比较和对照的英语写作方法.docx

比较和对照的英语写作方法.docx

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比较和对照的英语写作方法

ComparisonandContrast

比较和对照的写作方法

．目标、重点和难点目标：

掌握英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法（比较着重相似点，而对照强调不同之处）；重点：

熟悉比较和对照写作方法的特点、模式及相关写作语块（词组、结构及句子）；难点：

训练学生对作文主题的思维拓展以及相关语言表达的总结。

．使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文，常见的比较对照有两种方式:

1.块状比较方式（blockmethod）,先A后B，即A1,A2,A3...;B1,B2,B3…。

2.逐点比较方式（point-by-pointmethod），AB交错，即A1，B1；A2，B2；A3，B3...。

范文一：

CountryLifeandCityLife

Itisreallyhardtosaywhichisbetterthantheother,citylifeorrurallife.Bothhavetheirmeritsandshortcomings.

Livinginthecityhasagreatmanyadvantages.First,youcanenjoyvariouskindsoffoods,bothforeignanddomestic.Second,therearemoreculturalactivitiesinthecity-youcangototheconcert,thetheatre,themoviesorthediscoclubafterada'yshardwork.Butcitylifehasmanyproblems,too.Theovercrowdedpopulation,trafficjam,industrialpollution,andthelackofunderstandingbetweenpeoplemayresultindiseaseandunhappinessL.ivinginthecountry,however,youcanwatchthemagnificentsunriseandsunsetandlistentothebirdsinginginthetree.Ifyouwant,youcancertainlyhaveahugegardenwhenasmallgreenspaceseemsaluxuryinthecity.Inthecountry,youdon'thavesomucnworries.Youcanenjoythepleasureofworkbyplantingseedsintheearthandwatchingthemgrowintoflowersandfinallyintofruitsorfood.Butrurallifemaynotbethatperfect.Thingsaregoingsoslowlythatsometimesyoumayfeelthatyouareabsoluteleftbehindinsomeremotecornersoftheworld.Youmayagainmisstheparties,friendsandmoviesinthecity.

Likeanythingelse,countrylifeandcitylifehavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Thebestsolutionmaybethatyouenjoypleasuresofbothlivesandgetridoftheirinconveniences.

范文二：

MiddleSchoolLifeandCollegeLife

Therearemanydifferencesbetweenmiddleschoolandthecollege.First,inmiddleschool,wehavetolistentowhattheteachersaysinclass,tounderstandthecontentofthetext.Butincollege,wemuststudybyourselvesbeforeclass.Ifno,twecouldn'tfollowtheteacher.Second,therearelotsofrulesinmiddleschool.Forexample,weshouldweartheuniform,thegirlsmusthavetheirhaircutshort,andwearenotallowedtomakeboy-orgirlfriends.However,incollege,wehavemorefreedom.Wecanweartheclotheswelike.Andthegirlscouldhavelongbeautifulhair.Wearealsofreetomakeboyorgirlfriends.Thethird,inthemiddleschool,wemuststudyfirst.ThatmeanswecoulddonothingbutstudyI.ncontrast,wehavetodoeverythingbyourselvesincollege.Thatmeanswemustplanourtimecarefully.Therearealsootherdifferencesbetweenourschoollifeandourcollegelife.Wehavetolearntoadaptourselvestocollegelife.

三.写作步骤

1.写前阶段：

写作提纲

1）对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析，找出相似点/不同之处。

如分析Onlineshopingorin-storeshopping（网络购物还是店内购

Advantages

Disadvantages

Onlineshopping

Convenient;

Cheap;

Alotofselections

Cheated;

Cannotseetheitemsinperson;

n-storeshopping

Personal,talk;Knowthequality;Goodforhealth

Expensive;Time-consuming;tiring

2.写作阶段：

利用相关资料，组织结构与内容

1）Usefulwordsandphrases:

比较:

like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.

对照：

bycontrast,onthecontrary,while,whereas,ontheotherhand,unlike,instead,but,conversely,differentfrom,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,incontrast.

2）Usefulexpressions

Justlikeacoinhastwosides,everythinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,and…isnoexception.

Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...

Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.

Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.

AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.

AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

AandBdifferinseveralways.

Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

ThesameistrueofB.

WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are...

Somesampleexpressions:

ThereareseverasimilaritiesbetweenAandB.

AandBhavethesameviewoftheworld.

AandBhavealotincommon

IncommonwithA,Bprefersmeattofish.

AresemblesBinthatAisalsointerestedincollectingstamps.

JustasAlikestobequiet,Blikestostayalone.

LikeA,Blikesoutdoorsports.

Alikesswimming.ThesamewithA,Balsolikesswimming.

AandBarethesameinthattheybothlikeswimminginthesea.

AandBhavethesameinterests.

Alikesswimminginapond;similarly,Blikesswimminginthesea.

BothAandBhavelonghair.

Alikesfishing.Blikesfishing,too.

Alikesswimming,sodoesB.

Somesampleexpressions:

UnlikeA,Blikesoutdoorsports.

IncontrasttoA,Blikesoutdoorsports.Di