatetheproductplacementtotheprogrammes,makingtheaudiencefeeluncomfortable.
However,thereare15%ofthepeoplewhothinkitishelpfulforthedevelopmentofCCTV.Andtherestthinkthereisnoneedforustobesostrictwithproductplacement.Afterall,it’sverynatural.
Personally,theproductplacementisreallydisgustingandCCTVshouldtrytoavoidit.
本文总体结构非常清晰，作者通过整合拼图，谈论对待广告的两大观点，最后陈述自己的观点，除此之外，作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫。
在开头，中间以及最后的结尾处，优美、地道的句式层出不穷，一些高级词汇相互响应，熠熠生辉，值得其他学生借鉴。
满分文展示2：
Accordingtothepiechart,wecansee15%ofthesurveyedpeoplethinkit’sdifficulttodevelopCCTVwithouttheproductplacement,becauseitcanprovideenoughmoney.Atthesametime,20%ofthemthinktheproductplacementispresentedintheprogammeinanaturalway.
Ontheotherhand,therestofthepeopleareagainstthemoveandtheyhavetheirownreasons.Nearlyonethirdofthemsaytheproductplacementhaslittletodowiththeprogrammes,whichreducestheirinterestsintheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeopleholdtheideathatthedisadvantagethatitruinstheimageofCCTVoutweighsitsadvantage.Besides,aquartercomplaintherearetoomuchproductplacementintheprogrammes.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,evenifit’scommontoseeproductplacement,Idon’tthinkitshouldappearinsomeprogrammesofartandculture.
本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力，首先作者能够很好地审题，通过图表找准信息，并且将文章结构安排地很合理，让读者一目了然，再次，作者在语言方面极具天赋，从开始的一个without的强调句，到非限制性定语从句，及后来的同位语从句，让读者目不暇接，一些高级词汇及过渡词的使用让文章更加完美。
标准范文：
Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammesnaturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.
However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.
Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprogrammes.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoaccount.
（二）
你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。
请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况，并发表你的看法。
少数同学赞成处罚乘客
大多数同学反对处罚乘客
1、减少交通事故，促进交通安全。
2、不乘坐醉酒司机的车，不仅是对自己的负责，也是对司机和路人负责。
1、乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒。
2、即使乘客知道司机饮酒，如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫，处罚乘客是不公平的。
你的看法：
DearEditor,
I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished.
Asmallpartofthestudentsapproveofitforthereasonthatononehand,thispunishmentcandecreasetheamountofthetrafficaccidents.Ontheotherhand,itcanimprovethesafetyofpassengersanddrivers.Besides,avoidingridinginacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisnotonlyresponsibleforus,butalsoforthedriverandpedestrians.
However,themajorityofthestudentsarestronglyagainstthispunishmentinthattheythinkithardforpassengerstojudgewhetherthedriverhasdrunkornot.What’smore,eventhepassengersknowthedriverhasdrunk,ifthedriverdoesn’taccepttheiradvice,it’sunfairtopunishthepassengers.
Personally,Ithinkpeoplewhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunishedbecausethepublic’ssafetyisthemostimportant.
作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达，先说明少数人赞成的观点，接着说明多数人反对的观点，最后给出作者自己的观点，并说明理由。
结构紧凑，要点全面，作者观点鲜明，理由具有说服力。
文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构，为文章增添了色彩。
ononehand,ontheotherhand,besides,however,what’smore,personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性。
Theminorityofthestudentswhoarefortheideathinkthatitcanreducetrafficaccidentsandpromotethesafetyoftraffic.Theyalsothinkavoidingtakingacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisanactivityresponsibleforpassengersandthedriverandotherpeopleontheroadaswell.
Onthecontrary,themajorityofthestudentsareopposedtoit.Thefirstreasontheygiveliesinthatpassengershavedifficultyfindingwhetheradriverisdrunken.Apartfromthat,evenifpassengersknowthatthedriverisdrunken,itisunfairtopunishthemwhenthedriverdoesn’ttaketheirsuggestionseriously.
Inmyview,it’strafficsecuritythatgreatlymattersandweshouldpunishthosedrunkendriversratherthanthepassengers.
该文的最大亮点是多处使用的复杂句式，体现作者娴熟的语言表达技巧。
Beopposedto,take…seriously等高级短语的使用亦为文章增添了色彩。
过渡词onthecontrary,apartfrom,evenif,inview,and等使用较为考究。
综合全文的这些特点，该理应为一篇优秀作文。
Theminorityofthestudentsholdtheopinionthatpunishingthepassengershelpsreducetrafficaccidentsandincreasetrafficsafety.Nottorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisnotonlyaresponsiblebehaviorforpassengersbutalsoforthedriverandotherpeopleontheroad.
Themajorityofthestudents,however,disapproveoftheidea,statingthatitisdifficultforcommonpassengerstoknowwhetherthedriverhasbeendrinkingornot.What’smore,evenifthepassengerknowsthedriverhasdrunkalcoholandhasattemptedtopersuadethedrivernottodrive,itisunfairtopunishthepassengerwhenthedriverdoesnotfollowtheadvice.
AsfarasIamconcerned,punishingpassengersaswellasthedriversisnotonlyunfairbutalsohardtocarryout.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
（三）
北京大学2010年将试行由中学校长实名推荐的招生改革。
被推荐的学生高考成绩可获得30分的加分。
2009年11月16日北大公布了39所有推荐资格的中学名单。
北大这一举措在全国引起了一场激烈的争论。
请根据以下要点给《中国日报》写一篇有关这场争论的报导，并表达你对这场争论的看法（至少两点）。
支持方意见
反对方意见
1、是改革当前高考制度的大胆尝试。
2、能确保高素质学生和有特殊才华学生进入一流大学。
3、促进中学重视学生的全面发展。
1、可能导致作假。
2、对全国那么多中学生不公平。
3、给被推荐的学生加分没意义。
1、……
2、……
满分文展示1
PekingUniversitywillenrollstudentsrecommendedbyhighschoolprincipalsthisyears.Therecommendedstudentswillhaveanextra30pointsaddedtotheirnationalcollegeentranceexamscores.PekingUniversity’smovehassetoffanationwidedebate.
Ontheonehand,somepeopleinfavorofitthinkthereisnodoubtthatPekingUniversity’smoveisaboldattemptofreformingtheeducationalsystem.Inaddition,itisalsoaguaranteeforoutstandingstudentsorthosegiftedinsomeaspectsthattheyhaveachancetobeadmittedintofirst-classuniversities.Besides,thismovewillencouragethemiddleschoolstopaymoreattentiontotheall-rounddevelopmentofthestudents.
Ontheotherhand,somethinktherearealotofdisadvantagesofthismove.Firstchancesarethatsomestudentstrytocheatbecause30pointsisagreatlureforthem.Also,itisunfairformoststudentsinmanyotherschools.
Personally,weshouldbalanceitsadvantagesagainstitsdisadvantages.Itisthecollegeentranceexaminationthatdecidesstudents’futuretoalargeextent.SoIdon’tthinkit’sagoodideaorpolicy.
文章三段式写作，层次分明，结构清晰，文章中大量地使用了一些高级词汇如：
reform,guarantee,beadmittedinto和balance…against等，另外，最后一段的精心安排，让整篇文章的风采升华到一个更高的层次，让读者不禁暗自赞叹。
满分文展示2
SupportersholdtheopinionthatbydoingthisPekinguniversityattemptstoreformthecurrentuniversityentrancesystembravely.Inaddition,thepolicycanmakesurethatthestudentswhohavegoodqualitiesorspecialtalentswillbeenrolledbyfirst-classuniversities.What’smore,it’salsoaneffectivemeasuretodrivehighschoolstofocusonthestudents’all-rounddevelopment.
Onthecontrary,thereisanothervoice.Theseobjectorsarguethatthereisnopointincarryingoutthepolicy.Firstly,itmayleadtocheating.Besides,it’sagainsttheprinciplethattheuniversitiesentranceexamisheldonanequalbasis.Soit’sunfairtootherstudents.Andtheythinkthereisnoneedtogiveextrascorestotherecommendedstudents,mostofwhomareexcellentstudents.
Frommypointofview,Ithinkit’swellworthhavingatry.Afterall,it’sagreatleapinreformingthecurrentuniversityentrancesystem.
读完此篇作文，心中不禁感叹作者良好的英语语言驾驭能力，作者在文中简约有序地组织表达了所有的内容要点，用词精确谨慎，所选句式难易交错，固定句式及地道的短语赋予了文章别样的风采，在文末水到渠成地用了一句it’swellworthhavingatry表达了自己的观点，精彩圆满地完成了写作目标。
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PekingUniversitywillenrollstudentsrecommendedbyhighschoolprincipalsthisyear.Therecommendedstudentswillhave
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