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考生只要花三五分钟做一下构思即可,即想象一下每段大致写什么,可以记几个关键词提示自己,在接下来的二十分钟里面按照这几个关键词提示的内容扩展就行。
一般来说,要求不少于150词的文章最好写到180到200词,就句子数目来说,如果分三段,每段也就三到五句话,平均四句一段。
那么整篇文章大约10个关键词就可以做好构思。
那些符合阅卷老师审美的作文模板
一、用于作文开头的万能模板:
1、Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat...随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……(绝对经典,绝对万能,尤其在紧张的头脑一片空白下使用也不失安全牌)
2、Manypeopleinsistthat...很多人(坚持)认为……(insist还是比较高大上的呢)
3、Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat...很多人似乎认为……(seemto委婉的说法,也是讨喜的一种说法)
二、引出不同观点的万能模板:
1、People'
sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat....However,othersbelievethat....人们对……的观点因人而异。
有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为……(varyfrom...to...经典搭配,亮出观点的时候适用。
)
2、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
(towards,亮眼词)
3、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...人们对……可能会有不同的见解。
(may委婉用法)
4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto...关于……人们的观点大不相同。
(asto用法较高级)
5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
(hold,亮点词)
三、得出最终结论的万能模板:
1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat...把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……("
takesthintoconsideration"
为固定搭配)
2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat...考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……("
Takeintoaccountsth"
再次提升了一个层次"
3、Hence/Therefore,we'
dbettercometotheconclusionthat...因此,自然我们得出以下结论。
。
(Hence,高级用法;
cometotheconclusionthat万能总结句型;
hadbetter,水到渠成的流畅感)
4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
("
thereisnodoubtthat"
万能经典搭配;
"
drawbacks"
与"
merits"
的使用提升档次)
5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout...Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之,我们没有……是无法生活的。
但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
(一般用于结尾,万能句式;
copewith的出现比较亮眼)
四、提出最终建议的万能模板:
1、Itishightimethatweputanendtothe(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
Itishightimethat"
后跟虚拟语气,即动词的一般过去式,表示“是做。
的时候了”或者“是不做。
的时候了”)
2、Itistimetotaketheadviceof...andtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof...该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
(注意"
Itishightime"
Itistime"
的区别,前者接被动语态,后者接"
todo"
3、Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof...毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。
+被动为固定搭配,也不会落入俗套)
4、Obviously,....Ifwewanttodosomething...,itisessentialthat...显然,如果我们想做某事,我们需要……(essential至少比important高级)
5、Onlyinthiswaycanwe...只有这样,我们才能...(Only+倒装,绝对经典的万能句式)
6、Itmustberealizedthat...我们必须意识到...(berealizedthat比werealized隔着1000个Ithink的差距)
五、英语四级作文预示后果万能模板:
1、Obviously,ifwedon'
tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat...willleadusindanger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险。
(还是蛮高级的用法)
2、Nodoubt,unlesswetakeeffectivemeasures,itisverylikelythat...毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则很可能会……(unless...,itisverylikelythat的使用还是比较容易让监考老师眼前一亮的)
3、Itisurgentthatimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation.应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
Itisurgentthat"
+被动固定组合,也是高分组合哦!
模板:
讨论观点类
(1)模版1
Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson_____.Somepeoplethinkthat_____,whereasothersarguethat__________.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat___________.Foronething,Ifirmlybelievethat___________.Foranother,_____________.Justthinkof________,who/which_______.
Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat______.Onlyif_______canwe_______,justasthesayinggoes,________________.
(2)模版2
Inrecentyearstherehavebeenmanyreportsof________.Itturnsanewchapterof_________inChina,andwillhavefar-reachingeffectsintheforthcomingyears.
Thebiggestbenefit,inmyeyes,isthat_______.Inaddition,_______.Finally,______________.
Apartfromthebenefitsmentionedabove,weshouldalsofaceseveralunavoidablechallenges.Inthefirstplace,_____________.Inthesecondplace,________.What’smore,_______________.Insummary,weshould_______________.
(3)模版3
Nowadaysmoreandmore______arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife,rangingfrom__________to_____________.
Thepopularityof_______willhaveagreatinfluenceon______.Ontheonehand,_________.Ontheotherhand,__________.
Toconclude,____________arejustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemay________.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldmakesensibleuse,alwaysbeingamasterinsteadofslavingofthem.
提出问题
1、模版1
Itisquitenaturalfor________toponderoverthequestionofwhetherto_______________.
Many_________willchoosenotto______________,generallyforthreereasons.Ontheonehand,___________.Ontheotherhand,______________.Mostimportantly,__________.Nevertheless,otherpeopleadoptacompletelydifferentview,thinkingthat_____________.
Moreover,theyfurtherarguethat___________.
Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthatthequestionquitedependsonpersonalchoice.Inmyowneyes,________.
2、模版2
Whentakingaboutwhether_____________,wewillbemostsurprisedtofndthatthepresentsituationisutterlycomplicated,Foronething,__________.Foranother,_________.
Threefactors,inmypointofview,accountforthisphenomenon.Firstandforemost,________.Secondly,____________.Lastbutnotleast,____________.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlybelievethat____________,onlywhen_____________.
3、模版3
Anationaldebatehassprungupon_____________.Manypeoplewelcomeitwithapplauseandenthusiasm,believingthat___________.
However,thosewhostronglyopposethe_________arenotamongtheminority.Theyholdthat______________.Moreover,____________.Inaword,______________.
Frommyperspective,________shouldbe____________.Ontheonehand,personallyIwouldarguethat_____________.Ontheotherhand,____________.Inconclusion,____________.
分析原因
(1)模版1
_________iscurrentlybecomingaserveprobleminChina,whichhappento________.Solongas________,___________willalwaysunsurprisingly________.
Whydoes________becomesorampant?
Firstandforemost,__________.Secondly,_________.Lastbutnotleast,________.Asaconsequence,___________.
Duringthelastdecade,therehasbeenasteadyriseinthenumberof_________.Indetail,________.
Threereasons,inmymind,accountforthissocialphenomenon.Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,_________.Inaddition,___________.Asaresult,__________.
Personally,Ifirmlybelievethattheproblemderivesfrom__________.Thus,ifthegovernmentmakerelevantpoliciesandtakerelevantmeasureto__________,theproblemcanbereadilysolvedin__________.
Nowadays,_________is/aredoinggreatharmto___________.
Whataretheincentivesthatdrivepeopleto_________?
Themostimportantfactorsshouldbe__________.Furthermore,________.Itdirectlyleadstothepatentandsalientharmfulnessthat________.
Consequently,itishightimethatthewholesocietyshouldcontributetothecollectiveeffortstoputanendto________.
解决办法
Many_________willchoosenotto______________,generallyforthreereasons.Ontheonehand,___________.Ontheotherhand,______________.Mostimportantly,__________.Nevertheless,otherpeopleadoptacompletelydifferentview,thinkingthat_____________.
Whentakingaboutwhether_____________,wewillbemostsurprisedtofindthatthepresentsituationisutterlycomplicated,Foronething,__________.Foranother,_________.
Threefactors,inmypointofview,accountforthisphenomenon.Firstandforemost,________.Secondly,____________.Lastbutnotleast,____________.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlybelievethat____________,onlywhen_____________.
However,thosewhostronglyopposethe_________arenotamongtheminority.Theyholdthat______________.Moreover,____________.Inaword,______________.
评论反驳类
Recentlyitseemsthat____________.MANYpeople,especially___________,thinkitwillcertainlydogoodto_____________because_____________.Moreover,_________.
Nevertheless,aftercarefulconsideration,Ihavetostatethattheaboveviewismorethanbiased,giventhefollowingreasons.Firstofall,____________.Besides,__________.Furthermore,__________.
Wecanseeclearlythatalthough_________maybringfavorableresults,therearestillproblemsconcerning_______.Itseemsnecessaryfor___________tomakeacarefulconsiderationbefore________.
(2)模版2
Untilrecentlymostpeopleholdhostileattitudestowards_______.Somepeopleviewitas_____________whileothersconsiderit____________.
Recentresearch,however,showsthat___________isofgreatbenefitinmanyrespects._________,scientiststellus,_____________.Surprisingly,____________also_______.Themostremarkablethingabout_______isthat_______.
Nowwecandrawtheconclusionthat_______.Istronglyadvocatethatweshouldmakegooduseofitto_________.
(3)模版3
Incurrentsociety,wecomea