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that
人们普遍认为Itisgenerallyagreed/believedthat
越来越：
be
increasingly
+
adj.,
on
the
rise,
growing
number
of
万能理由（Omnipotence）
1.
方便：
convenient/
convenience
2.
效率：
efficient/
efficiently/
efficiency
3.
节省和浪费：
save
time/
money/
space;
economical,
thrift;
waste
costly,
lavish
4.
人的心理健康：
independent,
cooperative,
competitive,considerate,
confident,
creative,
sociable,perseverance;
selfish,
isolated,
conservative
5.
人的身体健康：
health,
disease,
strong,
strength,
energetic
6.
娱乐：
colorful,
pleasure,joy,
recreation,
entertainment,
relax,
tired,
boring,
lonely
7.
环境：
environment,
pollute,
poisonous,
dirty
8.
安全和危险：
safe,
danger,
risk
9.
经验：
experience,
social
enter
society
10.
人际：
humane,
fair,
unfair,
help,
assist,
freedom,
freely
写完之后修改注意：
（内容方面尽量不要修改）
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数来源
实例一
题目：
Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：
（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及
（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途
Score:
14
BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.
注：
1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。
:
考
2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。
3．Almostadv.几乎，差不多
3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。
Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.
注：
1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。
2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于
3.First,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词
4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive
5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）
6.Moreover表示递进
Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.
promising有前途的apromisingyoungman
11
Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.
第一句应该用therebe结构
Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.
IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.
I、对比观点选择题：
1.有人认为……;
2.另外一些人认为……;
3.谈谈你的观点和看法。
（最好写成4段）
实例二99年6月真题
ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?
Outline:
1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法
Howshouldweread?
Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?
Everyonehashisownview.
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.
Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'
ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.
Who’sright?
Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
（启）ParagraphI：
（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;
（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
14分
Everyonehashisownview.（启）
第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解
（承）ParagraphII：
（1）提出一种观点或优点;
（2）本段的支持性分论点;
（3）本段总结（可以省略）。
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.（承）
1.本段总分总结构
2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat
3.withthedevelopmentof...随着……的发展
4.what'
smore递进关系，moreover
5.bad=pornographic色情的&
violent暴力的
（转）ParagraphIII：
（1）承上启下的过渡句;
（2）提出另一种观点或缺点;
（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。
ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.（转）
1.But转折词（信号词）
2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat
3.today'
ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比
4.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge;
获取知识acquire/getknowledge
5.knowsnothing→little;
hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉
（合）ParagraphIV：
（1）平衡两种看法;
（2）给出自己的观点。
Who’sright?
Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.（合）
11分
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
结构非常好，可以套用。
Thosepeople，whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
1.“people,who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。
2.asmanyasbadbooks改为asmanyasbadones
3.leadustothewrongway改为leadsb.astray
4.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat
5.touch碰（闪光点词汇：
如教材P7：
shoulderingtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩负起责任）
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
1.hold认为同样表示“think”的词还有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,hold
2.thebestbook在西方国家是“圣经”的意思
3.toknowmore,toreadmore错误，中式英语
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessingoraCurse?
Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople’slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingoracurse.
itisgenerallyacceptedthat人们通常认为
Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,thestrangestcustomsandthemostattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightintoone’sroom.试大-英语四级考试注：
1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople=Somepeoplethinkthat
2.“使……”不用make，而用keep,allow,offer
However,otherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoroneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtogettingtheirinformation,educationandentertainmentfromtelevisionthattheirliteracyaswellasphysicalabilityhasbeengreatlyweakened.Evenworsethanthat,vulgarcommercialsandindecentprogramsmaycultivatetheirbadtastes,distorttheirviewpointstowardshumanlifetosuchadegreethattheirmindsmightbecorrupted.
Insummary,televisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,televisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetosociety.
范文5.Travelling
Peoplewholiketravellinghavetheirreasons.Theymaintainthattravellingcanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofknowledge,especiallygeographicalandhistoricallearning.Theygoontopointou
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